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Collision Course 4.79
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Collision Course 4.79
Lara punched the gas pedal and sped out of the Shane’s driveway, almost taking out the two garbage cans that were sitting at the end of the drive. The SUV’s front end whipped around and Lara gunned it again, tires squealing as she headed up the street, “Fuck, fuck, why do I do this to myself? Huh? Why?”
There was no answer to the question, because no one else seemed to put themselves in these stupid situations, no one other than her. She stopped at the stop sign at the end of the street, gripping the steering wheel in a white knuckled choke hold. “Shane McCutcheon kissed me. She kissed me and she… well, I think she was trying to say that she likes me. Well, that much is obvious, because we’re friends, but is she… is she saying that it could be more? What am I getting myself into? Why would I date Shane of all people?” asked Lara to the silence of the car.
“She’s sexy,” began Lara, in her self musing voice. “And pregnant, let us not forget ladies and gentlemen of the unseen audience that really aren’t here, with twins that really aren’t even hers. History, there is a lot of history with Shane, just look at her exploits on the Chart. How do I ever live up to that? I don’t have to, right?”
More silence welcomed her, but Lara wasn’t done, not by a long shot, “She’s my friend, what in the world makes me think that Shane could be more than a friend? That she could be… god, monogamous? But, I’m starting to think that Sam and CJ had it right, be honest, and fuck all you want to fuck, but come home to the one you love… I’ve cheated before, so it’s not like I’m a saint, god no. What if….”
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Bette and Tina ,, Tina and Bette. Guess I will always think that way. See old women do sit on the porch yelling at kids to stay off the lawn,not me I put up a fence with razor wire and mean dogs. Natalie will be surprise that Spence is gone back to the island. Quin is fair game now. Jo will always be with Amy. Soulmates. You really out did yourself on Shane and Lara. Good job. Take care and I do look foreward to Fridays and a post from you thanks bvh
*makes out with janet and humps her* :P
Last week–no pulse-racing terror, and I liked the chapter. This week, no Jo, and I liked the chapter. What is happening to me???? When I finished and there had been no appearance from Jo, I considered threatening to boycott, but I knew it would be an empty threat. “Collision Course, I wish I knew how to quit you.”
Very hot stuff w/ Lara and Shane. Do I smell a Tibette reconciliation on the horizon? And maybe Alice and Quin? I’ve no idea what might happen to the rest of the characters, but I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Heavy wetness is right. I agree totally with Seahurst about the Shane/Carmen scene… not sexy in the least. Your scene, however…. gushing, wet, hot, sexy and yet so sweet. Nice visual, thanks. How you do love to dangle the Bette and Tina carrot!! Always love them together, but your Tina and Quin is just as lovely. I bow to your superior wisdom and judgment and will simply look forward to your next post! By the way, I read your story on the fandom site and loved it. Thanks for sharing your talent, Janet.
I’m so glad Lara went back, cos what they just did was HOT. She could be really, really good for Shane. Bette and Tina, they’ve got that whiff “destiny” about them, but I’ll believe nothing til after La Jaded Rogue sings. Natalie… she’s all mysterious, and really I kinda want her to stay that way. Al needs to be kept on her toes. And where is Ro going? More more and more, Janet. Loved it, keep it coming. Thanks
Good job on the Shane & Lara, it was sweet, sexy and fun. Thanks !
Your so bad is there going to a Tibette reunion or are you just teasing..would love for Tina to get back with Quin, I loved these two together, go on T give Quin another chance. Shane and Lara very nice pairing love the twists and turns you have going on in your story…more please and thanks.
this was great first bette and tina then shane and lara that was great then alice and nat then ro please post soon as i cant wait to see what will happen to every one great update as always
Lara & Shane was nice, I don’t feel a long time relationship though or do I just not trust you to keep relationships together? I like that Shane was the one willing to talk. Quin and Alice, I really liked them together in another one of your stories. Bette, Tina and Jo I’m not sure what to say. Is Tina going to be hurt again? Will Jo forgive Bette? Oh, is Rosita the next to go? One last thought you made me laugh with the meat on Shane’s bones. It would be funny to see her with boobs and a bit of a belly I wonder what she would look like? I think it would make her even more girly looking.
Although I love Bette & Jo, I’m glad Bette didn’t become stalkerish. Also happy Quin has asked for help. Great post.
In the show they filmed a sex scene with Shane and Carmen. You remember the one…with the weird music and the echoing Shane Shane Shane…Carmen Carmen Carmen. LOL They filmed them fucking. It was rough…almost mechanical. Looked like a guy humping a woman with no love involved. When they filmed that scene it wasn’t sexy or senuous or loving. It was no emotions involved…’I’m going to fuck you just like a guy would’…fucking. I hated that scene. IC could have done SO much better. She could have done what you did with your scene of Shane and Lara. No freaky music or echoing…just two women who are falling for each other wanting to taste and touch and explore and to bring the ultimate physical pleasure to the woman they care for. You showed in that scene that you can be loving and gentle, and still be hotter than hot! Thank you for giving me this new visual of Shane. I had that horrible one from the show stuck in my head, and have been completely uninterested in any kind of sexual scene with Shane in it since. Oh, and thanks for the visual of Tina, Bette, and a moist chocolate cake!!!!!! God, I love my imagination!!!
B&T, B&J, T&Q who knows. Whatever you decide I’m sure it will be entertaining. Hope A&N hook up, they would be good together. S&L as long as Lara can deal with Shane being Shane, this could work. At least since she’s a cook, she can put some meat on the bones.