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Chapter29.
Maybe we should…go now. Millie whispered in a hot breath against my neck.
I couldn’t have agreed more at such a superb suggestion. I had a feeling if we stayed any longer it would get more heated than an over heated sauna in the middle of the desert with no breeze or air conditioning.
As Millie dislodged her lips from my neck I planted my feet on the floor, hoping they would provide more stability than a plate of jelly; which was pretty much what they felt like right then.
Luckily I had the most considerate girlfriend in the world, either that or she was incredibly eager to get me out of that door and into bed. She placed her hands on my hips and held me tightly as I stood up, also balancing herself as she did this. She wrapped her arms around me from behind, nuzzling into my hair again. I turned round in her arms, only able to put up with so much sensory torture from the besetting brunette.
I slipped my hand round her neck and pulled her in for a steamy kiss, transferring the craving to be near her to my lips as they strove for dominance over her own. I had to remind myself that we were in public as I felt my hand become restless against the silky fabric of Millies dress. I didn’t know why it seemed so hard to control myself, it was as if my body was in horny over load. It knew exactly what journey of pleasure and satisfaction Millie could provide and my mind wasn’t even comprehending no as an alternative to yes. Neither could it establish between appropriate public behaviour and very inappropriate displays of affection. For it seemed as though the people which had attended this posh and highly regarded dinner had supplemented ***** for art and therefore distinguished all respect for love and probably hadn’t even experienced the feeling of lust since the eighties. So the fairly innocent make out session Millie and I were engaged in, which might have been bordering on foreplay, was in fact offending half the room and turning on feelings which had laid dormant for years in the other half of the room.
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Hey Kat!!
you cannot stop writing this story, I remember when chapter one was posted and I was the first one to comment and I cant believe we are at 29 chapters already!!! and it looks like chapter 30 is gonna be a doozy :P !!!! Thanks for all the wonderful stories… u write and i will read i dont care wot it is! MWAH
Meow Pussy Kat! Even when they are not having sex, the chapters are hottt as hell baby!! hmmm only two people on that floor eh!! NIIICE! eagerly awaiting ch30!
You can’t stop. You just got hem in the room. Let get Trixie to the good old USA. love this by the way. thanks
You can,t be serious !!! How can You possibly consider stopping this beautiful love story? Please continueto write it.
please keep writing! i love this story! your writing is great and i wanna see if trix goes to cali! btw, your email name is priceless! :D
Kat I really enjoy your use of words, they are unusual but not pretentious. And if you are only 18 my God, you write so well now, I can’t imagine how good you’ll be in ten years.
just stumbled upon ur story last week. i think its my favorite. im 18 too and i can say that for someone my age u have a gift for describing feelings and emotions!!! please keep writing!!!!!
Hey Kat!! How could you even think about stopping this incredible story…..You write with such incredible depth and emotion with these two characters….Let’s see how their relationship progresses….
Please keep going:)….like i’ve said all along, you write and i will read!!!!!…Thank you for sharing this awesome story with us:)
please do´n´t stop the story. you write whith such passion and depth.