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Closure – Chapter 17
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“Around eight years.”
“Then I would guess you know her pretty well.” At Dana’s agreement to this statement, she continued. “When you come in Friday, I’ll give you some literature that may help you. But you really need to trust yourself and trust your instincts. You’ll know what she needs even if she doesn’t know how to express it.” The call ended shortly after that and Dana did some thinking.
Later that night, Dana and Alice were on the comfy sofa. Dana had gently coaxed her into watching a Project Runway marathon which was playing on TV. It was one of Alice’s favorites and she had not seen any of the current season. Dana was thrilled when Alice accepted. They were in the position they have been in so many times in the past — both as friends and lovers. Dana was sitting and leaning back against the sofa. Alice was lying with her head on a pillow in Dana’s lap and had her arms wrapped around Dana’s legs. OK. The pillow hadn’t always been there in the past. Sadly, the position this time was dictated by the soreness in Alice’s back. Dana was running her fingers slowly in Alice’s hair.
“What do you feel like having for dinner, Alice?” Dana felt Alice stiffen up and get flustered. “Umm… Anything is good. Just pick what you want. Anything is fine. Really.”
Dana inwardly cursed that bitch Jackie. She got Alice to a place where she didn’t even want to suggest something for dinner. No wonder she lost so much weight. The poor thing has had to analyze the possible results of everything she wanted to say or do beforehand.
Being friends for so many years, Dana knew Alice’s taste better than anyone. Hanging out in front of the TV meant Chinese take-out with extra egg rolls.
Dana waited for Alice to relax back into her and then picked up the phone to call their favorite delivery place. Alice heard and tightened her arms around Dana’s leg to give her a hug. Dana felt at that moment like she had just won Wimbledon.
Dana could not keep the satisfied smile off her face. She finished the order and relaxed back to watch the designers butcher menswear.
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“Pillow hadn’t always been there in the past?” haha. “felt like she had just won Wimbledon. That was sweet. Poor, poor A. You are doing an amazing job writing A with the battered wife syndrome, that she would seek permission for everything and had no mind of her own. I am glad to see A getting her rest and D being smart calling the doctor and updating the gang on the latest development. I really like this version of D, so calm, cool an collected as seen how she handled the phone call. Jackie planned to track A down? Oooouch! I think I need to ask HF asap to help you build the shed for the arsenal. MaGoose, I am glad to hear that you get the story unstuck, cause I really look forward to reading each and every chapter. THANK YOU!!!
OOOO second! I agree with the above ^ specially bout the Wimbledon bit at a simple leg hug =) sweeeeeet. Awww at A thinking she has to ask about everything. J sounds scary man, like hunter lady, come on the family kick her butt! Great post! PPS!
Saint dana!!! i got dana credit for being cool when jackie called!! i think jackie is going to be more diligent in her search for alice as she panics more from not hearing from alice. jackie is about to lose her control over alice… wonderful update :)
LOved it when Al hugged Danes leg sweet! Thanks again for the wonderful chapter,keep up the excellent work! PPS
Awww yay, you got unstuck! I’m glad, that’s such an awful feeling. And I think the post office misplaced my package…Dana might be in Timbuktu by now. :( But it was sweet of you to send her. I think the cold weather and the season are getting to me, but I’ll be fine soon. Especially if you keep posting, since I love this story so much.
Okay. Dana needs a pen to stab her in the throat so that bitch can’t talk. PEN is the weapon of the day. LOVE YOU MAGOOSE. Keep it up Babe
How can some one act so caring and loving,yet being so bruter and beating the stuffing out of Alice. I dont ever remenber someone touching me in anger.so must have been very very young. Hope that Jackie isn’t going to try calling the other girls. She might get a ear full. UGH
Oh my God. You were right on cue when you wrote how Dana didn’t like Alice having to ask permission for anything she did. And Dana proved that the discipline in physical exercise is the foundation for discipline in life. Me, I’d just have Jackie ask if Alice was there, say nope, and just hang up without a second to think about it. But that’s just me. As for Jackie being out of Alice’s life ‘Permanently’, well…don’t have the girls do anything too stupid. I can live with them doing something crazy like an “Outsiders” rumble on Jackie, but anything MORE might be pushing it.
Dana’s has way more control than I would (wonder how much control Bette or Shane would have)…the shed might be getting too filled, I volunteer my restaurant it’s wicked big and there are locks for the fridge and freezer to lock J up in, ooh and lots of liquour to party with while making the big ice cube!
I’m with everyone else on the control it takes to keep cool…but what Alice needs is so much more important than giving in to that particular temptation –for now. Hmmm…an arsenal and liquor…not usually a good combination, but in this case…LOL! Keep up the good work and PPS.
well done this story is getting so good with each chapter..good on dana shes doing a great job of taking care of alice..that phone call was a little scary i can just see jackie finding them hopefully not tho. Plus i hope dana can take her if needed her character is just a psycho lol great chapter!!
hey Magoose!I’m sorry I’ve missed the ast chapter. Life kinda caugh up with me lol but this is very good. You’re doing excellently in this fic. Thanks :)
Another charming chapter, the delicate inter-play between Alice amd Dana is so cute and touching. Congratulations on getting yourself unstuck, I’m very pleased to hear that there will be more of this story soon.