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Collision Course 4.72
“I don’t know, Jarrod?” offered the younger McCutcheon, watching the twenty disappear into Jo’s pocket with a grimace on his face.
“You’re not going to see Jarrod again if that’s the sort of thing he’s going to be teaching you,” said Shane in an even voice. “Now go outside and have fun with the girls.”
“That’s just it, they are all… girls…,” he said with an icky tone in his voice, crossing his arms over his chest. That only made the women around the table snicker.
“Trust me, little man, in a few years, you are gonna be telling ya friends about the hot women you were swimming around with when you were just eight,” said Rosita. “Anyone want a beer?”
“I do,” said Alice. Shane shuffled Shay outside, kicking him with her prosthetic foot in a playful manner.
“I’ll take one,” said Lara. “Beer goes better with this than wine.”
Rosita got up as the door bell rang, “What that’s a change, someone ringing the bell,” said Bette with a laugh.
“I’ll get it,” said Rosita changing her course and moving quickly to the door and whipping it open. “It’s Reno.”
“Well if it isn’t the newest under cover the covers girl of the year, I heard about your latest exploit, how was Macedonia?” asked the private investigator, her eyes roaming over Rosita with a sexy grin, Julie’s rapid fire voice slowing down, taking on a sweet edge to it.
“I wouldn’t know,” said Rosita, her jaw clenched, her voice dropping down to a whisper. “How did you know…?”
“Papi,” chuckled Julie as she walked into the room. “Hey boss, I got a hit on the runaway already. Check this,” said Julia, pulling the small backpack off her shoulder. Pulling out a laptop, popping the top open, “Seems that Carmen ran off to Miami, ya cousin know anyone in the hot spot?” Then Julie spotted Natalie, who was pushing back her chair and moving over to Julie with a sheepish grin on her face. “You’re a sight for sore eyes,” said Julie, hugging Nat hard, almost lifting her off the ground.
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30 pages and you end it there!!?? This was great as always, although I do admit that with so many characters sometimes I have to stop and try to remember who they all are. lol This must have taken days and days to write, so thank you. :) So, is “droll” a good thing?
That was a great update. It was fun to see the crowd together. Hope Jo is ok. Lots of questions about Jo still to be answered. Will she survive. How does her powers transfer from one person to another. Will Bette save her, hopefully without harming herself. So many questions. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
Ah, damn. This doesn’t look good at all. Everything seems like it’s going to a very hot place in a very small basket. And you’ve left it on such a cliffhanger too. No, Janet, I don’t want a big shake up (actually, I’m a liar. I crave them, the story’s not the same without them, but I just don’t want anyone– read: Jo –dying.) Nat’s a bright spot though… she intrigues me. Loved the chapter, post soon. Cheers, Janet
So glad I waited until this morning to read, cause you threw the whole clan at us , & I def. needed to concentrate on all the characters cause my mind was mush last night. Hope you write in the recording session w/ the girls & Daisy, seems like trouble there. Will Nat get w/ anyone? I can’t blame Bette for hovering, who wouldn’t if someone they loved were dying – even if they are as proud & independent as Jo. Luv the mingling of everyone w/ no fights breaking out only snarky comments. Thanx for the long post.
oh my god….what time is it. ahhh shhiiittt. Anyway ive been falling alseep on this story because it midnight! But hey im still liking it, did i just see the word painkiller jane???. i need to go tosleep, i losing it.
My brain is numb,but I shall read this again, I cant get around losing Jo.So I will Post during the day light hours. thanks bvh
That was definitely worth the wait! Such a nice substantial post…Thanks! What’s happening to Jo now? Poor woman can’t catch a break!
i love this story and I can’t wait to see whta will happen please post soon great update