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Cruise On The Big Seas Chapter 9
Bette lays Tina back on the bed. She is standing over Tina and she takes one of Tina’s legs high above her head and takes off Tina’s shoe, then kisses her big toe. She does the same thing to the other foot and then reaches down and takes off Tina’s panties. As she does this she can smell the sweet smell of Tina’s juices that are waiting to be lapped up by Bette’s very skillful tongue. Bette lays down on the bed next to Tina. She begins kissing Tina’s lips first and makes her way down lower. Stops at each breast giving them equal attention. She then runs her tongue down Tina’s stomach and Tina shudders at the feeling. Tina is getting so excited a moan escapes her mouth. This sweet sound makes Bette smile and as she makes eye contact with Tina. The look in Tina’s eyes make Bette’s mound throb. All she wants to do is dive her tongue into Tina’s sweet honey.
Breathlessly Bette speaks…”Tina, I want to taste you.”
In between moans and staggered breathing Tina answers, “Please Bette…I want to feel you inside me….I want you to make me *****.”
With this request Bette goes in for the kill. With her thumb and forefinger she separates the folds that are hiding the swollen numb that is begging for her attention. Bette runs her tongue slowly over Tina’s ***** and Tina shudders from excitement. Bette can taste the sweet juices that are now flowing from Tina’s secret garden. Now Bette can feel her own juices dripping from her own special place but the moans that are coming from Tina and the feel of this beautiful creatures body is all she will need to take her over the edge. Tonight it is about Tina.
As Bette pleasures Tina with her tongue, Tina is begging for more so Bette replaces her tongue with one finger at first and then two. She can feel Tina’s muscles contracting around her fingers as she slowly moves them in and out of Tina.
Tina: “Bette…..please baby, ***** me harder….I want to feel all of you in me.”
With that Bette replaces her slow mothodic strokes with hard forceful ones that send Tina over the edge…
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(41 votes, average: 3.68 out of 5)
you did great for your first nc-17…just keep doing them and practice and you’ll be a pro in no time…tks for the story it’s good!!!
good job for a first nc-17..you will get used to and then you will write more easily..great chapter ive missed your story please post soon!!!
good job nipples. i thoroughly enjoyed myself. heehee. suer have missed youo. post soon
yeeeessssss amazing lol it was wonderful and so sweet !!! i loved it lol well please post soon thanx byeness<3389372589237
Damn that was so hot and sexy, love it. Bette is wonderful and romantic and can’t wait to see what’s next, thanks!
I smiled as soon as I saw your post. Yea! Missed this story a bunch. It was a very nice NC-17 you gave us. post soon
Whoa! WooHoo! Whoa! very sexy very Hot Thank you I think I’m going to take a Shower it’s really Hot in here LOL! Hey that was so Awesome you’re doing a Great Job really good keep it up Hey pandoraoo7 Happy Birthday I think you mention that today is your Birthday I just remember! Nipples LOL! Great Story Please continue Post soon.
That was perfect. Very hot and sexy. I just love it. Can’t get enough of your story. Don’t stay away so long. You are missed.
Hey missed you! You did a great job on your first nc17. I will be looking forward to your next post!!!!!
Glad to have you back. I almost jumped out of my chair from the excitement. Great chapter.
Awesome chapter, Nipples! Bette’s so sweet to Tina. I hope they enjoy their time together. Thanks!
Ohhhh yesss….you did great for your first NC-17 Nipples. You have nothing to worry about in you next NC-17. Keep up the wonderful work and do post soon
Good job!!! See, it wasn’t so bad. Just keep practicing, and you’ll get the hang of it!!!
I know what you mean about writing these kind of things. I will probably have trouble too.This was great never would have guessed it was your first.
Sorry Nipples, I’m commenting on Honda: He he u r funny – just keep doing them and practice. Makes me smile though.