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Complications, Chapter 24
“What is it you want, Gabriel? Pity? Because I’m not really the pitying type.”
“No, Shane. I want understanding, that’s all… that’s all I want from you. These were my examples of love. Rape and death. That’s all I had to go on, and I thought that…” His voice cracked, and he leaned forward. “I thought that was all love could be. It’s not. I’ve seen what you and Carmen have together. It’s too late for me, but it’s not too late for you two. Go to her. Beg her to take you back. You need her. Please, Shane, please. Don’t lose that one person that’s so important. Don’t be like your grandfather. Don’t let someone take her from you. Be happy. Please.”
Shane got up from the twin bed she’d been sleeping on in the hotel room, glancing quickly over at Gabriel who had passed out on his own twin bed hours ago. She walked over to the balcony, smiling slightly as the wind blew against her somewhat exposed body. She reached over and grabbed her phone, hitting speed-dial number one, and waiting. Unfortunately, she got the answering machine.
”Hey, baby, it’s me. I… I just wanted to say that I miss you. And I wish you were here with me. And I’m sorry we fought. I hate fighting with you, it never gets us anywhere, and I hate to think that I might have upset you. God, I feel like such a pussy saying things like that, but… it’s true. I don’t want you to think that I fight with you because I don’t love you. So I wanted you to know that I love you with all my heart, and… And I wish you were here right now so I could hold you. It’s cold out here. Snowy and everything. Would you believe I’ve never seen snow in my life? Well, it snowed a little in Texas, but never anything like this. A slight dusting, maybe, but here, there’s mounds of it everywhere! I’ll take a picture of it on my phone and send it to you.” She sniffed. “I think that I’m gonna go back inside now, it’s getting fucking freezing out here and I’m probably going to get cut off by your answering machine sometime soon. I love you, and I miss you. Bye.”
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(32 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
Thank you so much for the a** kicking, I’ve been waiting for that!! haha… The arresting thing was so great, can’t wait to see what happens to them next!! What if Gabriel could have been able to have that opinion in the last episode of the show instead??!! But no… And Shanes message could’t have been any sweeter… Just loved this chapter!! As always…=)
Damn Alice, Dana, and Carmen all in jail!
Sweetness . . . I love Shane’s message she left Carmen . . . so right . . . and it appears that Dana might be in the shit-house . . . she may have some ‘slainin’ to do, if you know what I mean. lmfao!!! I wonder how this is all gonna’ play out with Alice, Dana AND Carmen all down at the police station . . . I don’t know about you, but if I was Carmen, I’d be pissed . . . all she was tryin’ to do was get a little bit of sleep when all of a sudden she went from body-guard . . . to consultant (Howie) . . . to a convicted fellon, so to speak. LMFAO!!!! Anyways, you’re doin’ an awesome job, Baby-girl . . . please post soon!!! Like always from me, LYLAS ;-p
Sweetness . . . I love Shane’s message she left Carmen . . . so right . . . and it appears that Dana might be in the shit-house . . . she may have some ‘slainin’ to do, if you know what I mean. lmfao!!! I wonder how this is all gonna’ play out with Alice, Dana AND Carmen all down at the police station . . . I don’t know about you, but if I was Carmen, I’d be pissed . . . all she was tryin’ to do was get a little bit of sleep when all of a sudden she went from body-guard . . . to consultant (Howie) . . . to a convicted fellon, so to speak. LMFAO!!!! Anyways, you’re doin’ an awesome job, Baby-girl . . . please post soon!!! Like always from me, LYLAS ;-p
Okay, first of all, Bette and Tina are the freaking best couple on the sho….oh wait a second, IC has successfully destroyed every couple on the show, so I guess there isn’t really a ‘best’ one anymore (BUT if there was, it would totally be B&T–lol). Okay, Shane’s dad is still a bastard, just not as bastardy as I once thought. I hope Alice and Dana do stay together, but Dana will have some serious a** kissing to do. I loved the dinner conversation. So awkward and realistic, but also filled with acceptance and tenderness. Great chapter, thanks for posting.
I love this story but I love alice, dana and lara the most please post soon so I can see what will happen next great update