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Destined Souls : Chapter 1
Destined Souls : Chapter 1
The Encounter : Chapter 1
As Tina walked through the hotel lobby , followed by her assistants who were diligently noting down the instructions being given to them , she heard light laughter coming her way from nearby couches in the main lobby of the Four Seasons Hotel . This laughter was so familiar , so divine , so beautiful almost like the soothing waves of a calm ocean . It was music to her ears . But suddenly she stopped dead in her tracks . She stood motionless , even afraid to breathe .
Her assistants were staring at her trying to figure out what was wrong with her . Her face appeared as if all the colour had drained out of it and she looked as if she had seen a ghost . After a minute or so (which to Tina seemed like a lifetime) Tina slowly snapped out of it . She slowly turned around almost afraid to do so . Afraid of who it could be and of the unforeseen future it would bring .
When she turned around there she was “Her Bette” as beautiful as ever . Big chocolate brown eyes staring back at her and reaching deep within her soul . Her facial expressions suddenly softened under the loving gaze of Bette and all her fears and stress that were quite evident on her face just a few seconds ago all vanished within moments . Her face lit up and she smiled .
Bette was having a dinner meeting with one of the artists , whose paintings she was thinking of showing in her gallery . The meeting was going great . The artist had almost immediately agreed to show his paintings at the Bette Porter Gallery . Bette was now discussing her visions about the show with him , when suddenly she heard a familiar voice . But then she thought better of it . It couldn’t be she thought . Maybe her mind was playing tricks on her . Besides the voice was very commanding , almost authoritative . So she kept on talking with the artist .
But then she heard that voice again and this time she caught a passing glimpse of a familiar figure , so beautiful , so angelic . She couldn’t believe her eyes . Her breath was caught in her throat . She looked stunned , her train of thought lost . Her mind went totally blank . She slowly turned afraid if she turned too fast , whatever she had heard and seen would disappear like it was just her dream .
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(71 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Great beginning and I am looking forward to more.
WOW what a nice beginning of a new story. Tina has sure changed…let´s us se where this takes us. Please post soon.
Love this keep it coming Thanks
Wow great start and I really like it. Please continue the story, I want to know what’s happen between Bette and Tina in 5 years not together and what’s going on with them. Please post soon, thank you!
i thought it was fab and the title too! cant wait for the next one!
I’m so impressed…so impressed Darh-ling…hmm…You are, dare I say, BRILLIANT!?!?!??
Wow!
This was a great start. Looking forward to the next one.
this story is set after a while of their break up right? what’s the timeline?
What a wonderful beginning!! You have captured the subtle change in Tina’s personality and Bette’s notice of it exquisitely. Will enjoy reading more.
Please continue, I love the way you started this story. Excellent!!
Excellent!
Good stuff, Tanishaa!
That was agreat start..Please continue..They could try and reconnect but please fill us i on what they have been doig for the past 5 years..Maybe Bette has a child? or Tina? Better if was Bette…So Tina could see she rally did want children…Please continue…Great story.
read your story by chance. trying not to get hooked on any more stories, and then comes yours. beautiful
Excellent beginning – you write very well- looking forward to your full story on B&T. Thanks for coming out.
It seems theres endless possibilities with this as its been so long since they’ve seen each other, i cant wait to read more….
this is sooo great. a good start to another new beginning. (i love the bette and tina new beginning’s stories..all the variations.) a gracious ten thumbs up to you in your first attempt at this. great style of writing..simple…vivid…sooo,…ahhhh. thanks for taking the time to share with us. (bette and tina are my favourite also….just can’t get enough of those two…)