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CONFRONTATION Chapter 1 (ctn’d from Exploration Chapter 1-5)
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"Put it back T, thank you for thinking of me but I want to be here with you in case you need me in the night. I already called James and told him I wouldn’t be in tomorrow or that I would be late. Now get back in our bed woman. This is where you belong, right here beside me." Bette said softly pushing Tina back down from the bed. She took the pillows from her unresisting hands and helped her slip under the covers. "Try to get some rest, I’m just going to shower and change. You can have another painkiller in half an hour."
Tina had tears in her pain filled eyes, "What did I do to deserve you?" she asked softly.
Bette kneeled on the floor beside her, brushing her lips gently across Tina’s, "You loved me," she said simply smiling, then went to prepare for bed.
Tina although still very uncomfortable, did feel much better then previously. She listened to Bette moving around in the bathroom and suddenly heard her swear.
"Fuck!" Bette said clearly from the bathroom.
"Bette?" Tina said automatically moving to get up.
Bette stuck her head in the bedroom. "Sorry, sorry nothings wrong. I just started my period too, just bad timing. I don’t get any notice with mine, it’s just suddenly there! I hate that!" Bette grinned. "But now we really have something in common." she said ducking back into the bathroom.
Tina chuckled at the irony, while she listened to the shower run. She pictured Bette soaping her body and smiled.
It wasn’t long before she heard Bette finishing up so she got up to go to the bathroom herself and brush her teeth. "I actually like this diaper," she admitted.
"It’s not a diaper T," Bette corrected fondly.
"I know, I know, but can I get a fresh one for the night?" she said removing the old one and the sodden tampon."
"God, T are you sure everything’s okay. This seems like a lot of blood." Bette asked really concerned as she handed her another "diaper"
"Yes, it’s normal for me. Don’t worry," she reassured Bette loving the way she was being protective. "What about you? Are you in any pain?"
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Okay, that’s it I’m done!
I thought this chapter was really sweet. I suffer from chronic pain and it would be so nice to have someone to take care of things every once in a while. Thanks for posting!
what a wonderful chapter!at the end I thought: hmm, was almost this whole chapter about T`s period!?:) loved how Bette took care of Tina!! But what do u mean with youre done!?I`m a little frightened here – PLEASE,by all means, continue with youre fantastic posts!!!thanks:)
I love your story, and feel some comments of your story are extremely annoying too…. hopelly it wont ruin my chance to read you fanfic on site!
I’m sorry but I mean I’m done posting here. I appreciate all the people that supprt me but the one’s that don’t have won out. I’m tired of the verbal abuse and accusations. Thanks again
hmmmm while I can’t identify with the circumstances I must say that ‘Bette’s’ desire to help T through this was so nice… its a part of nature… a part of life and its part of the gift of life… you have such a daft hand at not only the humor but also taking on some things that might be uncomfortable and taboo… keep on pushing the envelope… hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
Please don’t let funnyone win. If she doesn’t like your stories, she does not have to read them. I find it very irritating when a reader doesn’t like a story and then continues to follow the writer around and harp about it. Funnyone has made her position very clear and should NOW MOVE ON. Too many writers are being harassed into deciding it’s not worth it. Cls, please keep writing, there are those of us who enjoy and look forward to ALL of your stories and are able to tell the difference between fantasy and real life.
If funnyone’s post here is indicative of what you call abuse, I wouldn’t be so upset. Here, she seemed respectful but just had her own opinion. She expressed herself quite clearly. She, like everyone here, can choose to read or not read the fanfic. Each to her/his own, right. This was a sweet chapter.
mlyn3251, I would have been happy to if only cls could either step up and admit that she was putting forth a rape fantasy for our enjoyment or at least explain why Bette, Tina or anybody else should enjoy such a thing. ‘Giving up control can be fun’ is the closet she or anyone has come, but the story wasn’t about that, no pretend weapon (as in the title of the story) would be needed for that, nor was Bette just surprising Tina in the dark. I do support her right to do that, I support the right of consenting adults to do what they like, I’ve never suggested she be censored or that she should censor herself. But she did put that story out, and it was a rape fantasy. And now I’m done. May you all have a wonderful day and enjoy the freedom you have. May your freedom grow. Californians vote NO on Prop 8.
i haven’t read the story yet, but please just ignore funnyone. i really like your writing.
