Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
Dana’s Choice chapter 6
Alice walked into the room and couldn’t help but admire all the work that Dana had put in these last few weeks. As it turned out Dana was a quick study, and even though she down played it Dana was really pretty smart. Though Dana had a stack of index card with all kinds of information about different player. If you were to ask Dana about a lot of the players she already could quote most of the statistics without even looking at her notes. Alice knew Dana was as ready as she could be with her research now it was time to work on her image. “OK Dana I think I’ve done all I can do. Now it’s time to get help from our friends.”
JENNY’S AND SHANE’S HOME
Shane was walking around Dana as Alice was speaking. “OK Shane here is what Dana needs, I mean if Dana agrees. She needs to look hot of course but not bimbo hot, professional hot.” Dana decided to put her two cents in. “No bangs Shane, I have curly hair and bangs are a *****.” Shane looked back and forth between the two. “Guy, I know what I’m doing. How about this, I add a few highlights not too many just enough to lighten your hair slightly. Then I’ll straighten your hair just a little, so it has a soft wavy appearance. How about that Dana does that sound alright to you.” Dana thought that sounded great. “OK Shane go for it I trust you.” The Shane looked over to Alice. “What about you Miss let me tell you how do your job Alice.” Alice winked at Shane. “You better not mess this up Yoda.”
After about an hour of Shane highlighting and straightening Dana hair she handed Dana a mirror so she could see the end product. Alice just sat at the kitchen table starring at how absolutely great Dana looked. Shane looked over at Alice smile and incredibly proud of her work. “So what do you say Alice?” Alice looked up a Shane and replied. “Wow, I should have never doubted the great Yoda.” Dana got up and hugged Shane. “Thanks, I really like it.”
Alice then stood up and looked over at Dana and Shane. “OK guys now it time to go drag Bette away for Tina and the baby, so she can help Dana dress for success.” Dana looked over at Alice. “You don’t like how I dress?” Alice started back tracking realizing she needed to explain a little better. “No Dane, I mean yes I like how you dress. But this isn’t about tennis outfits, or jeans it’s about dressing for success. And you tell me who better then Bette. You have to admit she has the dress for success and still look hot attire down pat.”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.


(13 votes, average: 4.38 out of 5)
oh i really like this, Dana is so sweet. please, please let Alice and Dana get back together.
Its so good to see Dana moving up with Alice’s help. I’m waiting for the romance, please post soon.
This is a great story. Dana is adorable. Bring on the romance!
love the story! The Alice/piece of cardboard comment made me laugh too :D You write Dana much better than the actual writers do, good job!
Deb, there’s so many things I loved about this chapter.
– Alice watching Friends was so cute.
– Dana getting the job at ESPN was a masterstroke, it fits nicely with she’s be doing.
– The dinner and breakfast scene made me smile, Alice’s teasing and Dana’s squirming are classic Danish bahaivour
– The friends helping out, makes me miss S1
– Dana is making me swoon, if ALice doesn’t want her back. Can I have her? The flowers at the end was so sweet.
Great job, pls don’t let us wait too long.
I love alice and dana please put them back together and no matter how the seasons to come put them always write about there love. I LOVE ALICE AND DANA
You’re right about the clips, but you and the rest of danish writers are doing a great job, so I keep the faith that nothing irreversible occur.
I read this story so long ago. I can’t believe I missed commenting. I’m working my way through it again!