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Collision Course 4.36
Carmen wiped a tear from her own dark eyes, and grabbed a dishtowel from the café bar, mopping up the coffee, a waitress told her to stop, but Carmen kept on cleaning it up. Lara watched her. Tears blurring Carmen’s vision as she whipped up what coffee she could.
“Carmen, come on, Carm,” said Lara in her always sure voice, taking Carmen by the hand and standing her up. The waitress took the dishrag from her and smiled shyly at Carmen, who felt the sobs shaking her being with each breath.
Leading Carmen away from the spot, and the peering eyes of the customers, Lara sat her down at the table they usually sat at, Carmen rubbing her face, swallowing down the tears and looking at Lara, who said nothing.
“What are you really doing back here, Lara?” asked Carmen with a cool voice, she wanted to talk about anything but Rosita.
“I came back for me, and for Alice,” stated the red head in truth. After having run away from Dana when things had gotten tough, and having done the same thing with Alice, Lara had had difficulty living with herself. Of course, having the shot at buying The Planet had been something that Lara couldn’t have given up.
“You came back for nothing then,” stated Carmen, needing to believe in something good for once. And Alice and Rosita were that something good. The only one with a girlfriend was Bette, the rest of them were a splintered group. Carmen had never felt so alone in her life.
“I have every intention of winning her back,” said Lara, sliding a cup of coffee to Carmen.
“You don’t get it, do you? Alice is in love with Rosita,” countered Carmen softly, rubbing the rim of her coffee cup with her thumb.
“She was in love with me first,” stated Lara steadfastly.
“Yeah and you left, didn’t you? Just like you up and left Dana, I know she kicked you out, but you still left, the country no less,” grumbled Carmen. After Shane had left her, it had hurt, but at least Shane hadn’t left the continent. Lara, on the other hand, had.
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Wow…such action packed drama…I couldn’t remember if the frog was real or not so during the story…her fall down outside to the struggle with Henry I was wondering if it was a real frog did it get squished…anyway that’s my dememnted mind…lol. I hope Henry is dead and I hope Sam will be okay. I hope Tina is okay too, but poor Angelica is probably traumatized for life. Keep posting and work that 15 minute orgasm into a chapter or two my interest is awakened.
wow wow!!! i love ur story!!!! hhmmmm… whats going on with shane and carmen??? and damn that dumbass henry!!! stupid ass guy…. anyway please continue with this awesome fic!!!
Holy sh_t! What happens next?!! Please update soon.
Oh, Holy Mother of God. You didn’t, you, I repeat, did NOT just do something… bad… to Sam. Or did you? I hope Ro comes back safe, and I really don’t think Shane is going to take the night’s events too well… And I hope Henry gets what’s coming to him. Post soon
I can not wait till your next post. I could see Henry doing some crazy stuff like that !
Great stuff…luv the drama…and Angelica screaming all the way thru it…of course mam T will survive but where is Bette? PPS
How dare you to have a life besides writing for all of us. Thank you for the new post, and have a wonderful holiday. Don’t work to hard!!
OMG! U cant kill Sam, or Tina for that matter. The only one that can die is Henry! If he doesnt die i hope he leaves Angelica alone and doesnt take her with him. After this one PLEASE dont leave us waiting to long. That will be just plain torture!!!! So PPS. Oh and loved it by the way.
Missed Friday nite. I know this is a busy time of year. and hours at work paids the bills. Get some sleep and take care of your self. or we will be missing a lot of Friday nites. Sam will be okay abd so will Tina, and is going to be the one that will hurt. If henry is alive, he will be someone bitch in jail I hope. thanks and take care and if we dont hear from before the 25th have a Happy Holiday bvh
so much druma can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon I love it great update
80hrs? YIKES! I love this story too much to say take your time w/ writing but I do sympathize. Will you get some relaxation during the holidays? Hope you do, leading a double life ain’t easy, but we appreciate the effort. Here’s hoping 911 gets someone over there quickly to save Sam’s ass. Ro and Al seem to be the real deal. Can Carmen hook up w/ Lara? After Lara realize’s she and Al are not meant to be? Thanx for the update, your eye’s must have been crisscrossing as you typed this.
Oh you evil evil gah!!! Okay, what happens next? Come on you can’t hang me like this! …Great update and my cardio-pump is stuck in my throat! pps!