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Cure-all, Chapter 33
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There she saw it all.
Longing…
Desire…
Hope…
Desperation…
Oblivion…
All that she knew the blonde would find reflected in her own eyes.
But she saw something else, and it was all that mattered in that moment…
… Love.
She felt like she could see through the blonde’s soul and all she wanted was to drown into the hazels and never return to the surface.
Tina was staring back at her with the same emotion in her eyes, and her hands were trembling against her neck.
Suddenly, the familiar old crackle indicating that the record had ended reached their ears, but neither moved, being far too lost in each other to even care.
Bette caressed Tina’s cheeks with her thumbs and slowly rested her forehead against the blonde’s. They both sighed deeply, reveling in the moment and feeding off each other’s breath.
Bette raised her head and rested her lips on Tina’s forehead, lingering there for a moment. When she finally pulled away, their foreheads touched again and they both closed their eyes. Then slowly, their faces started to brush, fueled by their overwhelming need to touch, to feel each other. Softly at first, then with more intent. They were breathing heavily, their noses softly caressing… So close…
And suddenly Bette knew.
That was it…
It was inevitable…
And this time, there would be no Mopsel… No sudden ring of a phone… No plane to catch… No virus… No visit to the orphanage… Not even the drama unfolding around them…
No… Nothing would impede this moment.
Their moment…
She brought her hand to Tina’s chin, raising the blonde’s face towards her. When Tina opened her eyes, she looked at her with all the love that she felt, then she leaned in and kissed her nose. She withdrew slightly, then leaned in again and kissed one eyebrow and then the other. Leaning in one more time, she kissed her cheeks, but this time, she didn’t pull away. Her face remained very close, and her eyes rested on the blonde’s lips.
Tina was trembling with anticipation, her heart pounding in her chest. She knew… She had seen it in Bette’s eyes. She had been longing for this moment for so long that the brunette’s soft kisses on her face had only served to make her ache for more. The intensity of her emotions was overwhelming and all she wanted in that moment was to feel Bette’s lips on hers… finally.
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i’m okay with kissing if they follow their hearts, stop there, fix the problem and then get together…and it was beautiful, the tango and the kiss…beautiful
wow! i think that was your best chapter yet. i actually put Oblivion in the background while reading the chapter :) i understand about your apprehension about ‘kissing is cheating’. but i think that you have provided enough moments in the previous chapters to make us understand its inevitability. I agree with B&TF, stop there, fix the problem and then get together. excellent chapter!
You did it jusdtice, believe me! I felt everything I expected to feel at some point in your story when I first red about Oblivion (more when I first listened to it). The dance-kiss scene was all I could hope for. A kiss is cheating, but Helena knows, dosen’t she? They started talking about it before Tina left and I guess she knows in her heart that they are the wrong match.
Can’t imagine what you would have changed to make the chapter better, Kword… aside from 4-5 more pages. Excellent, as always! As far as the cheating, I think both Bette and Tina would feel better if Tina talked to Helena before anything more happened, but given their current circumstance, the norm doesn’t exactly apply. By the way, that was not “just” a kiss…
Kword, that was some hot chapter, and I can not imagine anything that could have been done better.You more than did justice to the original story. What original story are you speaking of? What’s the title and where can I find it? Now to this chapter. This was absolutely amazing. You painted such a beautiful and sensuous picture with your words that I could see them dancing together. It was magical. And I agree with you, this is after all TiBette and all else goes out the window concerning these two getting together. Please bring Bette back in one piece and well, hopefully with food and help for them all.Fantastic chapter. Post when you can.
Wow you definelty know how to pour on the drama. The tango was so sensual and finally some kissing! Now please don’t hurt Bette! PPS:)
I hope that the gun fire never comes again and that they all will be rescued soon. If I remember in an earlier chapter, Helena and Tina did have a conversation about it not working. They may not have ended their marriage but they both know that it is not want they both want. Keep them safe.
