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Damaged Ch. 2
Shane, do you need a ride? Dana yelled from the car.
No Dane, Im alright. Just go.
Yoda, get your ***** in the car. Alice said from the drivers side. Shane smiled to herself and walked over to the car. She opened the door and got in.
What are you doing? You can get yourself killed out here. Alice said.
Im a big girl. I can take care of myself. She flicked her cigarette out of the window.
So how are you doing? Dana asked.
Im doing just fine. Shane kept staring out the window.
Shane, were friends right? You dont have to lie to us. I can read right through you. Its Carmen, its tearing you up inside. Alice said.
Al, please. I really dont want to talk about this alright. Better yet, just stop the car.
Shane, Im sorry. But Im not stopping this car were taking you home.
No, just stop the ***** car.
Alright, Ill stop. Alice pulled over and let Shane out. Shane closed the door and watch Alice and Dana drive off. She put her hands in her pockets and kept walking.
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Bette had Tina on the kitchen corner, kissing her. Tina wrapped her legs around Bettes waist. She ran her hands through Bettes thick hair. Tina started to unbutton Bettes shirt, but her phone rings. *****. She said to herself. Bette pulled away and button her shirt back up.
Hello?Hi Helena Bette looked disgusted. Tina mouthed Im sorry. Yeah, whats going on? OkWhats wrong?Alright.No, I cantIm—Ok, fine. Im coming over. Bye. Tina hung up her phone and slowly got off the counter.
Im sorry Bette. Maybe I can stop by later.
Yeah, thats fine. Youre always welcome to stop by. Bette smiled and wiped her mouth. Tina walked over to Bette and kissed her one last time. Bye. Tina opened the door and walked out. Bette put her hand on her head and the other one on her hip. She hates the fact that shes the other woman. She grabbed the bottle of the counter and went outside by the pool.
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Shane walked up the steps to the house, stoned. She stumbled up the steps and made it to the door. She opened it and saw Carmen and Jenny on the couch. She really didnt like being around them, but she acted like she didnt care. Not saying a word, Shane walked to her room. Carmen didnt like the tension between them, she let go of Jenny and got up.
Where you going?
To the bathroom. Be right back. Carmen kissed Jenny and headed down the hall. Jenny put her focus back on the TV, but she knew that Carmen was worried about Shane. Carmen came to Shanes door and knocked on the door. She didnt get a response, so she open the door.
Oh my God Shane. Shane was laying on the floor, face down. Carmen ran to Shanes side. Carmen sat her up and held her. Shanes nose was bleeding, and she didnt show no sign of moving.
JENNY HELP!
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(51 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
“It’s yours truly ma, I got a little message for ya
Anything she can do,girl I can do it betta for ya…”
Bette will have to be patient.They are talking. I like that you picked up the story at a point where Bette can have a litte hope.
I like that you’re getting right into the meat of both stories, showing action and conflict and not beating around the bush about it.
Thanks!
man Bette as ‘the other women’…she will really need to be patient with this situation.
Damn..poor shane..life is so hard for her right now…i really hope she can have a talk to Carmen about how she feels..
Waiting for next chapter :D
The other woman. Living with one and going to get a fix from another,it that call cheating? Is that the reason that Bette and Tina are not together, Bette cheating, Thanks
this story is really great, a little short but I hope you´ll go on soon
hey! nice story.. hope you write more soon! specially somethin’ about shane and carmen.
i think you rreading too much into shane, shes not that disturbed I dont think she would have put herself in that position especially if she thought carmen would see her like that.