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Destined Souls : Chapter 5
For months after their breakup , Bette had cried and begged Tina to give her a second chance , to believe in their love again . She had lost count of how many times she had told Tina , that she was really truly sorry for what she had done and that she would , forever , regret causing her this pain . But Tina was hurt and angry and not ready to listen . Bette had ripped her heart out and stomped all over it . She didn’t even want to see her face , let alone talk with Bette .
Still Bette couldn’t give up just yet . Something in her sub consciousness kept on telling her , to not give up as yet . So she kept on trying . She held on to their love and to whatever tiny bit of hope she had left in her . She kept on believing that , somehow , someday , she would wake up and this thing might turn out to be just an awful horrible nightmare . But unfortunately that was not to be the case .
Bette flinched , as she remembered that day , crystal clear , as if it was just yesterday . That memory would be engraved on her mind forever . It was the day Tina had broken down in front of her . Ohh God !!!! Just the memory sent a chill down Bette’s spine . Tina’s heart wrenching cry had cut straight through Bette’s heart , rendering her numb , cold , lifeless . She could not bear , to look at Tina’s beautiful face , etched with so much pain , her beautiful eyes , so lost , so cold , so emotionless and know that she was the lone reason for this defeated state of her lover .
That was the day when Bette had stopped . She vowed that she would no longer cause any kind pain to Tina . She at least owed that much to Tina . The only thing she wanted was for Tina to be happy . So without another word she had left . She had driven aimlessly for hours , tears never ceasing to stop , crying for all that she had lost for good , all her hopes , dreams that may never come true , mourning the end of her relationship with Tina . She sat at the beach for hours , lifeless , torn , heartbroken , berating herself for the kind of person she had become .
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(40 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
keep going, please… i like the way you are putting this together, post soon I can’t cope with cliffhangers
What the hell!!!!!!!!!!! post soon
beautifully written….flashbacks! now go get your woman kennard! at all cost.
You must continue and soon…please don’t keep us hanging long. LOVE IT
I didn’t realize I was holding my breath all the time reading your beautiful story. Please continue and post soon!!
wow! This story is getting really good…….poor Bette and Tina. Come on Bette don’t run away again? Tina go find your woman! Great job!
Absolutely continue. This is a great, great story. I cant wait to read more.
I’m hanging, very nice, please post again soon, Bette’s gotta come back.
yes, just read all chapters….wonderful start to this story…pls continue!!! but pls post more often….tks
I just came across this story…please continue.
Damn that was amazing !
Touching, please continue!!
Please continue
K
Great chapter. Can’t wait for more and I hope it’s soon. Love it.
Hey, you should replace those “??” with a few “!!!” Of course, you should continue! I loved it and anxiously awaitng your next chapter>>>I hope Tina gets a chance to talk to Bette soon, but I do love the long slow process and all the drama that it takes to get them back together! LOL!
dont you dare do not continue that story…OMG..Tina run and get your womam back and Bette its about time for you stop run away and start listen Tina first amazing chapter i cant wait for more
omg.. please do continue…. you can’t leave this truly amazing story on tender hooks… x
Hey! I know it`s a long time since you wrote this story, but I just read it now, havent been in here that long. I think your story is great, but you cant stop here! Pleeeaseee