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Coming Back – chapter 4
Carmen : Thats cute.
Marina : Well, not that cute because she ran away.
Carmen : hum(sad)
Marina : But after she wasnt able to forget about me. So, she came back to me (with an huge smile)
Marina smiles at Jenny, whos lost in deep thought.
Marina : Baby, are you okay ?
Jenny : (kinda wakes up) um.. yeah ! (fake smile at Marina)
Marina : .. you sure ?
Jenny gets up and go to the bathroom.
Jenny : Yeah.. Ill be back in a minute.
Shane looks at Carmen upset. Carmen looked surprise.
Carmen : (looking at Marina) Thats a cute story
Marina : Yeah.. but what happened next wasnt, but now everythings good. (changing subject) Someone wants more wine ?
Carmen : Yes, please.
Shane : No thanks, Im good.
Five minutes later, Jenny still not back from bathroom, Marina starts to worry and Shane sees it, so she gets up and go see at the bathroom. She knock at the door. No answer.
Shane : Jenny, are you okay ?
Jenny : Yeah.. (sniff) Im good.
Shane : (worried) .. you sure ?
Jenny : .. um.. hum..(sniff)
Shane : May I come in ?
Jenny : Ill be there in a second..
Shane : Please
Jenny unlocks the door. Shane enters.
Shane : Thanks.
Shane sees that Jenny had cry.
Shane : Whats wrong, Jen ?
Jenny : Im scared (sniff).
Shane : Why ? Isnt what you wanted being with Marina ?
Jenny : Yeah, its what I want but, Im scared. You know with all the things that happened.
Shane : I know, but dont you think its time to get over it and start something new?
Jenny : I dont know (sniff)
Shane : You should if you (pointing Jenny) want, you guys have now the chance to live your lives together. Do you really want to miss your chance ?
Jenny : (starts crying) No I I dont.
Shane : So.. now.. I know you both had problems cause of each other in the past, but now everything of this is finished so.. cmon and please, but please.. be happy.
Jenny : I Ill tr try.
Shane : (gets up) Cmon our girlfriends are waiting for us.
Jenny smiles at Shane. They come out the bathroom and go sit at the table. Carmen smiles at Shane, and Marina at Jenny. They finish diner, they talk about lot of stuff but nothing very personal. Then they go in the living room, they sit on the couches. Carmen leans on Shane, Jenny does the same thing on Marina. They all watch an old horror movie about zombies (Night of the living dead). After the movie, Jenny and Marina go in Jennys bedroom to get some sleep, and Shane and Carmen are going in Shanes bedroom.
Shane : Baby, (putting on her pyjamas) can I ask you something ?
TBC
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(29 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
I love Marina. :( I love reading about her. Please keep it going!! :)
Love it. These are the two best couples ever.
good keep it coming
I agree with Scurry, these are the two best and the sweetest couples ever. I love it as well, we’ll see you back here soon, Okay!
Love the interaction between the couples. Can’t wait to see more of this lovely story.
I love the story… but I wanted to know… are you french? (par pur hasard…)
Et oui! Waikiki tu as raison je parle français… ou si tu veux Québecois!! :P