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Chapter32.
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The next couple of days passed by in an instant, looking back I wasn’t even sure they had taken place. Its true what they say, that time goes faster when youre having fun. I guess that was lifes draw back; you can have fun, but don’t take it for granted because it wont last long. Unfortunately this particular draw back was very true in my case, I didn’t have long with Millie at all. In fact I was beginning to count the hours until she had to leave and when the number of hours dropped below fifty, it was definitely no where near enough time.
Distractions helped though; spending copious amounts of time in bed together, taking long and languid walks in the park, eating ice cream…..off each other. These were the blissful and amorous activities of two people very much in love. Not that I had anything to compare it with but one thing I did know was that when a person falls in love there is no questioning it, no second thoughts about whether the emotion is real or not. There is just this unequivocal knowledge that all the feelings of friendship, trust, lust and honesty to name but a few, all rolled into one creates the impression of love. And it is then left up to the individual to either embrace it or evade it.
I was learning quick, these rules and regulations of relationships were nothing but a joke to me before I met Millie. Now I believed in them as strongly as I believed in her. Of course the question of whether love is a figment of the imagination which humanity thought up just so the world didn’t feel so lonely, was something I was still undecided about. It would take a bit more to completely erase the sceptic in me, especially when it came down to something so biased in the worlds opinion.
I felt sorry for Lizzie, whenever I was at the flat it was with Millie and we were always in the Do Not Disturb state of play. I knew she understood and was happy for me but I still missed her, I guess spending time with her would remind me just how much I didn’t want to live without her. Especially if it was to be in a different country, I didn’t want to take my best friend for granted just because I had met Millie. I had to keep reminding myself that Lizzie still went to work every day, came home to an empty flat and amused herself by watching really cheesy ***** on TV. And that I was the only person who had called in sick for a week at work, had met the love of my life and was enjoying their, usually naked company, all hours of the day.
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…sometimes so busy reading, leaving no time to comment ~ but that doesn’t mean you should stop writing :)
Kat, i think your fic is great…I have the same thing with my own fic…alot of people read but don’t comment…i just chalk it up to…they are in a hurry to read all of the favorite authors in a small amount of time…that sounds like a good excuse to me…and that is what i tell myself each time i see that 6 or 8 hundred people have read my fic but only 10 have commented…..take if from here……
I haven’t commented before, and haven’t really got a valid excuse…sorry, so i just thought i’d take this chance to tell you i love the story and the way you write, Lizzie makes me laugh out loud!
Aww Kat, im sorry u feel that way! U should have full confidence in ur writing as it is mind blowing! I dont know where in the world u are but im flying out to India tomorrow for a week and hopefully i can look fwd to coming back to another delicious chapter!
Hey and remeber u will always have at least on huge fan…ME :D Hugs
I read your story and I love it. But for be honest,in the beginning, may be for 2 or 3 chapters, I wasn’t very interested. But and I don’t know why, after I read it with pleasure. Also, I don’t comment often because if I read english easily, I write it very bad. But I’ll love write some comments.
Ok guys Im v v v v v v v overwhelmed by this response. You dont know how much it means to me that there are people out here who actually want to read my story and enjoy it.
All I can say is thanku.
So thanku! k xx
I really like your work even though I don´t comment on it. DON`T stop writing you have talent
I love your stories… I guess its the same thing with me… a thousand or so people read and only 20 or less leave comments… now considering I’m one of the most insecure writers here, I kind of let it pass for the sake of my own sanity… anyway don’t sweat, maybe everybody is just so busy with their reading that they forget to thank you for your work, that’s all… just keep going you’re doing great…
sorry, i have not commented before, but i have been reading your story from the start and am always very exited to see a new post from you as this is one of my fav fics
this is the first time, i have left a comment on any story cos i am always a little nervous about saying anything, but i think your story is worth it :)
keep going…please
Kat, well you know how i feel about your writing and ability….It is truly awesome, and i just hope one day you will really believe that……Another fabulous chapter…,Do i sense a bit of drama coming???….Bring it on…..LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT…..Thanks:)
awesome! keep goin and post soon! i love this story!
Ok..Im sensing ur from the U.K? Am l write Kat?..If you are..Im SOO proud ur flying our U.K Fanfic flag!!! Im soo sorry l haven’t posted before..but this story is TOTALLY the best on the site..Dont get me wrong..I love all the others..but there is something about the way you write..It leaves me in awe! Its so mature..intense.. beautiful..funny.. And you have a great sense of timing in the way you set out your story! Please carry on with this fantastic piece of writing..Coz it would be a crime if you stopped!! OK??! x
busted! i’ve gotten lazy lately but my enthusiasm for your writing hasn’t dimmed one bit. i love the story and am always excited to see you’ve posted another chapter. always a loyal fan. xoxo
This is my last comment for about 4 wks Love this story, I do comment so keep writing and make a lot of people happier. thanks
Hey Kat, I think your stuff is great. I have been reading and really enjoying it. Sorry I didn’t comment before. I started reading your stuff because it came highly recommended on one of the boards in
The Planet.
Alas I am all caught up, I am so disappointed there isn’t another chapter to read. Okay now we all know you are a great writer, so I just want to know if Trixie is going to call Millie on her pretty overbearing behaviour. What is so cool about your characters is that I can totally see it from Millie’s point of view, that she is proud of Trixie and wants to help her out. I so get that. BUT wow… she is definately being persumptious as well. As an artist your work is very private so to ambush Trixie like that I think lacked respect, she so should have warned her. Plus I love the comment that Trixie felt like arm candy and wife material. I so agreed with that. My question will Trixie confront Millie on this? Love the chapter totally interesting.
Hey, I just read all your stories and I really love them!! Thank you so much for an amazing tale, I find myself falling in love with Millie and Trix!! =0) Thanx again….