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Closure – Chapter 5
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It was a small gathering of friends. Bette, Tina, Shane, Carmen, Dana and Kit were already there when Jackie and Alice arrived. What the new couple didn’t know was that the rest of the gang had arrived an hour early to finalize the plans they made during the week. Shane, Bette and Tina had already filled the girls in on the meeting at The Planet and their concerns that there was something odd in the relationship between Jackie and Alice. They all agreed — even Dana — that if they found out that Alice was happy and their initial impressions were wrong that they would do everything to accept the couple so they would have Alice back in their lives.
Alice would have been so proud of them. They worked out a couple scenarios by which they could separate Jackie and Alice so that one of the gang could talk to Alice alone. They went so far as to have hand signals and code words. Bette, Tina and Shane all notice the possessive way Jackie treated Alice and figured this might be the only way to get them apart.
Jackie was using this party as a bit of a test. She wanted to see if she had the control over Alice that she thought she did. What better way to exercise that than in a group of her “closest” friends? If Alice passes the test, Jackie will let her see them occasionally. If not, well, Alice has been doing fine without them.
It was going to be an interesting night.
Bette answered the door and ushered in Jackie and Alice. Alice glanced around and noticed that most of the gang was out on the patio. Her eyes immediately sought out Dana. Jackie was occupied in discussing the merits of the expensive merlot they brought to the party with Bette. Alice was able to watch Dana conversing out by the pool with Shane and Carmen without interference. It was like a drink of water to someone dying of thirst. Every fiber of her being wanted to run over to Dana and just hold her. And to be held in those strong arms that had held her safe as both friend and lover. Those thoughts went through Alice’s mind quickly. Alice almost laughed at herself at how stupid that was. Dana had Lara and she was with Jackie now.
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Hello MaGoose, I really like how you are developing this story. Alice seems to be a shell of her former self and she needs to realize what she has with Jackie is not “Love” it seems so controlling and almost like she is submissive. I really do hope that with the help of her “family” she can see where she is truly loved. I really hope someone (Bette smacks down Jackie). Keep up the amazing work, Sincerely, JC
This intervention was outstanding with plans, hand signals, code words and C studying the fitness gear. This might just turn out to be one of the best intervention yet. MaGoose, you have done a fantastic job writing J’s controlling and manipulative behavior. This character had really enhanced the story even though she was wicked. I think the gang had finally pulled together and doing a great job figuring out how to save A. I felt so bad that A who was not included in the celebration of Angelica’s 1st steps and hope that A could feel the gang rallying behind her from now on. The only complaint I have is the length of this post. Too short!! I want to know more. You are killing me. So please update soon. Thank you.
Jackie has got to go. And Dana is gonna be the one to get rid of her(I hope). She is so controlling. The real Alice is in there somewhere and she needs to come out. Anyway great story post soon.
Oh, drive the daggers through, take em out, and drive em through again. Alice is not a trophy! Please get Danish back together. Don’t make a lonely writer beg. It can get a little embarrassing.
We will see how weak Jackie thinks Alice. After seeing the gang and Dana will she give in to Jackie.
more please!! this is soo interesting haha this little plan is so them lol cracks me up.. i dislike jackie very much!! love this story though :)
plz update again very very soon !!! i so hate jackie but i can some what understand why alice is with her but i still hate her :0)
Tennis Racket+Jackie’s head=DANISH. Sorry i really just think Dana should grab her by the collar slam her against the wall and say step off bitch. It would be great. I would love it. But I always thought dana would be a fighter.I love your story. Keep up the good work
this woman is infuriating me…and eventhough you had no intentions of doing so, i can’t help but picture jackie warner everytime jackie has a line! anyway, i thought you wrote the scene wonderfully and it flowed just fine. and don’t worry if kit had nothing to do…that’s not so far off from her role on the show!
Oh man, Can Dana just shank Jackie while she’s not looking please? Awsome update, can’t wait to see how the night progresses.