Love your stories, Dont let anyone,stop you from posting on this site.. This is a Fiction site.so we all live in a fantady when we read the stories. Love how Bette took care of Tina,and the love that she shown her.
C, do not let them win. They are trying to push their agendas on you and force you to compromise your writing, please don’t. Do not allow the minority to punish the majority of readers that support you. You know that I am a very loyal and devoted supporter of your writing. I am thrilled that you are pushing the envelope by writing about things that some may consider taboo. There was a time that if someone would have written about gay life styles or interracial relationships that the author would have been ran out of town. It is because of people like you that tolerance and acceptance occurs. C, everything you have written has been behind closed doors by two consenting adults and no one has been hurt. As for the readers if you do not like a story don’t read it; not every story is for everyone, but that does not give one the right to harass the author.
As for this chapter, I use to be like Tina until I discussed it with my doctor. Found out that I suffered from endometriosis. Had surgery and have had no further problems. C, you did a fantastic job depicting how one suffers, and I love how nurturing Bette was. Glad you went there. I always get excited when I see that you have updated this wonderful story. I hope that you will continue and PVS!!!!!
After reading the many posts regarding the content of “cls” stories and while I don’t post messages very often, I have to leave my very simple statement. If you have read the story before and it bothered you then,and then you read another story and it bothered you again…. don’t read it anymore! I don’t watch horror movies because they bother me. Plain and simple.
I enjoy your stories, as well as many others do. Don’t let a few discourage you. Please continue to post.
That was really nice and strange. Who knew your period could be so romantic?
PLEASE keep posting your wonderful stories. DON’T let funnyone or ANYONE stop you.
I have read the fics in question, and there is no doubt in my mind that it is indeed a rape fantasy, and saying, “it’s not really rape, they knew what they were doing,” is ludicrous. Rape is one person forcing another to commit sex acts through intimidation. In this fic one person was PRETENDING to force another to commit sex acts through intimidation, including the use of a “weapon.’ That is why it is called a rape FANTASY. Pretending to rape. Get it? Funnyone did not attack you in any way. She merely asked, in a reasonable manner, why you think this is sexy, and why won’t you own it? I concur completely, and I also want to know how this can be compared in any way to writing about gay or interracial marriage, which do not, as far as I know, include the use of fear and intimidation of either partner, and toeven speak of those situations in comparison to this is ridiculous. I would also wonder what Jennifer and Laurel would think of their characters being used in a fiction like this. Not much, I am pretty sure. I think that since you have chosen to go to this kind of place here in a site for much loved L word characters,and not at a site that welcomes fics of violence and intimidation, fantasy or otherwise,, you need to be prepared for people having strong objections. Don’t play victim, crying that you are being abused. You made the choice.
let’s not turn this into a playground situation where people are taking sides. cls please don’t leave, you have more fans than not and you owe it to those fans and yourself to continue. there will always be nay sayers in life…but the victory is carrying on despite them. please continue if not with this story than another one. you’re too good to stop.
I do not see any comment anywhere that asked or wanted the author to stop writing. The “naysayers” only wanted the author to take responsibility for the content of her writing of one objectionable fic. It wasn’t made clear that opposing comments weren’t permitted. I guess if dissenting comments on that fic cause the author to threaten to stop writing altogether because people are being “so mean to her,” that would be her choice.
That was one of the most tender, sensitive, full of love and compassion stories that I ever read. I can’t say that there is no such love and attentiveness, cause love makes you do those things and more. I loved the way you wrote them in this story and the kind of openness that they have in their relationship. I believe it’s everybody’s dream to have this kind of relationship where you can be who you are, at any shape or state with your loved one. You are a great writer C and I loved this one so very much, I hope we can see more of what you encoded in this story. Have a great day. Love
caeleigh…you know as well as i do that when a writer puts their work out there it takes alot of courage. they know in the back of their minds that everyone will not necessarily like what they put out but when someone dosen’t like it and continues to follow them and continues to leave negative things it gets discouraging to that author. noone is saying that you can’t disagree with what you read but there is a difference between disagreeing and picking (for lack of a better word) there are plenty of stories i have begun to read and then was like wtf is this. guess what i do…i start on something else. i think we know what we are doing if we continue to follow an author around and leave unproductive comments…we know what we are trying to do. there are other ways that this site has provided us if we want to say something to the author besides the comment section. too many authors have been chased away…and it needs to stop.
