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Shane paced around the empty seating area of The Planet while Kit sat at the counter and wearily watched her. The slap of Shane’s boots on the tile echoed throughout the closed restaurant and kept time with her racing heart beat.
“Child, you’re about to wear a hole in this floor and I don’t have the credit line to replace it right now,” Kit said. “Sit yourself down and relax. Giving birth takes time. And first babies take even longer.”
Shane nodded, combing her fingers through her hair and looking at her watch for the thousandth time, dismayed to see that only 3 minutes had passed since the last time she checked.
“Come on. Let me make you some breakfast,” Kit said, giving Shane’s shoulders a squeeze.
“No. I’m not hungry, Kit. Thanks.” Shane sat down next to her, pressing her palms flat against the smooth stainless steel counter.
“Tina’s going to be okay,” Kit said gently.
Shane crossed her arms, exhaling slowly. “This whole time, I’ve been completely cool about this. It’s a natural process that women have been experiencing since the world began, right? But when we were filling up that tank? All of a sudden I just wanted to drive them to the hospital.”
“You’re sounding like Bette,” Kit laughed, rubbing Shane’s back.
“She was so great with Tina,” Shane said admiringly.
“That’s how it’s supposed to be. They needed to do this together,” Kit said.
“What did we miss? Do we have a baby?” Alice asked, bursting through the door with Dana right behind her.
“No baby yet. But there’s coffee and it’s hot. Not that you seem to need any,” Kit said, enveloping them both in a hug.
“How’s she doing Shane? Did you see Tina?” Alice asked, pouring Dana and herself steaming mugs of liquid fuel.
“She’s hurting but she’s hanging in. She was in the birthing pool when I left.”
“*****. I know she’s Mother Nature, but *****. I don’t understand why you wouldn’t take any drugs when you were trying to push a person out of your body,” Alice said, sinking into a chair.
Dana sat next to Alice, and Shane watched with mild amusement as they shyly held hands under the table.
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Enjoyed it the first time loved it the second time. Dont forget us Thanks
juz got back from a trip….caught up with the 3 final chapters. you ARE amazing….seriously. you are! wow….breathtaking!!thx for this wonderful stories….
AWWWW!!! Why is it that this pulled at my heart even more and felt more meaningful the second time around? I loved how Bette fell in love all over again, first with Tina and then with their baby girl…that’s how I feel about this story! Thanks so much! What’s next????
Fantastic job, I enjoyed all the chapters. I’m looking forward to your next story.
No no no this cant be the end what ever will I do with myself. It is too good to end
I can’t believe this is it. It was so wonderful. I don’t know how I’m going to get by without my fix each day!
Thank you so much for this wonderful story, you’re really an amazing writer. I hope that you’ll continue “sweet talk”.
I enjoyed it as much as the first time. Thanks for posting this again.
loved the story hope you have another one coming
That was the perfect way to end. Friends and family surrounded by love.
I have enjoyed your story from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing it, and I look forward to any future stories that you might post.
thank you doesnt cover it ffc. im truly in awe of your talent. am grateful you have other stories out there for us. buy dayum girl. please dont pull this. when im depressed by s3 or some storyline that is just killing me here, i want to know i can come by and have my heart healed. thank you for this gift.
Where’s Shane’s line where she says Bette was ‘right there, in it with her”, or something to that effect. It was one of your best lines. Where did it go? I don’t recall Kit saying anything about them ‘needing to do it together” the first time either.
It’s your story, of course, and you can’t help it if some of us have it memorized…
Lovely, lovely, lovely story. One of the best ever posted on here. You took us from their breakup, through stormy territory, and back together again. And you concluded with Jordan’s birth. Lovely. Satisfying. Complete.
Thank you.
I’m so glad u brought this back. It was awesome the first time andit got better with age, I hope u have it in u to write another story about our girls and their adventures. Thanks for taking the time.
There are some important and lovely things in my life I won’t never forget and I know your story wil be one of these things. Pour le bonheur que cette histoire m’a donné, merci.
This a beautiful story from the first word to the last. You’ve told it all with great tenderness and economy of words, and you are a marvel. You deserve every accolade. Thank you for sharing your exceptional writing talents and your big ole bursting-at-the-seams romantic heart.
I’m sorry I am so far behind; finally, a chance to read the last 8 chapters. Thank you for such a wonderful story. You did such a fabulous job from start to finish.
