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CRUSH (9)
Both were now out of breath as they fought their exhaustion to make their way back to one another’s arms. They lay facing one another smiling and kissing. Tina caressed Bette’s face with the back of her hand.
“That…was…amazing.”
“Did it live up to your… ‘dream’?”
“No. It was sooo much better.”
The exhaustion had gotten to them both and they fell asleep quickly holding onto one another. An hour later, Bette noticed something different. Tina wasn’t in her arms anymore. She opened her eyes and groggily looked around the room. She was nowhere in sight. Bette got up, grabbing her robe and walked quickly around the house wondering where Tina was.
“T?” She called out her name softly, still thinking she might be asleep. As she passed through the kitchen she caught sight of a familiar pair of legs on the lounger by the pool. She walked out quickly, curious as to why she was out there alone in the middle of the night. Her heart began beating in anticipation that something might be wrong.
“Tina? Are you ok?”
The blonde looked toward Bette and smiled. She was wide awake and wearing Bette’s spare bathrobe.
“Yeah, I’m fine. I’m sorry, did I wake you?”
Bette walked over as Tina made room for her behind her on the lounge chair. She sat back allowing Bette to wrap her arms around her. Tina rested her own arms over them.
Bette said nothing, still wondering why Tina had left the bed. Tina felt Bette’s tension in her touch.
“Really, nothing’s wrong. I just wanted to…take it all in you know?”
“What do you mean?”
Tina turned her body slightly. “I told you it was better than I thought it was going to be.”
Bette sighed and paused before she spoke.
“I’m far from perfect Tina. I just…I don’t want to disappoint you. I mean I’m a control freak, I’m stubborn, I’m…well I can be a real pain in the ass sometimes, you know?”
Tina chuckled. “I know, that’s the point. What I meant was that you’re just…a woman. A beautiful, passionate, exciting woman but just a woman.”
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This is the chapter we’ve been waiting for! Bette and Tina’s 1st time together was just perfect and so sweet. But how long will their happiness last once the truth is revealed to all and Helena comes home? Hopefully their bliss is permanent! PPS
HEY JBMcLovin, That was a wonderful and romantic uniting of two souls.It was good and funny to have both of the gals go to Shane for advice. Typical of Yoda, she just let them talk and convince themselves that it was the right time for them to come together.Then the night itslef lived up and exceeded all expectations.Bette was tender and thoughful as Tina stepped up and showed Bette the woman she has become.They was so well matched at every turn and so enjoyed their evening’s love-making.Then Tina reality check brought everything home and real.This is a once-in-a-lifetime romance and both gals know this and are able to admit this to each other.Just awesome and adorable.More please as I have a feeling that Helena’s return will upset this love-fest.Thank you so much for writing a beautiful chapter.Your Loyal Fan.
At last. :) I’m revelling in their happiness now, cos I’m getting the feeling that there will be a bit of drama coming their way. Thanks, JBM!
Very nice. I like the way you write and how this story is unfolding. Thanks a bunch, JBM! Write on. =)
From Ten to One this is definitely a 20! hehehe!..cuz It’s sweet hot and LOVING…BUT?..i know there is a but coming in here somewhere?…and that is DRAMA! oh oh…hate drama?..
Yay, so happy for them that they have had the opportunity to be together and express their love and long held and hidden desires. Please let them have their weekend of love and happuness because we all know who will be back with blood in her eyes. I wish Peggy could send her to England for a few months so she would be out of everyone’s hair and let her get used to the idea of not having Tina any longer. And that will give our girls time to become even closer to each other. Thanks so much for posting this chapter, loved it. PPVS
Damn that was awesome and hot and beautiful, love it. Now let see more of their weekend and continue with their hot stuffs lol. Please post more, thanks!
loved it… please no drama… just love… pps
An amazing update. Thank you. Loved every word was so beautiful. THank you again.
This was great..they are so loving refreshing…thanks for writing
So AMAZING and LOVING!!!! Please let them spend the weekend together with no drama. I know the drama is coming but please not to much. Thank you PPVS
I`m with Amanda MG,please not to much drama.Thank you for this amazing chapter.PPS