Funnyone if you have issues with the content of certain stories Y oh Y do u continue to read them?? CLS PLEASE DON’T LEAVE OR QUIT BECAUSE OF ONE OR TWO PPL WHO DON’T HAVE THE COMMON SENSE TO STAY AWAY FROM SOMETHING THAT THEY R OBVIOUSLY UNCOMFORTABLE WITH!!
Freedom, as an American I have the Freedom of many things, freedom to chose what I read, freedom to say what I want, freedom to close my door at the end of the night and be with who I want or not & do wha I want or not. cls, if you choose to continue to write for this site, I sure will continue to read if not I thank you for all you have shared. Funny if you choose to continue to read than insist your catique is the end all be all, I am afraid my friend that we may not have to many authors left, please tread carefully. As for the Story Cls, I to had those terrible periods in my younger day, now my poor daughter suffers w/them, someone should write about them so nobody feels alone. Sweet chapter, Thank you, Md
In my comments earlier I was trying to say what Skycaptain so eloquently said. It is one thing to object to a story and leave a comment saying so in the comments for THAT STORY and quite another to post comments in subsequent stories. That is nothing but harassment. You voiced your opinion now leave it alone. I don’t think an author should have to “own up” to anything. They put the stories out there for people to enjoy or not enjoy.
It should also be noted that the “fantasy rape” story was timid compared to others that were written on this SAME SITE!! And then there were others that were not a fantasy acted out between two agreeable ppl. And instead was about violence, that lead to healing on various aspects of those particular stories. So why are ppl so bent out of shape with this story and not those?? Maybe because they have not read them, know about them, because they have not been around long enough. And most importantly this is ALL FICTION!!! Why are ppl making it so personal, and even referring to THE actresses, who hardly ever visit the sites, and possibly far less read the stories?? They know it’s fiction and also respect the views/opinions of others, they have both said so in many interviews, through the years. CLS, I SAY AGAIN DON’T QUIT!! U WILL MEET OPPOSITION ON ANY SITE YOU GO TO EVENTUALLY. IGNORE THEM, ACCEPT THAT THAT IS THEIR OPINIONS AND YOU CONTINUE WITH YOUR CREATIONS IN WHICH EVER WAY YOU NEED TOO.
plsssssssssssssss dont go!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont let this looser girl win!! pls pls i love ur storys!!!!! plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss.btw this chapter was the sweetest ever. esp since im just like tina and in my bad days as we speak. i need ur bette porter in my life asap. lol im sharing to much info right? sorry 3 days of this is sucks!!!!. pls dont let anyone making u feel bad stay we love u pls pls pls.
I came across this story today. I have not read the previous chapters so I can’t really elibrate my thoughts on it. But a victim of rape and a person who has done research on S&M, I can say there’s a difference. Unfortunatley my computer crash and I lost it. But here’s an article that I found on it and just maybe some of us can undertand why some don’t view this as a rape fantasy. Also talking to people who’s live this lifestyle, they will never say it’s a rape fantasy.In S/M, or sadomasochistic sex play, the mutually agreed upon playacting is based on fantasy situations of dominance and submission. One partner will “force” her/his will on the other, consensually experimenting with activities that involve physical pain, discomfort, or intensity, until the other gives the signal to stop. S/M pushes the boundaries between pleasure and pain. This is normal to many. Consensual sexual behavior has many variations (including S/M), and it really comes down to what is right for you and your partner(s).Mutual consent is what distinguishes S/M from abuse and assault, just as consent distinguishes sex from rape. S/M can encompass physical and/or psychological interactions, and may cause pain, but not physical or emotional damage. Accidents can happen during S/M, just as in any other physical activity, but this differs from abuse. For some, S/M play can increase sexual pleasure and open up hidden issues of power, which are always present in human intimacy. Trust plays a large part in S/M activity. Some refer to S/M as sensuality and mutuality. Partners need to talk with one another before they begin a “scene” to learn what each of them likes, would like to try, and would not like to do under any circumstances.When engaging in S/M play it is important for the partners to establish a safe word. Safe words are unique and would not be connected to what is happening during the S/M experience. If a partner uses the safe word, it is the cue to stop. Because of the power, pleasures, and pain dynamics associated with S/M, words like stop, no, don’t, that hurts, etc. are generally not used as safe words. If you’re not sure where to draw the line for yourself, try fantasizing about it first before acting. If in your fantasies you go beyond your own limits of behavior, it’s okay because that’s exactly what fantasy is, a mental testing ground for limits. If your fantasies repel you because you are afraid you might act on them, this is important info about yourself and your limits. Remember, you are in control. If you’re not in control, then it’s not S/M. I hope this help!Btw this chapter was sweet!
