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Danish: From Beginning to End (Real Time 5)
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One Week Later
“No, you don’t understand.” Dana growled into the phone, earning a worried look from Lara. “I’m in Paris right now! I’m fucking halfway across the world!” Dana paused to listen to the person on the other end of the phone. “Fine. Fine!” She yelled and hung up, dropping her head into her hands
“Whoa. What was that about?” Lara asked
“It was Mack, my agent.” Dana looked at Lara with apologetic eyes. “I have to go back to LA early.”
“Oh.” Lara said softly
“There’s a huge match coming up, and Mack wants me to come back and start training again as soon as possible.”
“It’s your job baby. I understand.” Lara walked up to Dana and sat in her lap, kissing the angry athlete. “When are you leaving?”
“Tomorrow morning. Mack was even sweet enough to have already bought my ticket.” Dana spat bitterly
“Hey.” Lara chided gently. “This next week is going to be hell for me anyway. It’s only one week Dane; you’re not missing out on much.”
Dana took a deep breath. “I’ll miss you.” She whispered
“I’ll miss you too.” Lara smiled, giving Dana a gentle kiss
“Guess I should pack. The plane leaves at 11:00. Let’s go grab some breakfast.”
“Sounds good.” Lara said with a sad smile
“Coffee is a beautiful thing.” Alice smiled contentedly as she sipped the beverage
“I’m partial to espresso.” Shane said as she threw the entire espresso shot to the back of her throat
“See, I cant drink that shit.” Luke said. “I’ll stick with tea please.”
“I’m with Lucas.” Helena smiled at her old friend
“You Brits and your fucking tea. I don’t understand it.” Alice yawned
“Tired Al?” Bette smirked
“Yes, actually. I was up until four finishing my article. It would have been done sooner, but Medusa, aka ‘Demon Dog’, ate the almost finished copy of it. That will teach me to write out the rough draft instead of typing it.” Alice sighed
“The old ‘my dog ate my homework line’ Al? Not original.” Luke pointed out
Alice rolled her eyes, and when she brought them back to focus on Luke, her heart stopped.
“Alice, are you ok? You look like you’ve seen a ghost.” Luke said, reaching for her hand
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For a second i thought that the hot blonde dana was dancing with was lara suprising dane with a hair dye.I read a line of dialouge wrong.Please post soon.=)
great drama. i am glad bojangles shoved you along. i get so excited when i see that you have posted. i am so intrigued as to where this story is going.
Damn You!!!! That was awesome. I absolutely love this fic. Keep it coming, because I simply cannot wait for the next update!
Okay, so now I’m addicted…I can’t wait to see what happens next. How long are they going to torture each other? More importantly, how long are you going to torture us? Please post the next chapter. And soon!!!
Poop Poop Poop, I want to hate you and I’m trying to because when you write like this it makes me angry because its so freaking great. Loved loved loved the dancing scene (wish it could have been longer) and I’m loving how the tables are turning here. Dana catching the feeling for the lovely and wonderful Ally P. How could you not though right? Can’t wait for the next chapter you promised tomorrow and I’m going to hold you to it. You can’t leave me in suspense for too long. I also loved how real the conversation between Dana and Alice was spot on my friend spot on. Post soon.
Bless your wonderful heart for posting so soon after I had pested you! I loved it! Every single word of it, even if it was purely evil to do the whole dancing thing and have nothing happen afterwards. What can I say? I am utterly hooked on this story and you made my night babe. Thanks so much!
Hey pretty girl…I am leaving feedback an hours after I read your story cause you are lighting up on me right now. LOL. You know the drill…fucking loved it…fucking love you…ok wait. now this all sounds so insincere(sp?). Let’s see…how did I love this??? Let me count the ways…I loved the part about the dog eating Al’s paper cause she hand wrote it first…I cuaght that ;) The Dance scene was so stinking hot…not long enough though…and I was pupmeed that Alice is doing so well with out Dane…except Dana totally whimped out at the end….damn lezzie tennis players. Great update babe…I am looking forward to tomorrow nights! Love you :-)
oooh so good! When will they just get together!! Brilliant fic as always. :)
Yoda that was soooo fucking just ahhh!! I loved it.. so much so that all you can get out of me is an ahhh! However you are such a tease Dana and Alice were so close! I guess I am going to have to wait till next time so they can maybe get a little bit more closer? Well a girl can dream! How is life and stuff :)? Cant wait till the next one
Hey! Hey you! You cannot end a chapter like that! I demand another update imediatly. You have 10 minutes to write. GO! Alright, nnot for the critiquing. I loooooved this update, so amazing. Everytime I finish reading one of your chapter I feel like I need to go write, lol.my favorite line from this one: “Hey Yoda? Shut the fuck up.” So Alice, haha. And I liked how Shane was pretending to be drunk so she wouldn’t have to talk about the dance. That was clever. Oh! And I like the new story idea you had, I’d definitly read it! Keep up the inspired writing and update soon for all our sakes!
Owwww had to leave us like dat lol. glad to see Alice in a happy place at the moment, and loved the AlShaDane scene. Awsome writing, keep up the great work!
oh man…here i was thinking you might actuallly resolve this nonsense with the dance and the talk…but nooooooooooooooooooooooo! you just have to drive all of us crazy, dont you? *sigh* why must i love this story? oh yeah..cause its amazing! post more soon palease!
Wow Amazing chapter! I love your fic so much! Shame Dana seems to be realising she still loves alice while alice seems to be finally over dana! Anyway keep up your great writing and of course update soon!!
I love this story and I just hope that alice and dana get back together in the end please post soon I love it and great up date
Oh my…this just keeps getting better and better. The anticipation is killing me (and that’s a really good thing). I really liked how you turned the table and had Alice say she loves Dana as a friend. You know they are both lying to each other and not realizing it…which makes all the tension so much sweeter. Great job as always…i’m lovin it!
if only this update was 12 pages longer… even then it wouldn’t have been long enough. another great chapter and i hope more will follow soon.