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Do you remember when… Chapter 1
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Do you remember when… Chapter 1
“Bette, can you pass me the pillow case?” Tina motioned from the opposite side of the bed, the expanse of cream Egyptian cotton before her as they carried out their usual Saturday morning chore of changing the bed linen.
“You know T, the pigment from those rose petals have only just come out of these sheets,” Bette gave a wicked grin as she saw Tina’s coy look, she pointed as she squinted and said with mock sternness, “that’s the last time you bring rose petals home from the hotel and spread them on our bed!” Bette laughed as she threw the folded pillow case across the bed to Tina.
“Yes mother!” Tina rolled her eyes as she caught the flying cotton, “but wouldn’t you say it was worth having stained sheets for?”
“Oh absolutely, so much so I have a stack of new sheets in the cupboard ready for the next session and you do know that by us having a second round with those petals that you lost your opportunity to make pot pouri don’t you!”
Tina smiled as she walked around the bed to stand directly in front of Bette, “then its a good thing I saved some, isn’t it! It was an amazing weekend wasn’t it babe?” She placed her hands on Bette’s waist, always enjoying their Saturday morning relaxed routine of being together and doing the boring chores, boring, but because they did them together she liked it, liked the time they spent chatting aimlessly about nothing and everything, covering obscure subjects and serious topics, talking about Alice’s antics, Shane’s recent conquests and Dana’s latest tennis tournament, but it was time together where there were no pressures, apart from Bette’s occasional Saturday morning at work, this was their routine, and now that Bette had completed her first week of her new hours, the Saturday morning working was, hopefully, a thing of the past.
“It was the best T…”
“And you know at some point we really do have to have an evening in, just the two of us, watching videos…”
Bette laughed at Tina’s reference to their now named, ‘Portard Porn Collection’, “Tina, we only have two, one of which is just a dance…”
“Well maybe I need to buy you a video camera for your birthday so we can expand the collection!”
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Hey…well i had thought the shows version of this scene was great, that was until i read this!!!…but this is so much more detailed…Its what we all wanted to see…you always show us how it should have been….Detailed, and very romantic…Brilliant as always…Great to be reading your stories again!
Your writing is amazing, Jo.I love how you take a mundane activity such as changing bed linens and transform it into this provocative and reminiscent experience between two people deeply, totally in love. Brilliant!
Glad you’re back so soon, Jobadge. I like this game, too. Play on.
I have died and gone to heaven….a continuation…how lucky are we!!!!! thankyou, thankyou…
How sweet. I must admit I am guilty of doing the same thing with my love. I do love that game
I did my happy dance when I saw your name….thanks so much!
I have been following your stories thus far and I like this one also. I say keep it up I’m always down for a new adventure.
I am taking a deep resonanting breath because your words have stirred up so many emtions inside of me. All those emtions that both Bette and Tina had remembering that special night were very powerful. Why or why did they not ask you to write for the show. You give the words love, soulmate, and commitment a whole knew meaning. I am in awe of this continued story. It is nice to see the inner workings of both of these women. Thank you for bringing back this story even though it is really a new one.
Why is it that we just love this scene so much? I’m not sure I understand. It’s so touching and you have captured all the tenderness and sexual energy so nicely. I’m a grateful reader.
That was really great. You always portray the tenderness and love between these two women so well. Thanks mate!
Well that definitely blew the show’s version right outta the water! I also liked how Tina was the one to ask Bette to dinner. Can’t wait for more!
mmmmmmmmmmm!
Just when I think your writing can’t get any better you go and write this wonderful chapter and prove me wrong. Not only did you show the love they have for each, but you could see that they like each other and I think that is something that has not been evident even in the show. Thanks for your great insight Jo.
Wow. I also did a happy dance when I saw you had posted. You outdid yourself this time. This was even better than my expectations and they are always pretty high because you never disappoint. I love the game they are playing and the way you write their memories is exquisite. I think I shall fall asleep with a contented grin permanently on my face tonight…and my dreams will be amazing! Thanks!
*happy sigh* You are one of the few current stories that makes me like Tina again! I love anything you write Jo and i’m glad to see a continuation! Psot soon!
thank you, you said that better then what IC and her team did. Hats off to you jobadge. I’m so glad you have continued. Fancy tina been the one asking bette out, like they say in grumpy old men, hmmm yummy lesbians
I like this game, Jobadge. Welcome back!
I love the game. And I love that you are continuing with this storyline, but with a great new twist. Keep going!
Damn this is awesome and beautiful and they are so lovely, love them. OK post soon please, thanks!
Jobadge- I love reading your stories. They are always interesting with so much detail. When I see your name on a story, I can’t wait to read it. I love how Bette and Tina are so at ease with each other as they share their thoughts and play this game. The best line in this story is, “Honey, the word ‘badder’ only exists in the TiBette bedroom world.” This line made me laugh. Bette and Tina referring to themselves as the “TIBette World” just cracks me up. Thank you for being one of the writers that get’s me through the waiting period until Season 4 starts. Post again soon.
This was fantastic! Loved the detail, especially how it was TINA who did the asking. Completely made my dull day at work brighter. Thanks!
Oh gosh! So glad to see you’re back. That was an awesome chapter Jo. Gives a wonderful insight to all of their emotions. So sensual, tender and loving. Thanks!
Welcome back! is a pleasure read your amazings stories and this is not the exception! this is a beautiful story wiht good memories thanks for this incredible chapter, it was a very good start!
what’s up, Jo? missed you!! I REALLY like this start…I’ll be looking for this one when I log on :)
I think us readers let out a collective sigh and cry when you ended, “I Thought We Could…” Amen for answering our collective prayers! Looking forward to the next chapter.
so glad you’re back, love the blow by blow account…and the love…
So glad you are back writing about B/T. This was so nice and romantic… the best earring scene yet and so much detail about how they really were feeling about each other.
Jobadge this is lovely and loving. Please do continue, we love it. Thank you so much. Happy you are back so soon with more T&B loving.
Hey, this was a really nice chapter luv, please continue as soon as you can. Thanks.
Nice touch to have Tina asking Bette to dinner, good one, Jo!