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Come Away with Me
Alice pulls up outside of Dana’s condo after they had been to the hospital to see Bette and Tina and the new baby.
Dana is about to get out of Alice’s Mini when she realizes that Alice hasn’t turned off the engine to the car.
“Are you not coming in baby?”
“No I don’t think so I might just go home and get some rest but I will see you later or tomorrow or something just call me ok sweetie.” (Alice is having a hard time keeping eye contact with Dana)
“Well you can rest here you know and then we could go get dinner with they gang you know celebrate and then go home and snuggle up in bed together.”
“You know what Dane that sounds really nice but I just want to be on my own for a while think about some stuff you know but maybe we could have dinner on our own later or we can just do something tomorrow. If you want to go out and celebrate with the gang tonight.”
“You know what Al I really don’t know. I have no Idea what you want to think about and to tell you the truth your worrying me you wont look at me you don’t want to spend the night with me and your telling me to go and celebrate with out you. There is not much to celebrate if your not there with me and I know that your are sat at in your apartment THINKING about who knows what.”
(Alice turns and faces Dana and takes hold of Dana’s face)
“Dana don’t worry ok I am just letting the mouse breath. Just call me when you want me to come over ok?”
(Alice lets go of Dana’s face turns back around puts the car into gear waiting for Dana to get out so she can pull away and let the tears fall over her face)
Dana gets out of the car and watches as Alice speeds of down the road wondering what just happened. Dana realized that she had just added to Alice’s insecurities the ones that Dana knew where always there from the moment they became best friends.
When Alice and Dana were just friends Dana knew that Alice was insecure about people leaving her so why was it that when they started going out that Dana completely forgot and Dana knew full well that she hadn’t been helping Alice’s insecurities, dinner with Lara and telling her she loved her and then not saying it again.
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