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Alice let out a whimper and Tina breathed, "oh my God."
Shane was fighting back tears as she said, "fuck it, I’ll be there."
"Yeah, when is it?" Bette said.
"No guys, that really isn’t necessary," Dana said wiping a stray tear.
"We will be there Dana," Tina said.
"I’ll have my family light a candle for you, as a prayer to God," Carmen said trying to instill some hope into the situation.
"I’ll write you a short story," Jenny said with a smile.
"I can leave my manager in charge baby girl," Kit said, "I’ll be there."
Dana smiled back and said, "thanks guys, but it’s really nothing. You don’t have to do all of that."
"Alice," Helena said nudging the blonde who was still frozen in shock.
Alice immediately stood up in tears and walked around the table as Dana stood up, "I’m sorry Dana, I’ve done nothing but make your life harder."
"It’s okay Al," Dana said softly.
"I want us to be friends again, I wanna be there for you," Alice said.
Dana didn’t say a word, instead she let out a soft sob and pulled Alice into a tight hug. Everyone, even Lara, had to smile at what they saw. For Dana it was a tight hug of relief and comfort, but for Alice it was a hug of longing and hope.
"Come on," Dana said with a smile pointing to the bar, "we have some catching up to do."
They sauntered over to the bar and the rest of the gang focused on Lara. "Lincoln Private Hospital, Wednesday at 3pm," she said.
Tina wrote it down and Shane assured, "we’ll be there."
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"So, Shane and Carmen are leaving today," Max said circling the table where Jenny was on her laptop writing as usual.
Jenny looked at him for a moment, the fear and submissiveness was evident, "they’ll be back in a week."
"So we have the house to ourselves?" Max said with a smirk.
Jenny gulped and nodded her head.
"Are they coming back tonight before they go?" Max asked.
"They’re gonna come around 7 to say bye then go," Jenny answered typing louder to try to get Max to leave her alone.
Her plan didn’t work and Max continued, "that’s in about an hour." He leaned down nudged Jenny’s ear seductively, "we have time."
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I’m glad they’ll all be there for Dana. Max, well. Max is a prick, isn’t he? And the horrid incident with Bette’s college ex, that wasn’t really Jay’s story to tell. It seems that retelling isn’t going to be a factor that changes Tina’s mind, anyhow. Thanks for the update.
Oh God, Bette raped? That’s horror. My poor Bette. Well, in my head she’s mine. LOL. Max… I kinda understand it, he’s on testosterone, right? I don’t think it’s good, I just understand. PPS
Max should be horse whipped. Wow to what happened to be. PPVS
wow, this is insanity! There’s so much shit going on! First off, poor Alice is gonna get her heart broken worse, she’s getting her hopes up. Second, you need to kill Max. Testosterone or not, there is no excuse for rape! Third, damn Jay overstepped a boundary there, but at the same time he was helping. Maybe knowing what happened to Bette will at least change Tina’s mind about inviting Henry. I hate Henry.
Ok, remember the sperm donor night? Wasn’t that Bette’s idea? And don’t say because they were trying to have a baby, that’s still inviting a complete stranger into their intimate circle. Into the creation of their family. Thanks for the post
Poor Bette! Hope she and Tina find away to fix it without getting a random man in. I feel sorry for Jenny – Max need to whipped. Glad they will be there for Dana. Great story. thank you.
Great chapter. So sorry to know that Bette was sexually assaulted, at least that explains her feelings toward men in general. Jay shouldn’t have told Tina but Tina needed to know and Bette would not have told her. Now the ball is in Tina’s court, so to speak, and for her to make the right decision concerning men. If she continues to want to be with one, then she needs to leave Bette and get on with her life and explore whatever the hell she thinks she sees in men. I think she is making a terrible mistake at the risk of her marriage and also a personal mistake in leaving Bette. Their bank accounts and holdings in their portfolio is extensive and should be considered by Tina. They are not hurting for money, however, I don’t agree that Bette should take a job just to have one but, should take one in her field that pays well according to what she has earned in the past. That I believe would instill the trust and faith that Tina feels is lacking in their relationship. Feel sorry for both of them for the hell they are going through at the moment. Thanks.
Amazing story telling.
Leave her Bette.Leave her.How could she.
aww. poor Bette. she’s been through so much. her and tina need to sort their shit out. Max well he needs to be punched hard in the face. great story
I’m glad the gang will be there for Dane’s surgery. Jane should stand up for herself and kick Max out of her life, no one deserve to be treated like trash. Jay was wonderful but he shouldn’t tell Tina Bette’s story, I think Tina should persuade Bette to tell her herself.thank u for the update ;D
This is so sad and dramas here, poor everyone here, hope Dana gonna be ok and you not kill here, please someone help Jenny and kick max out of there hourse. Bette and Tina need to talk and work thing out, poor Bette and glad that Jay is there for her and glad that baster is dead. Please post more, thanks!