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Damaged Ch. 115
Carmen stop! Whats wrong with you? Carmen tried to push away from Shane. Im not letting you go!
Shane! Let go of me! Jenny and Mark ran into the kitchen and saw the two quarrelling. Carmen screamed and trying to push away from Shane. She began to beat her fists against Shanes chest. Mark walked over to Carmen and Shane and pulled Carmen away from Shane. Carmen fell in Marks arms and sobbed. Shane bumped against the table, breathing heavily. Mark walked Carmen out of the kitchen. Shane dropped her head and began to cry silently. Jenny walked over to her friend and touched her hand. Shane looked up and saw Jenny at her side. Jenny opened her arms, and Shane wrapped her arms around her.
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Bette looked at her clock and raked her fingers through her hair. She pulled on her tank and walked into the kitchen. She took a drink of her wine and sat the glass down on the counter. She looked up at the door when she heard a knock. She walked over to the door and opened it. She smiled when she saw
Hello. Bette grabbed
I want you now. Bette grabbed
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(54 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
Is it wrong for me to not want Tina happy for a while? lol. Oh well, great update. I feel bad for Shane. And… Hot Hot HOT darlin’ lol.
Everyone come up a loser sometimes, Tina is on the loser end now, Poor Shane, she was only thinking of Carman family,not Carman. thanks
What the hell is Tina’s problem? She wants Bette, she doesn’t want Bette; she wants Garrett but she doesn’t want Garret and now there is this Lauren chic. My head is spinning ad i can’t keep up. Well whatever Tina wants I hope she doesn’t get b/c i still feel that she needs to be punished for what she put Bette through. All Tina deserves right now is to suffer. But this is just my opinion, can’t wait to see where you take the story.
Just getting into the story now. I like it. Your descriptions and dialogue are well done.