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Dance With Us 5
Carmen (licking her lips): So if they’re here together it could just be coincidental. It could also be a vacation. (Looking at Shane and Dylan) we are not cops. And getting arrested is not on the agenda.
Shane (looking at Dylan): So what do you want.
Dylan (not hoping for too much): I just want a chance to talk with her. Just one chance…
Shane (raising her hand): After I talk with Kit, Tina and Bette and if they agree. One chance if she wants it. However…
Dylan (fighting tears): I’ll do the project at Shaolin and walk away when its done.
Carmen (looking at Shane then at Dylan): Shane (pleading) maybe…
Dylan (shaking her head): It’s better than what I deserve…
Shane (shaking her head): Get out of here. Don’t call and don’t drop by…
Dylan (softly): Is she, is she okay?
Shane (angrily): No. No, she isn’t. (Spitting) let’s she’s been betrayed, lied to, (glaring at Dylan) deceived, hurt in more ways than you or I could imagine and is barely hanging on. However she’s managed to be taken in and she’s safe and being looked after. Don’t call me (turning and walking towards her car.)
Carmen (seeing the look of disappointment and devastation on Dylan’s face): I’ll try and talk to her…
Dylan (shaking her head and getting in her truck): No. She didn’t kick the shit out of me which is more than I deserve. Good night Carmen I wish you both the best.
Somewhere in Downtown LA
Catherine (sipping her drink): Well where would she be hiding out. I thought she worked at the Hit or something like that…
Dusty (leaning against the wall): A lot has changed since you left. Priorities, jobs, couples…
Catherine (nodding): That’s why I need you to find her and talk with her. I want her influence and money.
Dusty (shaking her head): She’s changed (leaning in for a kiss.) She’s not letting her guard down…
Catherine (smirking): If I don’t get that money I don’t get the project off the ground.
Dusty (cupping her face): She won’t go for it. She supposedly has ties with Shaolin…
Catherine (angrily): I don’t care if she has ties with the Pope. I need her influence, her money and her backing.
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(40 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
my mouth went dry for a little….ok so I like what you have done with this..using this passion and closeness to heal Helena..and obviously Dusty/Catherine are up to no good but Dylan??? She will have to prove herself.
HOLY SHITE!!!!!…THUD…..So hot….Hard to breathe….
That was a very hot chapter. B,T&H all love each other but are they going to be able to handle what comes after the heat of lust?I think Dylan is sincere and when she helps Shane catch Dusty and Katherine she will be let back in the circle. It will still probably take Hel a long while before she can trust Dylan again so if she isn’t willing to wait as long as it takes she doesn’t deserve Helena. I hope the girls rip into those two baddies after they discover what thier scheme is. Love the story. PPVS :)
HOT!!!
finally, please don’t leave us hanging for long!!!!
I love the story. They do seem to all love one another, but I was surprised by the direction in which the sex scene went. All of Helena’s fantasies have been about Tina, so for Helena to be engaging only with Bette and for Tina to be simply watching, seems totally opposite of what Helena’s been fantasizing about and hoping for. I know the scene isn’t over, but I’m hoping for a loving, affectionate, and erotic interaction between Helena and Tina, just as Helena and Bette’s interaction is carnal, lustful, and passionate.
Holy S**T!!!! I would never have guessed. Sharing one another……. This is really HOT!!!! Continue, PLEASE.
It was hot alright but it will be the greatest single mistake they could ever make. Helena should have ket her two shoes downstairs. This will be their undoing if not handled extremely well.
HEy TB417, Wow wee! That was hot and steamy, ranchy and sexy as hell! My screen steamed up. Just loving this unique take of the lives and lives of the gang. Brilliant. Many thanks and please continue soon. A Fan.
OH DAMN THIS IS SO FUCKING HOT, LOVE IT!