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Damaged Ch. 44
What the ***** is this?
I dont knowTheyve been out here, screaming and chanting.
Alright, call the police and get them here immediately.
Yes, Im on it. They walked away from the door, and Helena headed back to the room.
Im sorry about the”. Helena stopped when she noticed Rose was gone. She looked around and stomped her foot. Damn it.
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Shane was walking with Naomi down the street of Key West. Shane was getting a little annoyed with Naomi being very talkative. She didnt know when to shut up. Shane grabbed her and kissed her to keep her quiet. She pulled away, and Naomis mouth was parted slightly. She was breathless, not saying a word. Shane grabbed her hand and started to walk again.
Tina and Carmen were at Island Caf and Bar. Carmen took a drink of her tea, and Tina just finished her salad.
SoAre you enjoying yourself? Tina asked.
Yeah, I really like it. Its beautiful, Im having a great time. Tina looked at Carmen and sighed.
Carmen, I know youre not happy. You want to talk about it? Carmen looked at Tina and sat up.
I dont knowShanes getting worse and worse as the day goes. I feel like its all my fault that shes went back down that road again.
Well, not to get into your businessWhat really happened between you two? Carmen took a deep breath.
I cheated on Shane. Tina looked at Carmen surprise. She found out before I could tell her. She stopped by my apartment and saw everything. She blew up in my face and laid everything out. I was an emotional wreck, but Shane was hit hard. She doesnt want to speak to me, have anything to do with me. Shes pissed off now cause were sharing a room together.
Oh my god, this is bad. Shanes looks worse than ever. She never talks about her problems. All you can do right now, is offer Shane your help. Shes going to need it. But you know deep down, she still loves you.
Yeah, but I dont know if shell ever talk to me again.
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“Could things get any worse?â€
Isn’t that the line before the killer comes in? LMAO
I love it this is a great story please post soon so I can see what happens next with everyone
I love the talk between Jenny and Shane and Tina and Carmen (yeah a lot of “and”´s) I really like to see how their friends care. Please give me some drame and send this “naomi” girl home :-)
I love your writing!!! Go on soon!!!
i smell a Sharmen talk :D i don’t like this Naomi girl…with her around Sharmen might not have that so much needed talk…hmm…*grabs naomi and tosses her into hurricane!* muwhahaha!