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Collision Course 4.33
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“Thanks,” said Sam, her hips moving to the soft beat that was coming from the radio. Singing softly to the music, “Come hit me up, come hit me up, I know you feel it…”
“And she sings,” laughed Tina, tossing her head back and chuckling, Sam rolled her eyes at her.
“Badly,” snorted Sam. “Ok, not that badly.”
“Not at all,” grinned Tina, thinking that the day wasn’t a total loss.
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Sam was cleaning up downstairs, putting the clothes back into the large bins that she’d liberated from a friend of hers that did photo shoots of kids, and the stuff she’d gotten from Kinnetic. Brow knitted, Sam saw the small stuffed animal that Angelica had been holding all afternoon. A green frog that was rather battered, “Damn.”
Sam pulled out her cell phone, dialing Tina’s number, and letting it ring for a few minutes. A frown crossed her face and she decided that taking a ride over to Tina’s house was in order. Angelica would be looking for her frog, and Sam didn’t want the young girl to be upset.
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Tina pulled into the driveway, a still slumbering Angelica in the backseat. Tina got out; rousing her gently and Angelica wrapped her arms around Tina’s neck. “I love you, mommy.”
Tina kissed her forehead gently, “Me too, baby girl, me too.”
Hoisting Angelica into her arms, and making her way to the house, struggling with the keys, dropping them on the ground, her head brushing the door and it eased open.
A confused look crossed Tina’s face, righting her self, setting Angelica on the stoop, the girl opening her eyes and looking at her mother, wondering why they weren’t going into the house. “Mommy?”
“Shhhh, stay here, Angelica,” ordered Tina, pushing the door opened, leaning into the door way and yelled, “Hello!”
There was no sound, thinking she’d simply forgotten to lock and close the door, so Tina turned and was about to move back outside to get Angelica, when she screamed, “MOMMY!”
Tina began to turn, but it was too late, someone hit her from behind and Tina dropped down at arch of the doorway, unconscious.
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ARGH! What have you done, Janet?!? This chapter was all about moving onwards and upwards (or at least sideways) then Tina gets walloped upside the head? Post the next chapter immediately! Um… please? Pretty please?
Oh yeah,….I feel the drama coming on. So Tina gets whacked. Well, I can’t say I feel too bad, but I do feel worried about Angie. Helena and Jayden…oh boy wait ’til Sam finds out. And now, the plot stirs….turn up the heat so it thickens…Tasty. LOL, A drooler coming up? Well, better get my handkerchief. *weg* Loving it so far.
Maybe Sam will be Tina knight in shinning armor? Who would want to hurt Tina except Henry. since he was the cause of Angie needing a transplant. Helena and Jayden. boy Sam will sorta boil over that. Just let Bette be happy with Jo. thanks bvh
Oh for the love of God Janet!! I’m starting to think you just can’t help yourself!! Fortunately your writing is so good it makes up for your drama queen side!! LOL Just think, Tina might actually stay single for a while before jumping into another relationship…how novel!! Great as always J…thanks!!
Now who is wacking Tina on the head? Ouch! Sore one, someone wants Tina out of the way..I hope Sam is not to far away…can I throw Sam into the ring as a possible girlfriend for Tina’s, me thinks these two would make a “hot couple.” Drama is coming, I expect nothing less. Thank you.
What? Who? Where did that come from. I don’t know why I am shocked, It’s like you just can’t help yourself. It is also why we keep coming back time after time.
I am so wi di on this. What a Cliffy. PPS Great Chapter.
Talk about Cliffhanger. I’m not really into Tina but I have to admit that I want to know what happen next. Sam to the rescue, again… let’s wait the next update ~wink~
uh-oh. dun dun DUN! Sea is right, you really just can’t contain your bad cajun drama queen self. And don’t we love it!
oh no poor tina I hope that she is ok please post soon I am just getting caught up on all the storys as I have just started to work now that my children are both in full time school so I don’t gets much time to read but I love it and rad what I can when I can great update
WHOA!!! it was so nice until T took one to the head…please don’t let Angel get hurt and PPS because I’m sitting here having a panic attack without T’s xanax to fix me up!!!! lol
O.K. I’m looking on the bright side of things, hopefully Tina got some sense knocked into her. LOL. O.K I’ll be nice. “Angelica Kenter! Where are your manners?” asked Tina “Lost ’em,” retorted the child …LMFAO. Helena seems to love couches. Are we going to get to see why Jayden took the leap?Love the chap. At least it wasn’t solely Tina & her murky thoughts. Can’t wait for the next one.
J, the counter is fine. The readers are finally realizing how good your stories really are. Nice cliffy you left us with!
Clang, thud. That was the sound of my jaw hitting the floor after you bopped me upside the head w/ this chapter! Lady, you know how to bring on the drama…for sure!