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Danish: From Beginning to End (Real Time 3)
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3 WEEKS LATER
“Dana! Are you ready? We need to get going!” Lara yelled from the entry way of Dana’s condo
Dana was currently in the bedroom, sitting on top of her suitcase. “I’m coming baby.” She grumbled as she tried to zip up the over-stuffed suitcase
Lara walked into the bedroom and chuckled. “Do you want some help?”
“I think I got it.” Dana bounced on the suitcase, trying to compact the items in the suitcase. “Fuck!” Dana exclaimed as she missed the suitcase on the way down from her bounce and flew off the bed
Lara put a hand over her mouth to hide her laughter as the clumsy athlete fell to the floor. Walking over to the suitcase, Lara expertly zipped it up and smiled at Dana’s scowl.
“You would think that with how much I travel that I would know how to close a freakin suitcase.” Dana pouted
Lara helped Dana up and gave her a kiss, a smile tugging at the corners of her lips. “And you would think that since you’re a professional athlete that you wouldn’t be such a klutz, but hey, life’s a bitch.” Lara giggled
“You’re mean.” Dana scolded
Lara smirked at Dana and threw her onto the bed. “You’re clumsiness is one reason I love you so much.” Lara said as she climbed up Dana’s body
“Oh really?”
“I have a thing for dorks.” Lara winked
“Bitch.” Dana said with a smile as she grabbed Lara and kissed her
“Hey Al.” Carmen said as she sat next to Alice at The Planet
“Hey.” Alice smiled. “Where’s your other half?”
“Oh, you mean my girlfriend who also happens to be your girlfriend?” Carmen joked. “She’s still in bed.”
Alice’s eyes widened. “I’m so sorry Carmen!”
“What? Why?” Carmen asked, confused
“For occupying so much of Shane’s time. I never meant to butt into your relationship.”
“Alice!” Carmen laughed. “I was totally kidding. I live with Shane, I don’t need to be with her all day too.”
“But-“
“Shut up.” Carmen interrupted. “Shane and I both love you a lot, and I understand that you need someone there.” Carmen smiled. “How are you Al?”
Alice sighed. “I’m ok.”
“Really?”
“No.” Alice smiled sadly. “My life is shit right now.”
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Yay! Again, I loved this chap, especially with the whole Shalice scene making me laugh again. That seems to happen a lot when I’m reading your story. All the more reason to love it:) Kinda curious as to how Lara knew about what happened between Alice and Dana at the hospital. Thanks for the hope at the end and I can’t wait to read what’s next! As always, you rock!
You’re killing me, but I love it. I’m so frustrated that there is a new man on the scene for Al .. i want my danish. Can’t wait for the next chap.
I realy wish i could see Helena’s face after the drink was spewed on her.Dana & Alice realy need to talk they both have definate issues. =)
you threw in an interesting twist there. helena shagged this new fella that’s caught alice’s eye and bumper… very funny and pretty typical of how life is sometimes.as always, looking forward to reading more and more and more.
Yeah … I was completely sharing Dana’s expression when Lara told her she knew about the bathroom sex. This was such an excellent update & I can’t wait to read your next chapter. I also dug the conversations between Alice & Carmen … as well as Alice & Helena (I spit water on someone last week in a VERY surprised moment … I can relate).
Baaaaabe! What a fucking awesome update! Glad Lara is not so stupid in this story. I love Danish, but I liked Lara’s character at the end of season 3. I am glad that she’s got a little back bone in this. That being said, break them up all ready! LOL. Kidding. Bringing in a guy for Alice was a good idea. Now Dana has someone to be jealous of and hopefully, come to her fucking senses already. Keep up the great work…I think I owe you like….10 updates now. LMAO! Sorry babe. I am totally fucking up on my end! Alright. Thanks for the fabulous Danish fix. I love you babe! Keep kicking ass :D
Thank goodness her heart doesn’t completely agree with her words! Lara deserves better and I’m sure this Luke guy does too! Can’t you just lock them in a room and leave them there until they come to their senses?;)Great update.
One of the first thoughts that came to my head was that Dana is an idiot. She really isn’t, but it feels like she has the need to do and say things that she thinks are the right thing, but not necessarily right for her. She is a “pleaser” like Alice, but in a different way. I liked your update, and enjoyed how you switched back and forth between Dana/Lara and Alice.I have to admit that I did think Lara was stupid, so I didn’t expect her to know about Dana and Alice in the hospital. If she knew that, she should know that Dana is lying to her right now. If Luke was one of the guys Helena bragged about does that mean he’s bi, because she alluded to the fact that the guys she shagged were very feminine – at least on the show she did.Thanks again for the update. I’m looking forward to the next installment.
