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Dance With Us 10
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Alice (trying not to laugh): That poor kid (busting out laughing as Tasha did so well.)
Shane and Carmen’s House
Carmen (reading the paper): And you’re schedule tomorrow.
Shane (throwing her hands up): Shit, I knew I forgot to ask Tina or Helena.
Carmen (giggling): Honey, call them first thing in the morning. For now (pointing) park your ass right there. I’m trying to read the funny paper and I can’t determine which is funnier you or the comics.
Shane (feigning hurt): Ouch. That’s not nice.
Carmen (pouting): Poor baby.
Shane (slouching in her chair): Pick on me go ahead. No chocolate chip pancakes for you…
Carmen (setting the paper down): Ooh now that does sound good. What do I have to do to make it up to you?
Shane (smirking): Well a kiss here (pointing to her cheek) a kiss here (pointing to her lips.) And (pulling her into her lap) and you right here…
Carmen (kissing her again): Now when can I collect on my reward?
Shane (kissing her again): Later right now…
Los Angeles Police Station Front Desk
Kelly (stumbled up to the front desk): Officer (clearing her throat.)
Police Officer (looking at the woman; she was pale and had a few bruises): Maam (getting up and opening the metal door. Putting a supporting arm around her shoulder) where you in an accident? (Kelly shook her head) did your boyfriend or girlfriend do this to you? (Kelly nodded) let me get one of the female officers down here.
Kelly (pleading): No, I need to talk with Sargent Duffy. It’s about the Shecter murder.
Police Officer (standing): Right away. (Dialing Sargent Duffy’s Office) hi! I’ve got a girl up here, looking like crap and asking for you. She says its about the Shecter (holding the phone) hung up on me again.
Sargent Duffy (coming to a sliding stop): Shit (reaching for her cell phone) Nistico can you call Kai up here. And get me another female officer. (Rubbing her face and opening the door to the lobby) Ms. Wentworth (seeing the pale bruised skin.) Let me call you a Doctor…
Kelly (shaking her head): No., Nothing a few Advil, a bottle of wine and a nap won’t fix. I need to talk with you.
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I glad that no one from the family was Jenny’s killer. I’m shocked that Kelly went to the police and admitted what really happened between Bette and herself. Great update. PPS
i LOVE the way you’re writing this tibette417!! its really fantastic, and the nc-17.. the best i’ve read!! *THUD* Keep them coming..!!
What a fantastic chapter. Thought it might be coming to an end, and was happy to see the tbc at the end. I think it’s so nice that Peggy thinks this whole group is her family. I would not have expected that. And finally none of them were involved in Jenny’s murder. I love how you have the characters interact with each other. This is quite a piece of fiction.
Now thats how one wraps it up.
So happy everything turned ok.te love this all family share is soo great. And Peggy been the big mama of the all group, is fantastic.It is time for the family to have “love time” now. GOD that was a big plot well written tibette417,fantastic
Damn thats crazy but glad the gang are ok and bad peoples are in jail!