Hi, great story, as are all your postings. When I started reading your controversial story, I did think what is this? I don’t like violence, and it confused me initially as it seemed unusual for you. But as you read on it became obvious what was going on. The world would be a strange, horrible, and intolerant place if only what we agreed with was available to read. And life would be poorer if we force our censored opinion on others. And one of the few things I have learned in life is that we should always try and understand where someone else is coming from. More importantly I want to find out what happens when Tina recovers. Don’t leave us hanging!
Dear cls, I am deeply sorry that other people/readers on this site have made you decide to stop writing. I strongly believe in freedom of speech and thought. This is a fan-fiction site, a place where people can leave their stories about the characters of the L word. You have the right to write stories of FICTION on this site. If others have a problem with the stories written, than they should just NOT read them or get the hell of this site! I truly think that critisising others in such a negative way, shows very little respect to others and is very narrow-minded! As said before, posting on a site like this shows so much courage! It;s putting yourself out there, hoping to get some nice words. Well, i have some nice words for you cls: You are a very brave person for posting and writting and I personaly have the deepest respect for a person who writes such amazing stories!
I agree with what you said skycaptain , superdaddy, and succulent1. I also agree that it is okay to disagree and leave a non-supportive comment. Where the authors are having issues is with the vicious attacks that they are receiving through pm, and the continual rehashing of a previous story. We should be leaving comments pertaining to this particular story yet we are discussing a previous story. I too have stopped reading a story because it was not my taste or it went against my beliefs. I will not disrespect an author because they choose to write something that some might find offensive. Not too many years ago, it was almost impossible to find stories about LGBT or interracial relationships because it went against the belief of the Bible and publishers were afraid of offending too many groups and being boycotted. Today that is not an issue. That is what I was trying to convey is that in that era, writing about gays was very offensive as apparently writing about a rape fantasy is today. CLS wrote about a type of fantasy between two very consenting adults, and remember you cannot rape or intimidate a willing soul. Some obviously do not see it as a fantasy and that is okay. But CLS nor do any author, deserve the personal attacks that she has received through pm.
I agree that comments should not follow the author, but stay with that particular story. Both of the characters knew what was going on and therefore it was ok, it’s just that we as readers didn’t know and that obviously enraged some people. Should we comment at all or just via pm’s? This should have been dealt with between the 2 parties involved and not infront of an audience. I’m sorry to see cls go, but take a look at the names we don’t see post here anymore….she is only one in a number of writers who’ve left for the other site. If you feel that strongly about a story PM the author don’t put it up on the board for everyone to read!!
So sweet and loving… I’ll be thinking of this chapter next month when I’m annoyed at having my period. Love Tina in the “diaper” and how adorable is Bette! I often fail to comment even though I have truly enjoyed a story so let me say that your talent will be missed. I appreciate and applaud all the authors who make themselves vulnerable and open themselves to comments. We’ve just had allyemmerson discussing leaving the site for similar reasons as well as linbooks stating that she had experienced the same. It makes me wonder who will be driven out next??
I so love this chapter!!! CLS, I love the way you write and the amazing storie you put out for us. PLEASE DO NOT GO!!! Thank you so much.
it’s nice to see bette taking such care of tina, cute! now about this jodie… no drama…personally if i don’t like a story i just stop reading it. if i didn’t like ur writing i won’t following ur stories! just write with heart and, remember you can’t please everyone! :)PPS
I have a question! Where the hell is Chapter 2? Get on it! Chop chop! Don’t make me start slamming you publicly. I’ll do it. I will call you a sicko and a lazy ass for leaving me hanging. Delaying gratification is mean and perverted. I’ll do it. I’m not scared.
