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Dana’s Choice chapter 5
Howie reached over and scratched the cats head. “You know Dana I always thought you and Alice were good together. Her nerdiness and your dorkiness were a perfect match for each other. Why don’t you give it another try with her, I’m sure she still wants you. I mean Sis I saw how she looked at you, people don’t get over feeling like that in a few months.”
Dana continued to pet Venus finely she looked at her brother. “I can’t hurt her again and I won’t, so can we talk about something else?”
A FEW HOURS LATER AT ALICE’S APARTMENT
Alice had just finished her top 10 list and was emailing it to her editor when she heard a knock at her door. When she looked into the peephole she couldn’t believe it was Howie standing there. She opened the door to let him in. “Howie? How are you able to get past the front gate without me buzzing you in?” He reached over and embraced Alice with one arm hugging her. “You and my sister are so much alike sometimes. I watched you enter in the key pad and memorized it. Plus you didn’t make to hard to figure out, come on, three, one, six and one that spells out Dana on a phone key pad. I’m surprised my sister didn’t figure it out. No I take that back I love my big sis but she is a little dense sometimes.”
Alice blushed at Howie’s observation. “I didn’t want to forget my pass code.” Howie loved the fact he had Alice squirming so he figured might as well have a little more fun before things got serious. “So Alice is that your pass code for everything? I bet I could get money out of the ATM if I had your bank card and used that code. And if I remember right, didn’t you move into this apartment before you and Dana got together?”
Alice was starting to feel uncomfortable about the way this conversation was going so she decided it was time just to come clean with Howie. “OK so you figured out I loved your sister before we became a couple. I don’t think you were the first to figure that out.” Alice smile thinking back when she and Dana became a couple how they worried how their friends would take the new. But as it turned out, they had all figured it out and they all were thrilled to see them together. Alice continued to think about how amazing quick things can change.
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(15 votes, average: 4.47 out of 5)
I want Alice and Dana get back together but I love too the agony so…
post soon
They totally need to get back together soon, can’t wait for the next post. Howie should be around more too.
back together!!! but make lots of tension and reeli great reunion between the 2!
tense, sexy, sappy, fluffy, taut, fraught… debs- i’m not a bit worried. you know what to do. (as for Joy, she’s a doll- but let her find her own pastry.) ; )
i want them back together, not just yet, drag it out a little bit, not to much
As much as I want to see them back together… I think it needs more time, I think Dana needs to figure out where she is going with life first.
Anyway – Love this story – good work
great update! i agree that they need to get back together, but i think we need a bit of Alice/Dana best friend funness first, drag it out a little more, and definatley more Howie.
Also i always wondered what Condo was short for – thanks for that haha.
back together! all the way! you can still drag out HOW they get back together..but you’re killing me!
get them back together of course…and to funny…howie the next oprah…little gay brothers are always in your business…post soon.
Deb, this could be your best chapter. Well written, great take on Howie’s relationship with both Dana and Alice.
As for your dilemma, Danish need to get back together or my little danish heart can’t take it. They will need a little time to ease into a relationship but in the end it’ll always be them. LOL that the romantic in me talking
how bout a little more agony then have dana make the first move, when she gets her life back on track
Of course Danish need to get back together! but I think they (and us) need to suffer little bit more. Dana has to make the first move, something romantic maybe :D it cannot be too predictable although it’s difficult to make it unpredictable when we all know/wish they’ll end up together again.
About Joy.. I think she is good _friend_ for Alice ;)
Great chapeter again. I like that HOwie is doing something to help them out.. good love story needs its Amor :)