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Collision Course 4.72
“Yeah, well I’m wet already, aren’t I?” Bette snorted, throwing her hands up in the air. Jo was on the other side of the pool, hiding behind Riley. They young girl looked at Jo, and then to Spencer, who was watching with a slight smile on her usually serious lips.
“You’re wet?” asked Tina playfully as she treaded water lazily. “Your girlfriend is that way,” pointed Tina and Bette threw her arms up in the air again and everyone laughed.
“I think they’ve had too much wine,” said Lara to Shane who’d sat down next to Lara. She’d checked on Shay, who’d fallen asleep on the couch in Bette’s study, the TV playing his favorite TV show of the moment, Painkiller Jane.
“It’s good; everyone needs to let off a little steam. So you and Alice gonna hook back up?” asked Shane as she took a piece of cheese from the plate that Lara had balancing on her knees.
“No! Not going back down that road again,” shivered Lara. “Carmen really did a number on me.” Lara leaned back, casting a look at the sky, wondering why things like this constantly happened to her.
Shane pursed her lips, “That’s partly my fault.”
“Huh?” said Lara with a curious gaze.
“If I hadn’t left her at the alter, she wouldn’t be so scared of commitment,” mused Shane.
“That’s bull,” mumbled Lara. “She’s over that, and she was over you,” added Lara not wanting to admit that some of that might well be true. Carmen hadn’t wanted to move in, Lara had given her Existence without a thought, thinking it was a true gift, instead it had scared Carmen into thinking Lara might be moving to fast.
“She was, but she wasn’t over what I did to her,” said Shane softly. “I’m sorry, I messed up a lot of things in my life, and Carmen is a big regret.”
“But you went on to fall in love with Sam,” reminded Lara.
“I know, but…,” sighed Shane. “If I could have changed things, I would have married Carmen. Then, who knows what might have happened? I wouldn’t have met Sam, I wouldn’t be having two kids….”
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30 pages and you end it there!!?? This was great as always, although I do admit that with so many characters sometimes I have to stop and try to remember who they all are. lol This must have taken days and days to write, so thank you. :) So, is “droll” a good thing?
That was a great update. It was fun to see the crowd together. Hope Jo is ok. Lots of questions about Jo still to be answered. Will she survive. How does her powers transfer from one person to another. Will Bette save her, hopefully without harming herself. So many questions. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
Ah, damn. This doesn’t look good at all. Everything seems like it’s going to a very hot place in a very small basket. And you’ve left it on such a cliffhanger too. No, Janet, I don’t want a big shake up (actually, I’m a liar. I crave them, the story’s not the same without them, but I just don’t want anyone– read: Jo –dying.) Nat’s a bright spot though… she intrigues me. Loved the chapter, post soon. Cheers, Janet
So glad I waited until this morning to read, cause you threw the whole clan at us , & I def. needed to concentrate on all the characters cause my mind was mush last night. Hope you write in the recording session w/ the girls & Daisy, seems like trouble there. Will Nat get w/ anyone? I can’t blame Bette for hovering, who wouldn’t if someone they loved were dying – even if they are as proud & independent as Jo. Luv the mingling of everyone w/ no fights breaking out only snarky comments. Thanx for the long post.
oh my god….what time is it. ahhh shhiiittt. Anyway ive been falling alseep on this story because it midnight! But hey im still liking it, did i just see the word painkiller jane???. i need to go tosleep, i losing it.
My brain is numb,but I shall read this again, I cant get around losing Jo.So I will Post during the day light hours. thanks bvh
That was definitely worth the wait! Such a nice substantial post…Thanks! What’s happening to Jo now? Poor woman can’t catch a break!
i love this story and I can’t wait to see whta will happen please post soon great update