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Crossroads- Ch. 20
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"Well, you know that we sort of improvised our own memorial after Dana’s funeral." Alice began. "It really helped to be able to take some time out and go somewhere that had been so important in Dana’s life. Plus, knowing that we were carrying out one of her wishes by spreading her ashes at the waterfall, really made us feel like we were doing something for her, y’know?"
Lara nodded. Tears were beginning to shimmer in her eyes.
Alice continued, "And, it allowed us to say goodbye in a more concrete way than just by sitting in a church with a crowd of people who didn’t want to remember Dana for who she truly was. Only…." Alice’s voice tapered off.
Lara gently prodded, "Only?"
Alice sighed. "Only I didn’t exactly say goodbye. I couldn’t bear to completely let go."
As Lara watched quizzically, Alice opened her hand to reveal a small pottery jar. A tiny cork sealed the top. Slow comprehension made Lara’s eyes widen in surprise. She whispered, "Dana?"
Alice nodded. "I know, it probably seems grotesque, but I just couldn’t let all of her go….so, I kept some of her ashes." She held the jar carefully for a moment, then offered it to Lara. "But, I’m ready to finally move on now."
For a moment, Lara just looked at the offered jar. Slowly, she reached out and took it, holding it as though it were the most precious treasure in the world. Her finger traced the surface. Her throat was constricted with emotion and silent tears spilled down her cheeks. They sat quietly for a few moments. Finally, Lara whispered. "I want to say goodbye too."
Alice hugged Lara. "I’ll take you tomorrow."
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The morning was gray and misty, as the two made their way down the wooded trail. Alice reflected as they walked; it had been early winter the last time she’d been here. The day had been raw and cold. Today, the weather was chilly, but warmer than before, and fog had settled in leaving them in a heavy shroud of silence.
"It’s here, I think." Alice turned down a slightly used trail. As they continued to hike, the sound of running water began to permeate the air. The trail dipped suddenly and turned, and finally they could see the waterfall emptying into a pool of clear water. Flecks of foam were floating merrily down stream. Silently they stood, shoulders touching.
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That was absolutely lovely, Gold. I’ll be sorry to see this one end. Thanks for the story, and I’m looking forward to the epilogue and your next story.
great story sad to see it end but it was a perfect ending.
Gold, I wear it as a badge of honor to be the token straight girl commetator-ess to have sparked the inclusion of Lace NC-17 scenes. I mean, who else would do such a thing, right? hehehe. My belief is that people who are in love should be having sex, period. And when the two are HOT to boot? Even better. Sigh, what to say….it is bittersweet that this story has come to an end but I anticipate your epilogue and future Lace stories because you have a gift with words, darling. Thank you for giving particularly Lara the depth that you did (suck on THAT, IC…) and I love the symbolism of water washing Dana’s ashes away, just very fitting. And Alice just seems so much more -there- than at the start of the fic. Each update has been a little treat ‘o the day in its own way. You rock, and I can’t wait for more. You keep writing, I’ll keep commenting;) Cheers to you.
PS: (because how could I -really- be done here). forgot to include that Lara slipping her clean-still wet hand into Alice’s as they walk off (into the proverbial sunset) together was, oh my goodness, such a touching way to connect LaraDanaAlice and good things into the future. Sigh…
great, i was dying to read the final chapter. hopefully u wil post up another Lace story ASAP
the end? *sigh* it was great while it lasted! amazing story, and alice always knows what to do to make it all better…*sigh again* it really was a great story, and i thank you for keeping it up and keeping me happy! you’re the best! im thinking maybe a sequel? a new story? SOMETHING??? ahhh you’re amazing.
I have a lot of patience though. :P But it was a nice ending. I think they’ve finally have closure when it comes to Dana. I hope Lara will have more peace with Dana gone and her nightmares will dissapear slowly. I’m looking forward to the epilogue. Good to hear Meg will also be in it. :D Btw, The Pipettes made it to my top 10 of last week (on last.fm)…ignore the fact that I didn’t scrobble that many songs. ;)
i´m late, sorry… a big hug for you becuse of this last szene. i always thought, that lara need to be there, to say good bye to dana. that was so sweet! thx for that. i need the epilogue…. ok i´m waiting (at the port).
Wow, just the read the whole story in one stiiting, it was fantastic!!!! I really hope you write another lace story soon cause i was gripped xxx
i completely agree with mineralka.
I love this from begin to end great story and i am sorry to see it end thanks and can’t wait for your next story
I love this from begin to end great story and i am sorry to see it end thanks and can’t wait for your next story
That ending was just perfect, Gold. I totally agree with Min’s comment – Alice giving Lara her little bottle of Dana’s ashes to allow her to say goodbye (a moment that Lara was denied on the show) really does highlight the Alice-Dana-Lara connection in a positive way. The fact that Alice not only gave Lara the ashes, but also allowed her some time and space to say her goodbyes privately just demonstrates once again her unwavering supportiveness and strength (did I mention that I *love* Alice in this story??). I especially liked how you described Lara’s feelings and memories of Dana in the final paragraphs – so sweet and touching. Thank you for this wonderful story – I have enjoyed it every step of the way, and although I’m sad to see it end, I’m certainly looking forward to reading your next Lace creation!