I left you a comment on your last chap i missed Oh and i almost forgot! I love the demon dog i think the dog should have more of a role tho destroying everything Alice owns its just great lol Excellent chap even tho the Dana and Lara-Ness i could do without :gags: lol but it really was great and Lara knowing about what happened at the hos between Dana and Alice i didn’t expect that was awesome but she was a bit too strange and im glad Dana is all somewhat confused because between the lines she really just wants her Alice back! dun dun dun I like new characters so its cool that you introduced Luke and the fact that Helena shagged him haha is funny keep it up! as always poopster you rule :)
Amazing chapter! Update soon!
POOPY I FREAKING LOVE YOU..AND I HAVE TO WRITE IN CAPS BECAUSE I NEED YOU TOO SEE HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY..I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT, CARMEN BEING THE SECRET SAVING ANGEL, LUKAS HAHA, EVERYTHINGGGGGG…THIS STORY IS AMAZING AND I CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE…okay nuff caps, it’s like i’m yelling, but you know what i mean. This is the best danish up in this place. So does dana still really truly love alice?…i don’t know!..she does she doesn’t, dana’s killing me. but i absolutely love the fact that alice faced her fears of dana, and now she is getting on with her life, loveeee it. can’t wait to read more poopy one..post soon! brownie out.
oh and i def agree with ackemat 100 %..dana’s is totally a “pleaser”..just like alice. But dana def says things she thinks are right in that situation, but don’t feel right in her heart. that’s her biggest fault i think.
oh goodness…see here i was thinking that dana actually grew a brain in the last update, and now? shes run off to paris, and is lying to lara? see now, i absouluty ador lara, just not dana and lara. dana needs to be with alice. man…im guessing i have no need to beg for an update since you do them so well already. instead i will sit here waiting most patiently for one and try to get the “if i only had a brain” song from the wizard of oz out of my head…damn…not working…
I knew it, Alice would get to talk to Dana before she left to Paris. Yay! :DI would never have thought that Carmen would be the one who did a reality-check on Alice though. But I’m glad she did! Alice and Dana both seem to be moving on. It’s breaking my Danish heart…but they both deserve it, especially Alice ofcourse. Funny how life can go. I wonder if the two of them will get together again, or that they will be just best friends again in the future. I’m ofcourse hoping for the latter, ’cause true love can’t be denied (especially not in fanfic world! :P). :D
Hé girl, great update you’ve got here. So good to see Alice dating even if it’s with a guy. Something for Dana to get really jealous over when she gets back. She may then start beginning to see the light! I like Lara but not with Dana, more as a friend thing. To bad they have 4 more weeks in Paris, maybe Dana needs to come home for some family emergency…hahaah sorry, I just want her home. I love what you are doing with this story. Keep updating…your story telling makes me smile. Thanks
It’s funny the exact expression you described Dana having whne Lara said she knew was the exact expression. I couldn’t keep reading for a moment, a squeal of delight caught in my throat. Great chapter, I’ve always kind of hoped Alice would just go exclusively lesbian but I know that will never happen. I mean maybe it’s because I know that LH is gay that I just don’t want to see her with a guy…or maybe I just don’t want to see anyone with a guy lol. Great chapter you’ve got my heart racing. PS sign on to messenger some time Homie you’ve got to give me a hand with this story!!!!
This is def one of the best danish stories of not the best danish story at the moment. I love it, I like the role reversal now of Alice moving on and Dana maybe hoping for the past back. Please post again soon xx
arg!!! no, Dana, the correct repsonse would ahve been “yes, i still love her and i need to go back home and stay in bed with her for 5 days” oh well, i know youll give us a happy Danish ending eventually…right? yes, you will, because youre an excellentt writer. anyways, i loved the updae and please post more soon!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! I’m screaming inside! She soooo does NOT love Lara. Man…this is unhealthy, me getting all worked up over fiction. but this is my favorite story ever, how could I not get so into it!? I’m so proud of Alice for taking that step towards Dana and for finding this new dude. She’s really on her way to happiness, BUT: I have a certain feeling that it won’t be like this for long. Dana comes back from Paris…who knows what’s going to happen. That’s the best part of this story, I can never predict the direction it’s going to take. I’m so enthralled with each update I see. As always, I can’t wait to see what is going to happen next. You keep me guessing and that’s my favorite part. My Danish heart is pounding! You’re wonderful, and I can’t say it enough. Can’t wait for the next update, don’t keep us waiting too long, I’m suffering!!! Fabulous. :)