I will be the first to agree that rape is a horrible, life altering event. I too was molested as a very young child. I don’t however hold that against the people who choose to write fan fiction stories. It is one thing to make a comment or send a pm in reference to a story, but to continue the “attack” through other stories is nothing short of bullying the author. I totally agree with honda90 about the large number of writers who have already left this site and I find it reprehensible that authors are “chased” away. There has only been one writer that I can think of over the past three years, that I think should have been banned from the site (and she was) but this writers style was such that multitudes of people on the site were repulsed. All I can say is that I was delighted to find this site and initially thought that it was the best thing I had ever seen. What a great place for writer’s to share their prospectives on what in my opinion has become the most iconic fictional lesbian couple ever. By the variety of stories, it is very apparent that everyone has their own agenda for this uber couple. That is the beauty of it, everyone is free to write them in their own style. There have been other controversies on this site with a number of really good authors – some have stayed, some have sadly left. My closing advice to CLS is that you should do what you feel that you want to do, not what you feel forced into.Stop reading negative pms – simply delete them and go on. To those who were offended by the story – stop reading the author, but also stop confronting her again and again. Your points are very clear and I think we all understand how you feel. Enough already.
great chapter would be nice to have a Bette around
Okay I tried to ignore the controversy on the other story but I think the following: When I write a chapter and post it, I expect the comments to follow to be on that chapter or PM me BUT do not go on and on about it. That’s harassment.Yes, I do know what rape in a relationship is, been there, that’s quite different to cls’ story…also my 8 year old son was raped by 2 teenage boys [his cousins], that’s quite different again to cls’ story. WHY???? because her story is about ‘consenting’ adults. Hey, not so long ago when I was young [and still in many quarters] lesbian sex was regarded with the same horror. In fact my son was raped in retaliation for me being a lesbian!!!! I don’t usually share this shyt, I try to move on. But I felt the need to speak up.Cls, if you are feeling harassed and the PMs are worse then these expressions in public then I think its time to report this to the administrators.Funnyone if you support cls’ right [and I quote you] to make the choice to write what she did, WHY are you still harping on about it? What is it that you want from her? An apology for upsetting your feelings? an Admission of GUILT or what? I’m not sure I get what you and others are trying to achieve unless it is to stop freedom of expression. If that is so then shades of the book-burning NAZIS and I will re-consider posting at this site. Art/literature reflects life and that is what cls did whether we like it or not. I don’t think people should speak for Laurel or Bette either. No one knows what they think and I’ve seen them both in some risque roles. I certainly wouldn’t waste their time by asking them.As for me:There are stories I simply choose not to read and writers I choose not to follow because I’ve read them once and not liked it; because I don’t like the topic & I’ve told a writer that e.g. Chicki because the subject was too close to home and she supported me on that with sympathy; or I’m not into the characters. I make a choice as is my right with anything I read, watch, listen to, participate in.At first I did not read the story in question but when I read the comments on the next story I chose to go back and check it out. I knew from the get go that it was Bette and that it was a game they play. I’ve read other similar stories on this site. I was not horrified or frightened or stressed by cls’ story.I appreciate all those who read my stories so I don’t mean to offend anyone here but I think ENOUGH IS ENOUGH.Time to end the debate/argument about the other story and stop harassing the author. Its not a nice situation to be in and may well stop other authors from posting.I have had hours of pleasure at this site. I would hate to see good writers leave because they cannot post in peace.
cls…look at your supporters…take that to heart and come back.
That was absolutely loving and just as it should be between 2 lovers. And at least if T’s pregnant then there’ll be NO more periods for a while. PPS
Okay firstly, I think we need some name changes. CRANKYONE seems to fit. :) Just kidding, but cls, are you really going to let some strongly opinionated people take away your right to write what you do? Have you noticed how much attention you have garnered for a 2 chapter story? PHENOMENAL!!!!!! Has Funnyone or any of your other sparring partners garnered as much attention for a short story as you have? NO…they have not. You deserve the attention because YOU are a talented, and much read author. DON’T let them take that from you. If you choose to write again, we will be here to read it. Please give us the opportunity to enjoy your talent again. THANK YOU for making people think, and feel, and express.
Well CLS you know what I think about the whole harassment issue and the folks responsible — so I won’t repeat myself here. I was VERY SADDENED to read that you had decided not to post again. This is the WORST news for all of us that love your writing to pieces. I fail to understand why the harassment is continuing but obviously a few folks have personal agendas. Please don’t let them win with their bully tactics — it reminds me of the blasted Republican party under shrubsville! Based on the majority of the current comments, most folks love the chapter and the continuation of the story. I hope our positive energy overcomes your trepidation and you decide to post again! If not, can we sign up for an email list and you could send updates to us??? All the best – East
Aww… that was your last post? Say it ain’t so. I’m sorry that a few readers have ruined your desire to write. I really hope that the writing bug bites you again soon.
