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Choices 5
Almost through the evening primping, Tina thought she heard a light knock at the door. As she was making her way to check, she heard a heavier knock. “Coming.”
Opening the door she found Karen dressed in a men’s style black tuxedo over a black silk t-shirt.
“Wow.” Karen was openly appreciative. “I’d feel underdressed if I thought anyone was going to notice me.”
Tina gave a playful frown. “You look nice.” She stepped back to let Karen enter, and closed the door. “I’m almost ready.”
“Almost?”
“Well, I wanted to do a couple touchups on my makeup.”
“If you’re doing makeup, then I can probably get away with this.” As she spoke she leaned closer. No question as to what ‘this’ meant, with Karen leaning in for a kiss.
A kiss that Tina returned in kind, but then pulled back. “I don’t want to make us late.”
To this, Karen gave a smile. “I appreciate your saving me from myself.” She followed Tina back to her bedroom.
Again, this made Tina wonder exactly what she was doing. But this was her idea. Not that she didn’t trust Karen, but the early stage of any relationship just had its own uneasy moments. By coming back here did that mean Karen was expecting more?
Then again, Karen didn’t seem shy in any way. She’d made herself quite clear that she desired Tina. It was a type of attention that she hadn’t had for a while. After all, when she was with Bette no one that knew either of them would have made a move on Tina.
Now she was back with women, and single. Being the subject of open attention was something totally new.
Karen sprawled on the bed, watching Tina as she finished her final primping.
“We’re not late, are we?”
“I don’t care,” Karen said, giving a laugh. “At this point, I could think of many reasons to not go at all.”
That comment made a blush rise on Tina’s face. She hoped that this wasn’t too obvious. “You promised to take me out tonight. I’m going to hold you to it.”
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(50 votes, average: 3.70 out of 5)
LMAO!!! This is great. You can cut the tension with a knife.
Tina knew she was playing with fire by going to the event, but showing up with the artist, heh, got Bette’s knickers in a twist didn’t it. Can’t wait to see how this progresses, I like Karen.
I think Dean Porter is jealous. Yeah continue.
Cool. Tight. I like.
Indeed, as I indicated previously, I’m glad that you’re writing a character that I’m happy to see Tina with and keeping Bette a snarly “i want it my way or no way” kind of gal. It makes me want to see Tina with someone else. A nice picture you paint of Tina with someone else. I’m curious if you’ll continue to have Bette continue to play jealous or if she’ll at least pretend to stop being the spoiled brat she always is. It’s in your hands…carry on at your leisure.
Bette has got her panties in a twist HAHA.Tina can sure land them alright… the fall out is going to be interesting,lol. great chapter :)
Most definitely. Can’t wait for the next post. Thanks.
Funny chapter. Like how you portray the characters!
definately continue dear…definately!
‘The glare coming from Bette let Tina know that, in some major way, she had just broken another unspoken Porter rule.’ – LOL
That was funny that Tina did not know that JK is actually Karen her date. Bette is a little upset but Tina did try to talk to her. Maybe Bette is not happy that Tina is not waiting for her to finish with jodi.
Jealous can really ruin a nice evening out/ thanks
I like a jealous Bette, but I do think that Tina needed to at some point at least blurt out the warning. Not really fair messing with your ex’s business, how would Tina feel if roles were reversed and it involved her work. I like that Tina isn’t waiting around, but I think it just hit the fan. Bring on the cold front cause things are going to get chilly!
Lol, that was priceless
Of course continue. I want to see Bette try and keep her impending tantrum in check. Karen might just keep the Dean on her toes. thanks!
Love, love this fic. You write Tina so well. I love the idea of Tina dating, and Karen sounds interesting. Love the tension with Snarly Dean Porter. Can’t wait to read the next parts!
TIBETTER THRU AND THRU HERE pps
Hey Pseud, Loved these last two chappies. Good to see Tina is having fun with Karen and being single. Best bit was Bette’s obvious jealousy. Just love to see her in a bad mood as Tina plays the field. Guess tha Bette really needs to get a grip of herself and decide who she really wants to spent her life with. I’m betting on Tina. I just want these gals reunited and loving each other again. Please make it so. More please and many, many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
who really is Karen? I can feel the drama, holalalalala Bette is jealous my good God. Can’t wait for the next post. Great story line
You writers and your “tbc?”s. You know we (I’m sure I’m not alone in this) want more of your writing. And I love how Karen is playing oblivious to Dean Porter’s jealous streak. Great stuff. More when you can, please.
just loved it. love the way your mind works. thx