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Complications
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“Do you need help?” She asked, extending her hand to grasp one of the suitcases. Carmen smiled, at least someone was on her side.
“Yeah, thanks.”
When they finished packing up Carmen’s things, Jenny stood in front of Carmen and took her hands in her own. They were silent for a moment as Jenny noticed, once again, the way Carmen’s brown skin looked compared to her own pale skin. She had always liked that about Carmen and Shane. They each complimented each other so well. It was like God’s way of accessorizing.
“Jenny… I don’t want to lose your friendship. It means a lot to me. So, if sometime you wanted to get coffee or something, I’d be cool with that.” Carmen whispered softly, looking from the road to Jenny’s face then to the road again.
“That sounds really nice.” Jenny replied, just as a jeep pulled up behind the two of them.
Angus unlocked the door to the planet, then pushed it open, letting Kit in. He was insisting on doing everything for the mother-to-be, he wanted to make it easy so that maybe, just maybe, she might go through with the pregnancy.
“Are you OK, honey? Do you need anything? ‘Cause I’m here for you.” Angus asked, smiling his best ‘I really want to be a dad’ smile.
“What I need is for you to stop coddlin’ me. I am a grown woman. I don’t need you to do everything for me.” Kit replied pushing him away. “Besides, It’s not like I’m that far into the pregnancy. I mean, I haven’t even started the weight gain, AND I haven’t had a doctor confirm it yet.”
Angus smiled, “I know, I… I just really wanna be a dad. I mean, I look at Angelica, Bette, and Tina, and… I don’t know, it makes me want to do that. I want to sit at crappy kindergarten plays and yell ‘that’s my baby!’ when they’re calling out the cast, no matter how horrible he was. You know?”
Kit just sighed and looked away.
Bette woke up to the sound of crying over the baby monitor, again. She groaned, standing up and stretching before turning to tell Tina she would handle it. Except Tina wasn’t there. Bette got up, walking to her daughter’s room to find Tina passed out on the floor. Panic and terror crossed her face as she quickly ran over to her, checking for a pulse. It was there, and strong, but Bette had to be sure. She picked her up and placed her gently back in bed, grabbing an ice pack and placing it on her forehead before running to Angelica’s room and calming the whimpering child. As soon as Angelica fell asleep, she headed back to her room to find Tina sitting up in bed, ice pack in her lap as she looked around.
“What happened?” She groaned, confusion evident on her face as she looked around the room. “Where’s Angelica?”
Bette frowned and walked over to her.
“I’m not sure what happened, I walked in and you were just lying there, and Angelica’s in her room.”
“Oh.” Tina frowned, rubbing her head. “I must have fainted. I feel exhausted.”
Bette smiled, “Yeah, me too. I think you just need to get some sleep.”
Tina returned the smile. “Yeah, I’m sure you’re right.”
Alice moaned, being pushed harder and harder against the floor. “Oh, yeah, right there, Dane. Oh, yeah. God, I always knew there was an advantage to dating a sports star.”
Dana pushed harder into Alice’s shoulder, smiling. “Yeah, baby, your trapezius is really tense.”
Alice groaned, smashing her face against the floor.
“You want someone who knows their way around the human body, you should try dating Harrison.”
Alice stopped and twisted, looking up at her girlfriend.
“What?” Dana asked, as if she didn’t know Alice would take her comment at more than face value.
“Did you honestly do the deed with Harrison, because honestly, Dana, that would be gross. That would be like me having sex with Harrison.” There was a pause, then they both shuddered, the image of Alice and Dana’s doubles partner together burned in their brain. “Well, so much for getting laid tonight.” Alice murmured, getting up and heading to bed. Dana just smacked herself in the head with her palm.
“Stupid!” She yelled at herself, before getting up and following Alice to the bedroom.
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I alwasy love a fic-that has my original Danish…love it so far. Please cont’. Cheers!!
I sure hope that Tina passing out is not a sign of pregnancy. I would hate for that Henry dude to be around again. Maybe a little over worked, or something of that nature. Yes, for keeping Dana around and with Alice of course. This is a great start, and I hope that you will continue.
Yay Danish are in it! Keep going it’s great so far.
This is a really great start, I want to know what’s going to happen to Shane and Carmen! Really good writing!
This is good start and like it!
Hey PE, excellent beginning. I’m happy to see that Dana’s still with us…. so that means some Danish is in the offing. And Sharmen is great…even apart… but with the prospect of reuniting (hint hint) so please continue and give us more of each. And what the heck happened to Tina that she was on the floor and needed an ice pack? I wanna know. Please post more soon.Thanks.
this is really good! i really wanna know whats gonna happen wih shane and carmen!! plz continue!!
This is pretty good! Please continue!
Tina should go get check. Nice start.
Great start. Would luv to see you con’t this. Will Carmen speak to Shane?