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Complications, Chapter 17
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There was silence in the room now that Mark had left. No one quite knew what to say. Jenny was still crying, held securely in Shane’s arms. Alice cleared her throat and attempted to change the subject.
“So, Shane, how’s it going with you and Carmen?” As soon as it slipped out, she knew how dumb it was.
She had a tendency to speak without thinking, and that tendency was shining brightly through at the moment. Shane didn’t look angry, though. She just shrugged.
“All right, I guess.”
“You mean you’ve made progress?” Bette asked, her curiosity piqued.
“Not really. I mean, I don’t think she hates me or anything…”
Thankfully, Tina swooped to the rescue.
”It’s okay, Shane. You don’t need to talk about it if you don’t want to.”
Everybody glared at her. They all wanted to know. How could she not? It was like a real life soap opera. They were all brought out of their anger by a loud dinging sound.
“Turkey’s ready!” Tina stated, perking up and getting up to go take it out of the oven. “The rest of dinner’s almost ready, too, so don’t eat anything!”
Carmen pulled up to the white house that seemed to rise from the ground like a mountain. It was huge, with four stories including the basement and complete with a cleaning crew. She walked towards the steps that were currently occupied by Mercedes and her nephew, Hector. As soon as she was in earshot she heard her friend’s laughter.
“What?”
“You look like shit!” Mercedes managed to breath out through the laughter.
Hector was now laughing with her and the two looked like they could be brother and sister. She looked down at her clothes and saw that they were rumpled and the same as the night before’s.
“Your hair, too.” Hector added helpfully, trying to stifle the laughter that remained.
“Shit. Shut up, Heck!” Carmen snapped in mock anger, using Hector’s nickname and ruffling his hair to let him know she wasn’t actually mad.
“Ah! She’s here!” Simon walked forward, embracing the young Latina, while his wife, a gorgeous blonde haired woman, walked out behind him with a warm smile on her face.
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Welcome back…I am most definitely reading!!! Thanks!
Reading it, and really enjoying it. I would love to see more Danish. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait for more.
Hey, really really sorry for not commenting before!! Just wanted to tell you that I sure do love your story! Specially the dialogues between all of the characters and the comments from them, seems realistic. Do please continue, for many many more chapters!!
Welcome back, we read,we enjoy and will do so in the future thanks
GOOD CHAPTER !
Glad you got out in time. Keep posting.
Still reading. Still loving it :).
Nice to see you back! still reading too! :)
Still here
Hey, Baby-girl ;-D . . . just wanted to let’cha know that I’ve been here from the start enjoying this off the chain story ~big whoop~ I’m lovin’ it to death and I love ya’ for postin’ it and givin’ me another update!!! Anyways, I’m a sucker for my girls, Shane and Carmen . . . I donna’, guess they kinda’ just grew on me or something ~sly smile~ Anyways, as long as you keep updating, I’ll keep readin’ and commenting for ya’, Babe ;-) Sooooo, yeah . . . guess that’s it . . . post soon and try if you can to make it longer!! HOLLA’ and like always from me, LYLAS ;-p
Glad to see you posting. I’m an avid reader :) Thanks for the update!