I am still hooked on your story of love thriving among such danger and hardship. Love the usage of the tango, though I mourn the passing of Caruso.
kw, that was absolutely the BEST! I think the talk Tina had with Helena before she left pretty well ended their marriage, such as it was. I love how you write TiBette, perfect!
That was awesome and love their dance and their kiss!
Me again… I know I said that there wouldn’t be any cheating in my story. And I also know that some of you might think that kissing IS cheating. To be honest, I don’t really know where I stand about this issue… All I can say is that when it comes to Tibette, I tend to put my universal truths and convictions aside so that these two can make each other happy… ;) And as a personal note, I was in Bette’s shoes once, and I know from experience that sometimes, even the most grounded principles can be greatly shaken (especially with the matters of the heart)… So personally, I guess it’s just a question of assuming one’s actions and responsibilities.And come on… It’s just a kiss! ;) ;) ;)
Unfortunately I “share” your shoes – didn´t end that well – but I see your point . . but don´t make this the last kiss they share – still great, great story. PPS.
Oh, and by the way, how you could even think for a second that this chapter would disappoint us or that you weren’t doing justice to the original story is… beyond me. ???!!!
And what a kiss !!! You’re right, K, I think we pretty much all have double standards when it comes to Tibette… Helena who ? Jodi who ? … Anyway, before I can comment further on this chapter, I think I’m going to have to read it a couple more times… I’ll be back later !
Ok call me a bias here. As long as it comes to Tibette, I don’t care if they’re cheating (just so not on each other) as long they love and make each other happy =p K, you’ve written the dance so sensually sexy and the chapter so amazingly beautiful. Thank you and pps! For now, I’m going to read this again =)
wow… so intense… I do hope Bette would come back in one piece and hopes for Tina and the rest.
Wow, just wow! Don’t think for a moment you didn’t do this chapter justice, it was fantastic. The chemistry between them is palpable. Now lets hope Bette gets back unharmed.
Oh god…. you are one amazing writer….. this story caught me…. they are so sweet together… I love it
wow……….what a kiss…what a dance..i need a drink to calm my heart
WOW! K, that was fantastic. I cant believe we had to wait 33 chapters for a kiss! But what a kiss – you made it worth the waiting! And about the “cheating” – I`m with the others: the “normal” convictions dont apply in Bette and Tina land!! So dont worry! :) Please post soon. Thanks.
great an intense..
I think you out did yourself on this chapter…it was a beautiful dance and even a more beautiful kiss. I won’t consider it cheating…you are right..it is Tibette. pps
I GUESS WHEN U R CLOSE TO POSSIBLE DEATH, THE RULES FLY OUT THE WINDOW; HOT, INTENSE AND NOW I’M SCARED FOR BETTE. PPS
I am finally caught up… had no electric for the last 4 days… but i am getting caught up… dammmmmmm… what a kiss and dance… it was beautiful… now please keep bette safe and get them all the hell out of that hell they are in… also glad the gang is on the way and hopefully the army…PPS
Ok box of chocolates… here I am! :o) I could’ve not chosen a better chapter to leave you my first comment. That dance was amazing and as many have said, the waiting for the kiss was so worth it. I think you gave us enough to really be there in that room with B&T while they shared that moment. That’s what I like about your story, that I can really see things happening. And yes, in real life cheating is one thing, but this is fanfic and best of all it’s Tibette fanfic… so no worries, you just let those girls be together… soon, so they can share more of those kisses! ;-) Thanks for the great story and PPS!
The kiss was so beautiful…The kiss, we have waited so long for it… The kiss they share was a forever,you are mine kiss..When Tina said” I need you to protect me” made tears come to my eyes.. If kissing is cheating, we all cheat most days. You see a friend and give them a kiss on the cheeck. A kiss between T&B is just a small piece of heaven. LH is the best kisser on the show. thanks so much for posting.
Another amazing chapter and my 1st time to comment. Love how you write…so much emotion and so true to the characters. Please post soon :)