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Cruise on the Big Seas Chapter 7
Previously:
Bette looks at Tina and smiles, “So…what do you want to do?”
Tina: “How about we go get another drink to go and take a walk on the beach before we head back.”
Bette: “That sounds like a plan.”
Alice: “I think that Lexie and I are just going to stay here.”
Bette winks at Alice and mouths ‘Thank you’.
Bette and Tina head for the beach and walk on the edge of the water. They are both talking and laugh then out of the blue Tina grabs Bette’s hand and they continue to walk. This gesture makes Bette’s heart swell and it is then that she realizes that she may have finally found the most wonderful woman in the world.
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The further they walk down the beach the less and less people there are around. This gives Bette the opportunity to sit down with Tina in the sand and get a little more closer than they have been to date. Bette sits down and pulls Tina into her lap and they both begin to laugh.
Now with Tina so close it give Bette the chance to look longingly into Tina’s eyes…
Bette: “Tina, you are so beautiful. I have to say that you are the most beautiful woman I have ever had the pleasure of laying my eyes on.”
Tina blushes, “Thank you so much Bette. Your not so bad yourself.”
Bette: “Tina I know that I have only known you for a little over a day now and I really feel stupid saying this but I think that I could fall in love with you any minute now.”
Tina: “Bette, you have no idea how much it means to me to have you say that. I have been thinking of you nonstop since the moment you walked in to the bar. I’m not the type of person that falls for someone so quickly but I think that I am falling for you.
Bette takes Tina in her arms and kisses her. The kiss was soft and gentle at first and then became more intense. She laid Tina down on her back in the sand and the began kissing and there was nothing that was going to stop them. Well, that was until they heard the horn on the ship blow which meant that they had an hour until it was time for the ship to set sail into the blue seas once again.
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(34 votes, average: 3.35 out of 5)
i knew it..lol..iam happy for kris and Dana..and about B&T they are in the right place spending time to each other and enjoy this time but now a little less conversation a little more action please..lol.great chapter i love your story post soon please :o)
I actually forgot that Kris and Dana had walked off together…..OMG! The tears from laughing so hard are running down my face as I type this.
WTG Nips! I give you mad props on this…awwwwwwwww man I cant stop laughing…..who knew
QQg 4rwd 2 the next 1
hey glad to see kristin got her release, now maybe she can quit being a bitch to Bette. so are they going to play musical rooms all week?!!! yeah. bring it on!!!
lol excellent amazing wonderul!!! lol ok well thanx for the post and please update soon thanx byueness<3382917518975891
Great Chapter! I am very happy for Dana and Kristin. Now what about our Bette and Tina. I love you your story and it continues to make me laugh and smile.
almost everyone got lucky! best make it all got lucky in next chapter.post soon
yes Nipps. they are all hooking up. now we need some B&T loving. hmm maybe they will shower together. romance on the high seas.
My goodness; I was thinking that, but I was sure it wasn’t going to happen. You are full of surprises.
Great chapter you had me laughing!!! Thanks for the 2 pager please post soon!!!
Oh right Kristin and Dana together now she don’t have to be a bitch. Oh about Alice and Lexie is so funny, and Bette and Tina are so cute love it. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Nipples you are so cool and so is your nickname. Love the story and it sure made me laugh. I´ll be reading anything you write girl, you rock so do continue please and make it soon ok. Have a nice weekend because I´ll.
OMG! So Dana and Kris that’s great maybe they all get along together I guess so I hope so LOL! that was so great just really enjoy the moment LOL! OK I can’t wait for the next chapter Please continue post soon Thanks.
Nips…….BRAVO!!!!! OMG…..I am just dying to see B&T together….DAMN DAMN DAMN DAMN……I have no patience….I love the Alice and Lex encounter in the Alley…..LMAO….Great job and keep writing woman!
Yeah.. I guess almost everyone got lucky. LOL, wished that all cruises are all that fun.
hehe yeah I was on a cruise in July, I’m from Australia, so i flew to New Zealand, left from there, went up to New Caledonia and then back into Sydney. Was great!
Ur pretty accurate with ur happenings for someone whos never cruised. haha. VERY ACCURATE! Maybe in a past life :P
Don’t need many tips. I went in school holidays which wasnt the smartest idea, cause there were kids and families everywhere.
There were about 15 guys who continually tried to pick us up no matter what bar we went into. Was….interesting…haha
Great Work again :D
<3 Nik
Alice almost got lucky. Dana did. so guess its Bette turn. Love this. Bette will have more than sand up her crack before the night is over if Tina has her way. Love this THANKS
i love this. dana and kris. how great is that. this chappy was so funny too. your doing a great job. thanks for 2fer. keep it up.