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Completely Incompatible
“Ok…ok…I got it…bye Al, love you!” Bette said happy to know that someone still cares about her.
“Love you to Porter…”
Few hours later…
“Hey Al…” Tina greeted her friend with warm embrace.
“Wow TK…look at that…nice dress. Sexy and provocative…are you with someone tonight?” Alice said nudging Tina.
Alice and Tina ware friend since high school. They remains close friends and after that. Working together in this magazine they had a lot of success. Along the magazine they met Bette at one of her famous art diners. Now at age of 28 they were in top 50 of the richest women under 30. Tina on other hand was in top 10 of hottest women in business. That made her very popular and desirable woman, but she had eyes only for one- Bette Porter. Unfortunately Bette never got the picture and accepts Tina just like friend. In Bette’s notion Tina was straight… Yes, there was flirting but nothing more.
Everybody but Bette knew that Tina was in love with her. Alice knew that from years and years and tried to get them together, but without such luck. Bette is stubborn as a donkey on a bridge, and Tina’s too shy to confess her feelings…
“Where’s Dana?” Tina asked looking around…
“She’s coming with Shane tonight, I asked her to do something for me…” Alice said with a smirk on her face…
“What…?” Tina asked
“I told Shane to take the long road…”
“I know that look!” Tina said wriggling her eyebrows.
“Check this out…!” Alice reached in her pocket, taking out the little box. She opened it and the diamond start shining in different colors…
“Oh Alice this is so suddenly, yes…I’ll merry you…” Tina said dramatically, nudging Alice in the ribs…”So tonight is the night?”
“Yup…tomorrow is our 3th anniversary…I’m planning this for midnight…” Alice smiled shyly.
“God, this is so romantic…” Tina sighs…”I really need someone special…”
“You’ll find them…sometimes it needs time for the right moment!” Alice smiled winking…
Tina was sipping her drink at the bar, silently looking around and wondering if Bette will appears tonight. Then a young man approached her and sat next to her.
“Hi…may I buy you a drink?” He asked smiling
“I already have one…” Tina said pointing to her glass. She wasn’t in a mood of stupid pick up efforts, so she gently tries to ignore him. The man nods understandably.
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(51 votes, average: 4.33 out of 5)
i like the way you started the story. more please. thanks.
Please do continue, great beginning
This is great!!! Please continue.
Your Play Bette
Yes please continue.
This is good start and like it, now let see what Bette gonna do, hope she will go after Tina. Please post more, thanks!
i agree with ut… nice start… different too… interested to see how this plays out
Excellent start. Can’t wait to see what Bette’s does. Thank you.
create start a b & t beginning is always good lol
Sure, let us see how Bette wakes up from her clue-less-ness… ;-)
Wow! Yes please continue. This is a good start! I feel bad for Tina, I know what it feels like to love someone and not be able to tell them… I hope Bette will open her eyes. PPS
glad you’re back with a new story
Why is it we can see the forest, while completely ignoring the trees? Great start! Thanks!