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Comfort Enough
“I think you’ve made some kind of deal with the Devil, like Dorian Gray,” Bette insisted, as they shared the bathroom sink while getting ready for bed.
“You’re crazy,” Tina responded, pasting up her toothbrush.
But Bette had been adamant. She stood behind Tina, directing her wife’s attention to her own reflection in the mirror. “T, look. No gray hair, no wrinkles, no laugh lines,” Bette said. “You haven’t changed at all. It’s like you’re in suspended animation.”
Tina turned from the mirror to kiss Bette and say, matter-of-factly, “Fine. I’m an alien. Are you happy now?”
“At least that would explain it,” Bette grumbled, checking her own thick, dark hair for encroaching grays.
“Baby, aging doesn’t happen overnight. It’s gradual. You see me everyday, so you don’t notice. Ask Alice. She’ll be glad to tell you how much I’ve fallen apart over the last seven years.”
Yes, Bette knew that Tina was beautiful. But what Bette couldn’t have known, was that Tina would only become more beautiful. Now, after years of not changing at all, Tina’s body suddenly seemed to be changing every day. And to Bette, each change only added to her wife’s loveliness. Six months into her pregnancy, Tina’s face was rounder and her hair was a little wild and wavy from the surge of hormones. Her ***** more than filled Bette’s hands with their suppleness. And, of course, there was the inexplicable radiance that Bette could only attribute to the life Tina was growing inside of her.
Bette noticed each of these transformations all over again as she slowly removed Tina’s clothes. Every newly lush curve, every smooth plane of skin and bone and color and texture was an amazing revelation to Bette’s senses.
“What are you doing?” Tina asked softly, allowing Bette to ease her back on their bed.
“I’m making sure that massage oil doesn’t go to waste,” Bette smiled, peeling out of her own shirt and cotton draw string pants before pouring a puddle of the fragrant, viscous liquid into her palm.
“Bette,” Tina whispered, looking into her wife’s intense brown eyes.
“Yes,” Bette said, rubbing her hands together slowly to warm the oil.
“I love you.”
Bette lifted Tina’s hand, kissing her palm gently before she began to tenderly knead each finger. “I love you, too. Now close your eyes and let me show you how much.”
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(31 votes, average: 4.71 out of 5)
See this is what were talking about. This is the Bette and Tina we know and love, and want. Someone please tell IC. And, OMG could we want Ms. Bette anymore than we already do.
This is the Bette and Tina that we need to see on S3. Love this bette,she is so in love with Tina. They are both so in love with each other. thanks
Lucky,lucky Tina.
And lucky us for getting to read this story, some for the first time and some for second, savoring time.
Your story flows like water in a gentle babbling brook. It dips, turns and slows as necessary.
It’s the little things like finding an underused bottle of massage oil that remind us of the importance of taking time for each other. Noticing is half the battle, making sure you follow through is the other.
Chemistry is a powerful thing, without it we are just friends.
Loved the reference to The Picture of Dorian Gray. Tina I imagine is aging gracefully in such a way that Bette cannot see it. She is not only too close to Tina, but with their reconcilliation her appreciation for Tina has become magnified – putting her on the pedestal of Aphrodite-like beauty. It’s a nice view for either of them.
The snap shots that you are giving us are sublime. Love and reconncection are such wonderful antidotes for a world gone mad.
:) :) :) :) I’m speechless
“I’m making sure that massage oil doesn’t go to waste,”
Oooh, I love this Bette!
awwwwwwwww…..what could be better than this?
Yippee, I’m all caught up now. You just made my heart skip a beat and I must admit that’s not very easy to do. It’s so very stubborn. (smile)
This is a phenomenal story and your attention to detail and emotion is admirable. Your ability to bring into focus the things we often take for granted speaks volumes. Ah yes, “The Picture of Dorian Gray”…. “There is a luxury in self-reproach. When we blame ourselves, we feel that no one else has a right to blame us. It is the confession, not the priest, that gives us absolution.” Both you and Mr. Wilde rock!!
Good God! Why aren’t there more Bette-like lovers out there?! The woman is so gosh dang attentive! She’s passionate about everything she does…no 50% or 74% always full throttle 100%! DAMN!!! Whoever has a lover like that in their lives is one lucky bugger and I hope they let their lover know it!
GREENIE – what are you doing my angel. you should be writing another chappy for us. teehee. i understand having to read this perfection.
BARRIE – loved your comment. wouldnt we all.
ffc – “lavender is fine. the fact that this bottle is two years old and almost full is what i dont like. lets go. …. were going to bed.”
“you dont fall in love with someones personality across a crowded room. this the physical attraction. and the lust, of course.”
“i think youve made some kind of deal with the devil, like dorian gray. “
“her breasts more than filled bettes hands with their suppleness.” hot dayum.
“…peeling out of her own shirt and cotton draw string pants …” cant breath
i cant take it. the emotions and the visuals you take me to are beyond what my little heart can take sometimes. *kisses feet* thank you thank you thank you.
I agree with Barrie…I love Bette!!! I would take her as an imaginary friend*wiggles eyebrows*
i agree with all previous comments. dream lover :)
im sick as a dog but this made me feel a bit better! Its the only fic ive read in a week, so lucky me had lots of parts to come and see when i finally crawled out of bed :)
Thanks!
very nice
awwwwww…beautiful..Bette is so in love with Tina like i think she never was…maybe she needed almost loose her to know how much Tina is her life and if without eher she have nothing..now please bring us some love..lol..another amazing chapter post soon thanks