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Closure – Finale
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Alice and Dana finally showed up at The Planet after six days. Contrary to the joking from their friends, they did not spend all that time in bed. They also went to the beach, walked Runyan Canyon, saw a movie, and had some quiet meals out. Dana managed to squeeze in some training and Alice got some writing done. And they had a lot of sex.
The gang couldn’t help but smile when they saw the couple. There had always been a connection between the two — one that the principle parties didn’t see at first. But now there was something else. There was a confidence in their relationship and a level of comfort that comes from meeting and welcoming your soul mate. It was both humbling and awe-inspiring for their friends to see.
“So you guys finally ran out of food?” Shane cracked.
Both girls blushed lightly and Alice answered. “Be nice, Shane. We left the house once or twice.” Dana kissed Alice on the cheek and asked. “Baby? What can I get you?”
“Just coffee, Dane. Thanks.”
“Boy, Al, have you got her whipped or what?” Shane joked.
Alice grinned and shot back “Fuck you, Shane.”
“Now I really don’t think Miss Dana would appreciate that, do you?” Shane responded. “Seems like she has cornered the market on that where you are concerned.”
Dana watched the interchange between the two friends from her place at the counter. She was concerned that the kidding may get out of hand and wanted to be ready to jump in, if needed. After several minutes she realized that it might be Shane she needed to jump in and help — not Alice.
Dana smiled thinking about the last few days. Out of all that they did, her favorite parts were the talks they had. They talked about the past and their hopes for the future. She loved the new level of communication they found.
They were moving back into the beach house this coming weekend. She was so thrilled when Alice agreed to move in with her. Alice wanted them to keep her apartment and Dana’s condo for now. Dana agreed, but, knew she would never be stupid enough to let the writer out of her home and life again.
Dana paid for her order and turned back to look at the table that contained her friends — her family. They were all listening to Alice recount some story and they broke out laughing at the end. She locked eyes with Alice and they shared a conversation about their love and the future that required no words. Alice gave a sweet smile and bit her lower lip. Dana made haste back to the table and placed a soft kiss on those amazing lips. She barely heard the cat-calls from her friends.
As Dana and Alice sat there, listening to the conversation flow between the people most important in their lives as they held each other close, they both felt life could not be more perfect. They each felt a sense of closure on that last phase of their lives. And of the start of something truly amazing.
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That’s all folks.
I don’t know that I have the words to express how much enjoyment I got out of interacting with all of you through the course of this story through comments and PMs. I hope you will follow me over to my next story and give it a shot. It is called “The Island” and I plan to post the first chapter soon.
And, if you don’t, we will always have the shed, Dana clones, rogue socks, and my presidential candidacy to look back on.
Until then… Thank you all very much!!
Take care,
– MaGoose
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Aww im so sad this has come to end. But it was a perfect ending however :). The Island, say no more im there! Even the title intrigues me .. cant wait. Thnk u bout looking forward to my next post and sorry it taking so long just reli bogged now with work at the min i hate it :( but i am hoping to get it up soon. Loved this story all the way through and cant wait for ur new story, im sure it will be another brilliant journey :) See u soon x x
AWW the FINALE! It all has to end sooner or later and you did a wonderful job! I really enjoyed it and they way you told your story! Hopefully we see what else you have up your sleeves! All I have to say is that this story was shit hot and you did an amazing job with it! Congraulations my friend, you have stolen my imagination from me, much love!
Too bad to see this story ending, but thank you for writing it! I loved your whole outtake on this wonderful relationship.
great story, well done! looking forward to reading your next one!
Thank you so much for this wonderful story! I loved it and they way u ended it. Cant wait for your next one!!!!
Thanks for this fantastic piece of writing – sad to see it end, but have your new project to look forward to. Keep it coming – you have a tremendous talent.
i havnt read it yet but NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! i love closure!im glad ur leaving it open though! im sad but it was an amazing story and i cant wait to read your next ones! please come back soon with more!:) x
Perfect way to end it, simple but sweet. It’s no secret that I adored this story, you did a fantastic job with it! I’ll miss the Dana clones and the shed….go ahead and keep the pitchfork, the bike tire pump, the plastic lawn flamingo and whatever else I threw in there. Consider them my gifts for a job well done, lol. Your next one is going to be even better. MT hath ordained. Haha.
I’m only ten Steps behind where ever you are going Goose. I loved the story. It made my day quiet literally every time you posted.
I don’t think I could’ve ended this story any better. The whole family at The Planet gabbing on and on and no dwelling on the past. Just moving on to the future. And that future looks bright and chipper with everything that involves Alice, Dana, Shane, Carmen, Bette, Tina, Kit, and Jenny. Thank you for Closure. But most of all, thank you for your writings.
Thank you for such a wonderful story! There’s nothing better than a happy Danish ending! You went all out for your first story, writing about a very senitive and controversial issue (DV) and did an amazing job! I look forward to your future stories.
thank you for a wonderful story, and even though this one is over I hope you will write more Danish fiction.
MaGoose, to bad this was the final one. (Great one though) But I’m sure your next story will be great also… so I’m not worried. Thanks for this story, it was wonderful. See you at your next post :D
What nice way to end the story!wonderfully written! :)
Hello MaGoose, see that I close my eyes and blame I’m too late :(… I miss the ship… I don’t know if I’ve told you this :P… but I absolutely love this story… you have created such a rich story with this family… and your handling of these two central characters Bette and Tina… oh wait wrong story LMAO… hehe… you rock and roll my friend just absolutely brilliant… you created an emottionally rich and deep story and winding it down you never faltered… it never once strayed just one chapter after another with brilliant words… brilliant emotions… brilliant story… because well you kick serious ASS and Rocked the Shit out of this story… I am so happy to have been able to join you for the ride and I cannot wait… with baited breaths and popcorn as you take us to the… duh duh “Island”… You rock and roll my friend… sorry I wasn’t there last chappy… but well you know… kick ass all the way… Sincerely, JC
so sad to see this story end. it was an amazing ride you took us on and i enjoyed every second of it. thanks so much for the posts. looking foward to what you’re working on next!
You story was well was well written. All”s well that ends well thanks
Thank YOU!!!
amazing finish, the family strong and together…will follow like a lap dog to your next story, the freezer,s cleaned out incase I need to send a care package:D..(actually someone who worked for me said if I had been American I should be on Hell’s Kitchen.)
wow i have enjoyed every chapter that u have written and am so glad that ur continuing with the danish stories thanks you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
The Island… I’m there! Thanks Magoose, this was truly awesome.
Hey,I just finished reading this from start to finish – excellent story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I think we have a very talented writer on our hands.
thank you for a wonderful story and I hope you have a few more to write and I hope that they will be danish storys thanks again I enjoyed every minute of this one
I feel like an asswhole for not commenting on this story before, but I’ve been reading since the beginning and I loved everything about it. Yay for happy Danish ending…Looking forward to your next story. I’m sure it’ll be just as great as Closure. Thank you and GO DANISH!!!