I don’t know if you still read comments, and I can’t figure out how to send a private message, but I have to tell you that you really are the best Tibette writer I’ve ever read. I’ve just finished reading the whole thing, not all at once! but have really enjoyed it second time around. This birth was so beautiful and so much better than Ilene’s, with all her blessed drama! Thank you.
I’ve read this story at least 5 times… usually when I have my period and need a good cry and a good laugh. It’s wonderful. Thank you.
great warm story, thanks! keep it up!
Totally awe inspiringly amazing. I know we are coming to and end but can we and I mean all of your fans coax just a few more chapters out of you. Your writing is so awesome and this story just compliments it wondefully…Thanks
Such a great chapter to start off the day with… maybe just maybe we can get out of u a few more chapters!!!
I really enjoyed this story ~ please post a new story soon. Your writing is addictive!
Neutiful just beautiful, post again soon.
Oh, i love them all…
It was a pleasure to read the first time and it was a pleasure to read again the second time.
Thank you FFC for posting it again.
Yes, I loved it both times. Excellent story and so well written. I’m sure I will revisit again some time down the road. I hope you find the time to write another. Thanks.
Thanks…every chapter was such a pleasure to read.
great chapter,,i wish this is how the third season will go,,
thank you for this great story. it was a privilige to be part of their journey you described. hope to read more from you.
so fucking cute..Bette is a totally new woman love can do that..and be loved too…another amazing chappy thanks FFC :o)
Once again I reading up on your story here FFC…it is so amazing and touching…I always look forward to more, so please do post soon
that was beautiful! I’m with the others..any chance of a sequel???
U r a fantastic writer! Thank you for many hours of entertainment!
I’ve loved your story. Can we beg a sequel out of you??? Your writing is so awesome.
“Also a special note of appreciation to those who revisited this story from the last time. It’s been a pleasure to share this with you again.” -FFC
FFC, the pleasure is all ours, thanks! ;-)
What a great tale…thanks for sharing!
Great story and BEAUTIFUL chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.
This has been one of my favourite things to read. You have the characters perfect, Alice has made me laugh just by being Alice, Shane just being Shane, and the growth of Bette and Tina individually and as a couple. This story has been beautiful from beginning to end. Thank you.
Hey FFC Thank you that was so Beautiful Wonderful Story it’s been really enjoy reading Thanks for that great writing Story I hope the Sequel is coming or another Story LOL! I Love it again Thanks.
This is so amazing!! Keep it up. I hope there will be more to read soon. Thanks!
Thank you! I enjoyed it very much. I hope you write another story for us. Your writing is wonderful and we would miss you on here.
I know you must tire of the praise but I can’t help it…your writing slays me.
great story-i look forward to the sequel
Thank you for your story, just the right amount of love and angst…I’m sad that it’s over, but then happy because after a break, maybe another one???? We can never get enough of your writing..too easy to read!!!
I have enjoyed this story from the beginning to the end. I looked forward every morning to waking up to a new chapter. I sincerely hope your not finished with this.
Loved reading this story. Look forward to your next contributions. Thanks!
Thank you for sharing this story. Your gift leaves me & everyone else wanting for more. Thanks again.
Thanks for the repost. I enjoyed it.
FFC, thank you. I look forward to the next chapter of “Sweet Talk”.
Truly a feel good story from an exceptional writer. We’ve come full circle. Loved it. Um…so, what’s next ffc?
hoped against hope that when i got on this morning that there’d be another one. so, crying in my coffee, no more comfort enough. like i said yesterday, ill revisit when in need my batteries rechared when the board becomes to unbearable and when the hell of s3 starts.
I so enjoyed this story. Thank you.
thanks for posting this again – I didn’t catch it the 1st time. I read the whole thing in a matter of days – great – great -great. very nice and ‘comforting’ considering what we are probably in for in S3 :(
That was such a wonderful story. I wished that this could have happened on the show.
Wow! :-O Can’t believe that this is the finale!! Though I am glad that I managed to catch up, but its quite sad to see it’s ending! Anyway… Thanks FFC for sharing this amazingly heart warming story! ^_^ glad I found this!! And am sure that this won’t be my only time reading it ;-) I know it’s been a long time from the day you posted these stories, I just hope you are fine and you’ll be back again :-)