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Dance With Us 16
Tina (hugging her tightly): Thank you.
Peggy (kissing her temple): You’re welcome sweetie.
Poolside
Helena (drying off): I’m going up to see Dylan off…
Alice (piping up; dodging the splash of water): You mean, get her off….
Lisa (laughing): Well that too…
Angie (paddling with Papi holding on to her): Get off…
Bette (growling): Alice…
Kai (wrapping her arms around Lisa): Ooh I know that tone (ducking Kit’s playful lunge.)
Tasha (pointing): Alice…
Lisa (cradling her precious cargo): And they’re off…
Helena (getting out of the pool): And that’s why I’m going to excuse myself.
Kit (taking Angie from Papi): I swear one of these days I’m going to get a bar of soap and wash out your mouth…
Upstairs Spare Bedroom
Dylan (finishing drying her hair and buttoning her shirt; looking up as Helena strutted in): Hi.Shane (giggling): Ooh that I would pay to see (getting dunked by Carmen.)
Carmen (laughing and trying to get away): Help…
Tina (stepping outside): What did you do?
Helena (innocently): Moi. Now how can you infer I’m responsible for this (gesturing to the splashing and sloshing pool.)
Tina (smiling): Cause you usually are.
Helena (waving): Have fun (walking inside; running her fingers through her hair; heading upstairs and going in the spare bedroom dropping her towel and reaching for the ties to her bikini top): Hi…
Dylan (reaching for her): Um hold that thought (moaning as Helena kissed her; she tasted the hint of alcohol and something that was sweet and only Helena) baby…
Helena (swallowing): You’re leaving for New York for three days and…
Dylan (pressing a finger to her lips): Shh. It’s not that baby. Never that, but remember what we’ve talked about. (Caressing her face) I know this is hard for you. Especially after everything you’ve been through but (brushing back a lock of hair) it’s three days and you have a lot to do.
Helena (leaning forward): You’re right. I’m trying to remember what Kai said in one of our sessions.
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(46 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.
Oh so happy you are back with this. I have been checking all the time and when I saw that you posted!!!!!! So excited, love it, please keep going.
woo woo Great to have you back at last lol. I am going to enjoy this slowly pmsl.
For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS
Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.
Oh shit now Alice know!