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Dark Crawler: Part 4
“Yeah I guess it is. This is my disguise?” Bette asks looking at Jarred.
“Yeah no mark no anything. Just black.”
“Well it’s alright. I like it,” says Bette.
“Yeah me too. No Supermanny or Spidermanny,” Alice says looking around seeing Jarred and Sofia looking at her with an expression like “what is she talking about”. She just laughs and walks away.
After many months after the night of Bettes rebirth, the towns people regarded the women hero as the Dark Crawler. Many people didn’t know why all the towns villains attacked at the school. What they didn’t know is that it was because the Dark Crawler was a high school kid. Alice has been very good with Bette, helping her control her powers. She has developed her hearing power. Her fire and ice power. She can shoot fire and ice from her eyes. She first developed the fire power when she saw Tina in a bikini at the lake.
They all went to the lake to go swimming one day in summer. It was really hot. Bette was sitting on the bench next to Alice. “So, it’s a relieve isn’t it?”
“What’s a relieve Alice?”
“That you haven’t heard anything yet. That means no monsters no people in trouble,” Alice said with a big smile on her face. Which made Bette smile too.
“I only wish that this weather cold get a little cooler.”
“You wish!” said Alice taking her clothes off getting ready to go swimming. And then Bette saw Tina in her bikini. Bette couldn’t help it but shoot fire from her eyes to a nearby bush. Alice was the only one to see this. Everybody tried to stop the fire. No one could have explained the bush on fire. Bette and Alice were the only ones who knew. But what they didn’t know is that Tina suspected something up with Alice and Bette.
Later on Bette and Alice went to the caves to tell Jarred and Sofia what had happened. So for a week long they tried to help Bette control her new power. They succeeded. Bette was a quick learner. As Bette was trying to concentrate she heard something outside the cave. Jarred noticed this and asked:”Bette? What’s wrong?”
“There is something at the school.”
“Go check it out,” says Sofia.
“But it’s in school hours, they normally don’t attack in the morning,”Bette says sensing more danger. Sofia comes up to Bette and asks her,” What’s the matter?”
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(16 votes, average: 3.44 out of 5)
Sofia was right Sara lol. So sweet hope Bette will tell Tina what is going on soon, Tina needs to know because she will be an easy target for monsters to get to Bette. PPVS
This is so good and Bette is a hero and save Tina!
Setting a bush on fire, eh? LMAO! I tink you’d get more comments if you post less frequently and give people time to check out your story, to discover it. That was probably a stupid thing to say as I want you to update ASAP lol. PPS!
I’m liking the story. Please continue posting. This is different and exciting.
Wow, I love this story I hope to read a lot more of it. PPS
1st step SAVE THE GIRL! thanks for the update