That brought back a lot of memories(thank goodness, for surgeries, half the plumbing is missing). I was in the same boat as Tina and ended up living with the “diaper” thingys. Not fun but Tina at least has Bette to take care of her. The love shown through with the way Bette took care of Tina. Now that is love. I used a heating pad at night on my back, that seemed to help me sleep.
cls…I hope you continue posting. You just need to read the comments and move forward. I love your stories but everyone will look at the same thing differently. Fact of life. Just be strong and keep writing. If someone doesn’t like it..they don’t have to read it. I hope you continue to write B & T. pps
This chapter is so cute. We would all love someone taking care of us the way Bette took care of Tina. As for the other elephant in the room, I hope you can see now cls that you have a huge fan base. There are a lot of people who really repect your talent. As an artist we would expect nothing less than for you to continue to express yourself in your own way. You do own it, you put your name next to your stories, and we read them voraciously and can’t wait for the next chapter. You don’t need to explain anything to us or apologize, that’s the beauty of art, its interpretation lies in the eye of the beholder, we either like it or we don’t. If we like it, hopefully we comment or PM, and if we don’t we comment or we PM and WE.MOVE.ON. Funnyone, I am sorry this issue is obviously painful for you, and we all see that, but it’s time to let this go. I am still not sure exactly what you expect from cls (apart from a self-flagellation in the town square at noon :)). Please let cls be. We have lost so many very talented writers on this site because of bullying.
That was so sweet, it must be great to love someone that much. PS
Great post CLS. Bette is so sweet and loving. Tina is a lucky gal to have somebody who’s so attentive to her needs. I sincerely hope that you’ll reconsider you decision not to post your stories on this site. It’s apparant from all the comments that you have a tremendous amount of support from the readers. Please say you’ll continue posting? Please??
I agree please do not let a few narrow minds stop you from posting. Take some time and think about the joy you have brought me and others!! I trust you will think on it. And one last thing I have read far more on this sight that could offened others!!
CLS — You may remember me from the other site commenting on your story with a ROFL. Obviously, different readers have different reactions–among these, ignorance and misplaced feelings masquerading as ‘feminism.’ You really don’t need to answer to anyone’s harassment or constant need to look stupid really. Take a few days break. Maybe you will feel differently.You are incredibly talented (not that I know what that means) — don’t let a few un-funnyones stifle your voice and creativity.Much Love.
Yeah, Bette and Tina knew what it was a game, that explains the fantasy part. What the game entailed was Bette wearing a mask, grabbing Tina from behind in the dark, holding what might have been a knife to her throat and demanding Tina perform a series of sexual acts. That DOES make it a rape fantasy and to say otherwise is disingenuous and self serving. Nobody made you go there, that was completely your choice (and yes, I actually DO support your right to make that choice) so step and own it for what is. If others enjoy that, so be it. I still find it deeply disturbing that that is where you wanted to go.
Geez I remember those days well and do not miss them at all.
CLS we do hope you keep writing and sharing with us your extraordinary gift. We do appreciate your stories because they give us another angle not explored. Brave authors are always welcome. Hats off to you for hanging in there. Sincerely, Lucero & Marsha (Latin JC’s Salsa Aunties)
i am not a big commenter (just lazy) but i felt i must comment on your notes and stories.i thought that story was hot, hot, hot!!i think your writing rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i think you should just IGNORE those that don’t get the story for what it was, and erotic love tale, and get on with writing us some more great stories!!
FAN FICTION ……GET IT? THE FREEDOM TO WRITE whatever you want…and if you don’t agree with it or like it???? TURN THE CHANNEL. can’t we all play nice???
cls, please don’t let critics get you down. Ignore them and focus on all the POSITIVE comments. To those who don’t like this – or ANY – story. DON’T READ IT. Super simple.
cls…dont listen to people critisms on your writing and ideas…tey dont like it..DONT READ IT..its just that simple!!! I loved the story and they way Bette looked after T…im going to go catch up and read your next one!