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Closure – Chapter 36
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Alice had finished her coffee and started to get up to get another.
“I got it, Al.” Dana said and gave her another kiss and a smile. She got up and moved toward the counter.
“I’ll go with you. I think my order is up.” Lara said. Carmen rolled her eyes so hard at this that she thought she could see the back of her head. Shane got up to sit next to Alice.
“Don’t let any of this get to you, Al. She can sniff around all she wants, but, Dana isn’t going to fall for it.” All Alice could do was to give a tight smile and watch her girlfriend at the counter talking to the first real love of her life.
“It is so great to see you Dana.” Lara said as she placed her hand on the athlete’s arm.
“You too, Lara. So when do you head back?” Dana was wondering why her refill was taking so long. She wanted to get back to Al.
Lara took Dana’s question as an opening. “Not for a week or so. I have plenty of time to visit.” She ran her hand up the athlete’s arm.
The refill was finally up. Dana thanked the waiter and paid. “I’m happy for you. Hope you have a good time.” She gave Lara a perfunctory smile, pulled her arm away and started back to Alice.
“Wait, Dana.” Lara said and stopped Dana with a hand on her arm once again.
“Yes?” Dana asked.
“Honey… I came back to see you. Can we talk somewhere? Maybe somewhere private?” Dana was baffled.
“No. I’m here with Alice. I’m not going anywhere else.”
Lara gave Dana a pitying smile. “I heard she went through some sort of trauma and I am glad you were there for her. But you know we had a good thing. I was wrong to leave the way I did. I couldn’t hardly last six months without you, much less a year.” Lara looked deep into Dana’s eyes. “Let’s go somewhere. Or meet me for dinner. Or I could come over to your place tonight. Whatever you want.” Lara said seductively.
“All I want is Alice.” Lara’s mouth fell open. “It was nice to see you, though. I hope you have a good visit while you’re in town.” Dana removed Lara’s hand from her arm and went back over to where Alice was sitting.
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hit’s Lara in the back with a steel chair as she walks by** Sorry you know how I get sometimes goose. I love your story so much. It makes me do a happy dance everytime it’s updated. I’m glad you like all my updates. I am working like crazy again today
Haven’t commented on this story in awhile, but I have been reading it. Nice break to my long day of work. Great Stuff!
that was great it is a shame that dana did not do that the first time round on the show great update I love it pps
:D WOW! Loved this update. Your lucky that it was so good otherwise i wud have to be mad at u for leaving us they way u have!!! But AHHHH Yes!! Finally there together and in such a romantic way as well Awwww lol!! Stupid Lara, GO AWAY!! Brilliant loved it lol Im rambling so im going to leave now .. happy lol :) x x
Ha on the yubetub!! LOve this update,u are sooooo talented and I love this story!!!!!! Glad Dana rejected Lara!! Happy Danish Dance!!! PPS
Love this. Dana finally grew up. thanks
Go Dana..glad she showed Lara the door..great chap, never thought I’d get hooked on a Danish story, but ya got me good..yey Carm protect the sexy bony ass :D
ah first. lol. sorry. This is so0oooo good! Finally Alice and Dana!! aw, thank you! I officially heart you. :) Between you and me and the rest of the world, I never was much of a fan of Lara’s. Even when Alice and Dana were just best friends, I wanted them together. :D thanks again!!! PPS
You can’t stop now!? Okay, I sound like a perv now, hihi. On to the rest of the comment :DI’m so happy how Dana handled the Lara situation with both Alice and Lara… Again a big AAAWWW for this chapter. Ooo and on my last comment… I think I’d just pretend to be sick, really don’t want to have the cold all the time and really feel miserable… hheheehe. I’m quitting now, because I’m becoming a chatterbox :S
i never liked her either..she was really nice and sweet but she was in the way and theres no room in danish…oh my finally yay.. im glad alice said wat she said they needed that convo cant wait for the next chapter :) great job MaGoose!!
Hello MaGoose, hehe… you had me laughing my butt of with this one; “Carmen rolled her eyes so hard at this that she thought she could see the back of her head.” that is freaking funny… I so love how Dana handled this situation… yes there might come a time to be friends with Lara but right know it is all about reconnecting with Alice and she doesn’t want any distractions… hehe… I love this Dana… at a lose for words and well blame… she got it right… hehe… you are so rocking this one out… yippee… come back soon ya hear me… pilgrim :P… hehe… Sincerely, JC
Oh, no!!!!!!! you can’t stop here! :)
Love it. Immensely, which is pointless to say because I’m sure you already knew that. Anyway, it’s 6am and I haven’t been to bed yet, so I’m actually kinda glad you ended it where you did. YAY to Lara going bye-bye. Sweet girl, but seriously doesn’t know when to quit. She kinda always bugged me, lol. Anyway, hugs for you and post soon and all that jazz. Also, a Danish PYP with Alice and/or Dana in scrubs? Yes please. You can call it my extremely early birthday present. And we Danish fans are like, waaaaaaaaaaaaay more perverted than even the Tibetters. Lol.
UGH! Stupid LARA! I wish i could use her as a speed bump for my wheelchair at the grocery store! Anyway, now that that’s over with…GO DANISH! Finally! Thank You sooooo MUCH Goose! That was truly amazing! Cant wait for the next update yet again..BIG SMILES!
u big tease!!i saw nc17 and i was like yey alice and dana have finally got it on and then u leave it here?! i loved this chapter how it showed dana practically ignoring lara, dont get me wrong i do like lara but just not with dana maybe helena?lol anyway i really really really cant wait for an update which im guessing is going to be pretty hot!thanks for posting!x
Hello, don’t you know it’s illegal to leave stories hanging like this? LOLgood for dana for putting lara in her place and reassuring alice. the visual of dana carrying alice is so funny to me, reminds me of mel and lindsey, when mel would hold or carry lindsey… ya know the saying the best things always come from small packages… great update :)
That was one of the sweetest chapters I have ever read.