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    Destiny in a Mechanics shop (Pt 23) The next morning

    Story written on April 24, 2005 by Imlovinit.
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    Later that morning…

    BANG!!

    CRASH!!

    Bette was startled awake. Finding Tina in a very unforgiving mood. Swinging her legs off the couch and sitting up right, Bette also found that Tinas couch wasn’t the most comfortable thing to sleep on. Massaging her back as she got off the couch. Walking into the kitchen to find Tina over a hot stove.

    “Morning good looking.” Bette said sweetly. Mean while Tina didn’t even comprehend Bette’s good morning pleasantries, She just kept making pancakes. This didn’t go unnoticed by Bette, who had found that Tina’s kitchen chairs were slightly more comfortable to sit on, rather then standing up with a sore back.

    “What cha cooking?” Bette asked politely. Again Tina didn’t reply.
    “Are you going to talk to me at all?” Bette was starting to get a little frustrated with Tina’s mood. Tina swiftly turned around facing Bette. Her stare as cold as they come. “Bette I’m still angry at you about this morning…You scared the living day-lights out of me…I though I was going to be raped in my own home. In my own bed…I was so scared…. I thought you would have some common-sense.” Tina said bitterly.

    Bettes mouth was open…. She never really thought about the situation that way, yet with Tina’s tone and un-excusable manner Bette wasn’t just about to give up the fight.

    “I thought I would surprise you”…Bette sighed; “yet I can see your point-of view and Im sorry that I scared the ***** out of you. Bette got up from her chair and glided over to where Tina was standing. Putting her arms around her new partner gently, Bette nuzzled her face into Tina’s sweet smelling neck. “Can you ever forgive me?”

    Tina looked out the window of her apartment, and then closed her eyes, taking a deep breath to calm the nerves just below her skin kept jumping for joy. Bette’s breath was shallow; as was Tinas…She sucked back a moan deep into her belly. Finally opening her eyes once again, Tina turned around, looking at Bette. Coming with in close range of Bette’s ear, Tina whispered… “You’ll have to do a little better then that.” Then pulling away instantly.

    Bette couldn’t believe how challenging Tina could be sometimes… In all the time that she had been dating women, never had she met a girl as stubborn as Tina. Yet Bette found this to be a more positive experience, most women didn’t challenge her and when she was challenged, she loved it.

    Bette went back to the chair she was sitting in minutes ago, pushing it in, Bette turned to face Tina’s direction. “Can I borrow your shower for 5 minutes…promise not to use the soap or the shampoo and conditioner…Scouts honour.” Bette presented the scouts sign before giving Tina her best puppy dog face.

    Tina turned, looked at Bette casually, and then turned back around to the stack of pancakes in front of her. “5 minutes.”

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    1. Hi! WOW I don’t no that to say but I just read all of you Beautiful Amazing Story right now, I know I haven’t commented in your’re story but you still have me and I love it your really good about you’re story and I’m really enjoyed to read more so THANK YOU VERY MUCH more power to you keep up the good writer Please post soon.

    3. Wow, today is a great day. I can’t believe I’m reading a new chapter from you ( too short, but I’m not complaing, okay maybe a little, but still, I’m glad you post a new chapter) .

      My comments on this chapter, *THUMPS UP* , make Bette suffer please, because I totally neglected the part that Bette was actually comitting a felony, along with assult, when she broke into Tina’s and jumped in bed with her NAKED and was SPOONING her, without her knowledge. When I was reading chapter 22 , I just thought it was cute. Now, that I read this chapter, Tina thought she was going to get rape……I felt bad. Anyway, make Bette pay BIG TIME please. Though, I hope you won’t make this story or this situation any more serious ( I know it’s a little ironic, rape is a big deal, but….) , because then it would totally change….

      ….What am I saying? I know you’ll play it out, so that Tina will forgive Bette in a conventional way…

      ….Looking Forward….

    4. Woo Hoo….I’m so glad to see an update for this awesome story imlovinit……great update too……i love it that you are making Tina the strong, does not submit to anyone, type woman……and i absolutely LOVE the pace…….in short just love the story…….Hope to see another update from you soon, but i am prepared to wait as long as it takes ya……Thanks Mate:)

    5. I have sooo missed your story..glad to see you again…sending you some good MOJO..to help you out of your slump…keep it up..your doing a great job!

    9. Welcome back imlovinit. Can’t tell you how much i enjoy this story. Glad to see you are making Tina strong, a very realistic portrayal of the beginning of a relationship…..Thankyou for coming back to this story….Please update soon!

    11. Welcome. speak softly and threaten to pull the plug on your PC and it will start to loe you, now you can start writing for us again. Love this Tina. Again welcome back.

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