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“You don’t sound pleased with that,” Helena felt the need to point out.
“I’m at sea in this dating thing. I suppose I want a relationship.”
“You must be drunk. You’re confiding in me.”
“I must be drunk,” Bette’s grin was crooked as she raised her glass.
Helena grinned leaning closer to Bette.
“That’s a good thing. Remember my boudoir?”
“Shhh. You’re not supposed to warn me about your plan.”
“Sorry. Sounds like Jodi doesn’t want a relationship.”
“How do you figure that?” Bette asked somewhat drunkenly.
“She’s seeing other people when she’s dating you,” Helena replied as if it were obvious.
“What?”
“Bette you do know that you’re a bit of a catch, right?”
“No. No I’m not,” Bette denied.
“Well…That’s certainly not true. Look around. See all the lovely young wild and nubile women eyeing you,” Helena gestured around almost hitting a woman behind her.
“You mean looking at you.”
“Well that too. We’re fabulous looking women. You should expect stares. In fact you deserve stares, Bette.”
“Are you hitting on me?” Bette looked like she actually wanted to know.
“Is it obvious?” Helena made sure to leer.
“I remember the boudoir,” Bette shook her finger at Helena.
“You know she’s a rebound don’t you?”
“I like Jodi.”
“I bet you think you love her,” Helena mumbled.
“N…no. I don’t.”
“That was convincing,” Helena chuckled gesturing for another drink.
“I like her a great deal.”
“And of course you’re not moving too fast or anything like that,” Helena’s look was skeptical.
“Buy me another drink,” Bette ordered.
“You’re following my plan quite nicely. Another drink! For my gorgeous friend here.”
“Flattery…” Bette drawled drunkenly.
“Will get you to my boudoir,” Helena added.
“Flattery is useless on me,” Bette concluded.
“We shall see.”
“It’s not a rebound,” Bette was stubborn.
“Tina was a rebound for me,” Helena found herself saying.
Bette’s look was piercing.
“Don’t.”
“What? It’s true. Winnie and I had just gone through quite a messy bit of business. And then I ran across Tina.”
“Bulldozed everything in your way,” Bette sniped.
“True,” Helena acknowledged.
“Including me,” Bette added
“That was unfortunate,” Helena murmured.
“I’m sure,” Bette’s tone was droll.
“Way to sound convinced, Bette.”
“Shut up.”
“Gladly except awkward silences make me uncomfortable.”
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They’re both such teases !!! I loved this fic Speedy, and I really hope you didn’t intend it as a single chapter story. You must continue.I have to confess I love this very bold Helena, this season 2 Helena actually… Well, the least you could say is that Bette seems to be enjoying herself too… I’m sure she’s not used to having someone soooo confident blatantly but cleverly hitting on her. Anyway, I love it when Helena turns on the seduction mode… That’s funny. Oh, and her accent is a huge asset, that’s for sure… Keep up the fu…ing great work Speed. I can’t wait for an update.
Love it! Do go on :D Thanks, Speedy
i soooooo luv the two alpha girls going at it, i missed this lately with the other stories, hot hot hot!!!!
i soooooo luv the two alpha girls going at it, i missed this lately with the other stories, hot hot hot!!!!
As to why this drunken conversation (or some variation thereof) didn’t take place on the show, I can only speculate that sparkling dialogue such as that on display here isn’t a specialty of TLW writers. And Compatible cries out for a resolution, so please don’t stop here!
i really enjoyed the inter-play…that was really cool! could see them actually engaged in the exchanges…hmm, secrets…do tell…okay now, don’t tease us, you have to come-on with the come-on for us belena’s…post soon!
What they all said! Great dialogue, underlying sexual tension. All a matter of timing! Another TiBetter enjoying this and hoping you’ll continue!
Jodi is a rebound
HAPPY DANCE! when do we get more? hmmm? i’m demanding, i know, but really speed, that was so F**’ing great. i agree with jackieeeee…jodi is a rebound. pfft on her. and i hope you’re writing for season 5. pps!!! really, does this one continue? it should!!!
Don’t think Jodi is a rebound. I want you drunk enough to take you home so we can fornicate on said couch. Did I tell you that I love this sentence? It makes Helena seem sooo sexy, and cocky. ;)
Wow…you’re amazing with dialogue between these two. Keeping it light but always with the underlying sexual tension that I believe exists between the two. Thanks for the post ~ looking forward to the next!
not going to lie…even though i’m like the biggest tibette fan ever….this was really well written.
that was great. I hope it wasn’t a one chapter story. Btte played right into Helena’s plan. I could see the little light bulb over Bette’s head when she realized she might actually want Helena! pps
I hope this is the start of a beautiful story if so you are well on your way. So let’s hope this is the spark needed to make those Belena juices not only flow but explode. It’s good to see you back in the old neighborhood you’ve been missed.
Hey Speed_Racer, Wonderful take on the beginnings of a romance between Bette and Helena. BUt you can’t just leave it there. I demand more, Puh-lease, pretty puh-lease. Just a real delight as Bette and Helena jockied for the alpha spot while snozzled. You had me LOL at the pciture of them on bar stools debating what, when and where it would happen between them. Looks like Jodi is dust. Brilliant! Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Speedy…that was brilliant, but no your not doing too much tibette….but this is way too fun as well. tks
I love cocky, sexy Helena. We didn’t get to see her this season. ***sigh***Maybe S5? PS.
Great start and emphasis on the word start. Snappy dialogue. Very enjoyable.
Bette and Helena just shared a kiss and it was really hot, the dialogue was amazing! I agree with Helena, Jodi is a rebound heheh thanks a lot for writing Belena!!!
Excellent to see thes 2 alphas getting at each other, please up the intensity and the sexual tension and make it hot!!
Speedy so glad to see you come back home. As always I loved it. Looking forward to seeing your other Belena t