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Damaged Ch. 30
Hows your night going? Brooke said smiling.
Its going just fine. Im just waiting for my girl to get off. What about you? She took a drink of her beer.
My nights going just great. I was wondering if you wanted to dance. Shane looked at Brooke and looked away.
I dont think thats a good idea. I dont want to make anything worse.
Oh come on. It wouldnt hurt. Its just a harmless lil dance. Shane looked at Brooke and took a large drink. She gave in and headed out on the dance floor. Brooke started to dance and tugged on Shanes hand to get her going. Shane began to move and started to dance. Carmen looked up from the booth and saw Shane, dancing with a woman. She thought of it has harmless fun and didnt worry about it. Shane got into the music and started to dance. Brooke watched Shane and started to get closer to her. Shane lifted her head and met Brookes lips. Shane was shocked by it. Carmen looked over to her girlfriend again and saw what happened. Shane pushed Brooke away and stood there. Carmen sat the headphones down and walked through the crowd.
What the ***** Brooke? I told you that I didnt want any trouble tonight. Why would you do that? Shane wiping her lips off.
Im sorry I didnt mean for it to happen. Shane looked up and saw Carmen come towards her. Shane was about to speak, but Carmen began to push her.
What are you doing? Here I am, working. And youre ***** around with somebody else. Shane, I thought you loved me. Shane tried to stop Carmen, but snatch her hands away from her.
Dont you touch me. I cant believe you would do this to me. Carmen turned and looked at Brooke. I hope you enjoy my girlfriend. She is something, isnt she? Shane walked up to Carmen.
Carmen, its not what it looked like. She kissed me, and I pushed her away. Im sorry. Carmen looked at Shane with tears in her eyes.
Shane, Im sorry. I dont know if I can believe you this time. Carmen walked away from Shane.
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Hi there! Welcome Back, I’m sorry that you have been sick,I truly do hope that you are feeling much better now. Ah I see that we have a mad woman on the scene(Melissa). We Should’ve known that Melissa wouldn’t step aside so easily, huh..I can’t wait till you know who finds out about this little attack on her “woman”. PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON.
Glad you are feeling better. I don’t think you should change the title because everyone seems “damaged” to me. Good Chapter. Good Job.
Glad you’re feeling better sweetie. It looks like Marina’s got some ass to kick now. I like the title Damaged.
…….please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!…
this is really getting interesting, please go on!!