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Collision Course 4.72
“Oh lord, you are doing it too!” laughed Lara. “I need more alcohol,” added the sexy chef.
“I’ll get it for you, red,” said Julie standing and tossing a wink at Alice. Who would have winked back if for an instant she hadn’t almost called Julie Reno, Dana.
“Bring me something too, something strong, and I’m going outside, those girls have the right idea, into the pool,” grumbled Alice suddenly missing Dana fiercely. The pang of loss ran through her, making her heavy with pain. Putting one foot in front of the other, Alice walked out the door and just wanting for the pain to be gone, needing the pain to vanish, to lift so that she could move on with her life and stop being so bitter.
Heading for the outdoors, thinking of the drive that she and Lara were going to share tomorrow, to once again, say goodbye to Dana, properly this time, Bette touched her hand as she moved by her, and Alice simply smiled.
The late day began to wane into evening, and everyone was off in their own conversations, Bette, Tina, Helena and Rosita were sitting by the pool, “So you’re really working for a bank?” asked Bette of Rosita. She couldn’t see Rosita behind a desk, shuffling paperwork for loans and doing menial transactions.
“Si, doing legal, I have to take my bar exam as soon as I finish this class I’m taking via the internet,” said the Latina. Looking up and seeing Alice chatting with Lara and Tegan. “It’s not the FBI, but without Jo, I didn’t think I’d make it very far in the FBI.”
“Oh, I think you’d have done fine,” said Helena. “You must never underestimate yourself,” added the heiress who was flirting with just about everyone she sat down next too.
Riley jumped off the diving board, cannon-balling right next to the foursome, splashing them, making Bette yelp in surprise. Tina laughed, leaning against Bette, “That was funny.”
“I wasn’t,” chided Bette, who was nonetheless, grinning from ear to ear, wiping the water off her face.
Sydney and Abby, who were playing waitress, came by, leaving the bottle of wine that Tina and Bette had been sharing between them. They drifted off into conversation as Shane strutted by them.
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30 pages and you end it there!!?? This was great as always, although I do admit that with so many characters sometimes I have to stop and try to remember who they all are. lol This must have taken days and days to write, so thank you. :) So, is “droll” a good thing?
That was a great update. It was fun to see the crowd together. Hope Jo is ok. Lots of questions about Jo still to be answered. Will she survive. How does her powers transfer from one person to another. Will Bette save her, hopefully without harming herself. So many questions. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
Ah, damn. This doesn’t look good at all. Everything seems like it’s going to a very hot place in a very small basket. And you’ve left it on such a cliffhanger too. No, Janet, I don’t want a big shake up (actually, I’m a liar. I crave them, the story’s not the same without them, but I just don’t want anyone– read: Jo –dying.) Nat’s a bright spot though… she intrigues me. Loved the chapter, post soon. Cheers, Janet
So glad I waited until this morning to read, cause you threw the whole clan at us , & I def. needed to concentrate on all the characters cause my mind was mush last night. Hope you write in the recording session w/ the girls & Daisy, seems like trouble there. Will Nat get w/ anyone? I can’t blame Bette for hovering, who wouldn’t if someone they loved were dying – even if they are as proud & independent as Jo. Luv the mingling of everyone w/ no fights breaking out only snarky comments. Thanx for the long post.
oh my god….what time is it. ahhh shhiiittt. Anyway ive been falling alseep on this story because it midnight! But hey im still liking it, did i just see the word painkiller jane???. i need to go tosleep, i losing it.
My brain is numb,but I shall read this again, I cant get around losing Jo.So I will Post during the day light hours. thanks bvh
That was definitely worth the wait! Such a nice substantial post…Thanks! What’s happening to Jo now? Poor woman can’t catch a break!
i love this story and I can’t wait to see whta will happen please post soon great update