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Dance With Us 10
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Lara (banging on the door): Anything yet?
Kai (running down the hallway): Hold it. I think I got it. Dead body in Texas, Tina’s well her supposed sister is missing, and well she’s here and they’re not…
Lisa (look of shock on her face): Dammit (grabbing her coat) book her. Keep her here. No one goes anywhere unless I say. (Turning around) Rhames grab your partner and get to the Porter Residence immediately. Nistico get two cars up there now. Kai…
Kai (tossing her, her car keys): Got them…
Lisa (running): Let’s hope we’re not to late…
Tina and Bette’s House Outside
Dusty (handing Catherine her gun): Don’t fire the dam thing, just point it.
Lidia (standing up straighter; the voices were screaming and she had, had enough): Can I go and get my sister?
Catherine (nodding): Sure. Just make sure you get Tina and no one else. We’ll take care of whoever tries to stop you.
Dusty (watching): Let’s go (walking into the yard and seeing Bette’s retreating figure.) Don’t anyone move.
Kitchen
Bette (grabbing the tray and heading outside): I’ve got your…
Dusty (smiling): Good morning you shouldn’t have. (Waving the gun) put it down, nice and slow…
Bette (assessing the situation; Helena and Dylan were sitting next to one another with Catherine pointing a gun at their heads.) Why?
Dusty (smirking): Shut up. Or I’ll shoot them both. (Pointing the gun at Tina) nice and slow.
Bette (complying): Is it money?
Dusty (backhanding her across the face): Shut up…
Tina (jumping): Bette…
Dusty (pointing the gun at Bette’s slumped body): Sit your ass down or I’ll shoot her…
Dylan (angrily): Instead of hitting defenseless woman why don’t you take on someone who can fight back?
Catherine (hitting her with the gun): Shut up…
Helena (trying to get up): Bitch…
Lidia (walking across the ground): Sit down. We only want what we came for and then you three will be left alone…
Bette (rubbing her jaw): Who the…
Tina (shock and fear on her face): No (shaking.)
Helena (reaching for her only to slapped): Dammit…
Lidia (smiling and stepping fully into the light): My, my you look lovely. Even better than the last time I saw you. And look at you. Sinning and whoring for another woman no less…
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I glad that no one from the family was Jenny’s killer. I’m shocked that Kelly went to the police and admitted what really happened between Bette and herself. Great update. PPS
i LOVE the way you’re writing this tibette417!! its really fantastic, and the nc-17.. the best i’ve read!! *THUD* Keep them coming..!!
What a fantastic chapter. Thought it might be coming to an end, and was happy to see the tbc at the end. I think it’s so nice that Peggy thinks this whole group is her family. I would not have expected that. And finally none of them were involved in Jenny’s murder. I love how you have the characters interact with each other. This is quite a piece of fiction.
Now thats how one wraps it up.
So happy everything turned ok.te love this all family share is soo great. And Peggy been the big mama of the all group, is fantastic.It is time for the family to have “love time” now. GOD that was a big plot well written tibette417,fantastic
Damn thats crazy but glad the gang are ok and bad peoples are in jail!