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Cure-all, Chapter 38
Tina chuckled and arched a brow,
“Talk about clichés…”
Then she turned around and resumed her ascent. Groaning, Alice reluctantly stood and followed her.
“Why do we have to take the stairs anyway, when there is a convenient lift to take us up?” She whined.
“To make your life a living hell Alice… Which, as you know, is my ultimate goal in life.” Tina replied over her shoulder.
Alice rolled her eyes at the answer.
The blonde stopped and turned around towards the view of Paris that their position offered.
“Come on Al, look at this!… Isn’t it stunning?
Alice joined her and gave a radiant smile.
“Yeah, it surely is… You know what, I’m sure it’s even nicer from up there. Don’t you think?” She asked cheerfully.
“Of course it is…” Tina replied, glad that her friend was finally enjoying the effort, “You’ll see, the view from the Sacre Coeur is breathtaking!”
“It is, uh?..” Alice raised both eyebrows smiling.
Then her face suddenly turned angry.
“So why, Tina… Why, for the love of god, didn’t we cut to the chase and take that freakin’ lift to get there directly???” Alice yelled.
Tina looked at the view with a smile, and deliberately ignoring her friend, she started to climb up again.
Alice looked at her in disbelief, and finally she followed her, whining.
“Tinaaaa…Wait for meeeeeee!”
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The place was very crowded. It was the high season for tourism, and Montmartre definitely was one of the most popular points of interest in Paris.
They reached the Basilica and Alice stopped at the entrance.
“Look Tina, with all due respect to God and his crowd, I am not visiting that church.”
“It’s a basilica, Al” The blonde said laughing, “Are you sure?… I swear it’s worth it.”
Alice looked at her friend suspiciously.
“Uh-huh… I’m not buying your BS anymore, Kennard. I learnt my lesson… The hard way!”
Tina burst out laughing.
“Right… Whatever is best for you, O poor Martyr… I’ll see you in a bit.” She said, before she stepped through the wooden door of the basilica.
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(3 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
im so happyyyyyyyyyyyy that was so sweetttttttttt alice nice job
I’m doing a big happy dance, Fate will play for awhile then she will come to her sense and the the magic will beginning and so it did. Love longing and needing has ended. thanks
Great, thank you. More soon?
i don’t know why but wow I was on the edge of my seat..
Hell yeah! That’s what I’m talking about. Simply amazing! PPS:)
Absolutely terrific. You couldn’t have done it any better, thank you!
Finally! AWW they are so sweet together I’m glad Al could see what was happening and gave them some alone time. Can’t wait for the next chapter. PPS
Finally! AWW they are so sweet together I’m glad Al could see what was happening and gave them some alone time. Can’t wait for the next chapter. PPS
Hallelujah!!! PPS
YAY!!! They are finally free to love one another! Can’t wait to see where you take us. PPS
You had me worried, but the ending was just so perfect and sweet. Their long-awaited declaration of love was certainly worth the wait. No cliches, just kudos to your writing!
I hope that TBC actually meant “To Be Continued very soon” ’cause I’m not sure I’m gonna be able to wait too long here. Oh, and by the way, I don’t think it was full of clichés at all. The Eiffel tower, Notre Dame, les bateaux mouches or les quais de Seine, that would have been the biggest clichés in my opinion, but La Butte Montmartre, no, not so much. Besides, who cares ?!! I mean, really, I absolutely loved Amelie Poulain and it was full of enormous clichés about Paris ( including those about Montmartre of course ). Do I need to say that I loved this chapter ? Once again, you’ve outdone yourself my friend ! BRAVO !
OK, one more thing, I know my comment won’t make me very poplular among your legions of fans, and I myself wrote that I wanted more of this because I’ve really enjoyed reading this story A LOT and therefore I somehow never want this to stop, but if I’m honest, ” dramatically speaking ” I think this could be a beautiful ending to a wonderful story and I think you could very well leave it as it is. But of course I won’t be one to complain when you post your next chapter ( wink ! ). Author’s call !
I was getting a little nervous here. For a minute or so, I felt like they were going to continue to miss each other. I was pleasantly surprised by their coming together and the ending of this post.
Hey you! First and foremost, I apologize for the delay. Apparently I missed a few updates of my favourite stories and I didn’t even notice. I posted last week and didn’t get a chance to check what was going here until today. Anyway, amazing update… you had me (as usual) on the edge of my seat. I was almost screaming at Bette and Alice “Look up, Look up!” Yeah I get overly excited by your story. LOL Can’t wait to see what you have in store for those ladies. Take care… oh and yes you have me kinda forgotten I think! :o)
That was beautiful and love it!
Yeah!!, awright, (fist pumping in the air), Tony Danza style. PPS
Haaaaallllejuha! Woopdeedoo! Huzzah!
I agree with all the other comments. Amazingly Perfect and Beautiful Chapter! After everything that they have been through this was just the perfect place for them to express their feelings. I LOVE THIS STORY! I swear i was so lost in the last few pages i was nervous just to read on. Thank you for not making it a cliffhanger. I can’t wait to read more ! PPS
in one of my stories i had B&T in Paris too, as bette proposed at Sacre Couer…i’m a hopeless romantic, i don’t care about cliches…this was beautiful, magnifique, breathtaking…
Perfect!!!! yeh!!!
i felt like pulling my hair when by page 3 fate was still playing tricks on them! but their meeting and declaration took my breath away! PPS
Absolutely beautiful. You had me holding my breath in anticipation at all the missed opportunities for these two to connect but in the end you deliverd romance at it’s finest. Now, back to the hotel for some NC-17 lovin’, right Kword?
This story continues to blow me away. God, I love it so….I can’t wait for your next post!
thank god… i was with ther others… what luck to keep missing each other… but i had faith… love this story…PPS
Wow-ze..Perfect!~
Finaly – God this was a long way. I hope you write much more of this two one. They are so in LOVE. PPS
Holy Mother of God – finally!!! Woot!! Now for a little lovin’, right???
Awww… that was so beautiful! I’m glad you chose not to tease us to death with them passing by each other lol. I gotta admit, Alice leaving them alone surprised me a bit :) Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
I love cliches..nothing at all wrong with them…what girl doesn’t want to be in love and in Paris. thanks. pps