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Dice
When their meals came not twenty minutes later, Dana couldn’t disagree. It was the best outing she had been on in a long time. Perfect food, perfect service and perfect company.
“So Al, I got to ask, have you been living in a fancy hotel for the past year?” Shane’s question seemed out of the blue to Dana, but after thinking about it she herself was curious.
Although she felt like screaming and crying at the same time, Dana remained composed. “So you’ve bought a house?” she asked slowly, looking down at her food to break her gaze with
“No, not yet. He’s been in
The night went on in similar fashion, with light conversation hiding the deeper topics that plagued everyone’s minds. Every once and awhile Dana would be caught by Alice simply watching her, and then that unwelcome, uncomfortable silence would set in once again, only to be hidden seconds later by trivial discussion usually initiated by Shane, who didn’t miss a beat in realising the intensity of the situation. After dinner the three moved onto a nearby club, where Shane wasted no time rushing off to get drinks. She returned temporarily ten minutes later only to leave Alice and Dana alone, having found someone that sparked her interest at the bar.
“I see Shane still a frigid *****,”
Their conversation lapsed into a comfortable silence as they watched the people in the club from their table. All the while Dana contemplated in her head what to say to
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bojangles: “For me anyway this isn’t great.” Are you crazy? That was more than great! Really well written and emotional. Loved it.
Does the end mean Alice is taking her back, or is there a “but” somewhere? hmmm… :-)
this is great and I am sure that there is a lot more to come so please post soon
This is a great start, hope you post soon
really good. i love all the drama and angst. you are an excellent writer – post soon.