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Do you remember when… Chapter 14
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Bette parked her car and exited toward the Planet, her face showing the smile and upbeat feeling that was racing through her veins, she couldn’t wait to see Tina.
She pulled the door open, looking around to see where they were all sat, she noticed the table at the back, where they were all deep in conversation, Tina’s head turned toward Shane as she took in what the other woman was saying.
Alice turned and saw Bette slowly walking toward them, her voice low as she took in the air about her friend, “f u c k…” she quietly said.
Bette noticed Alice’s open mouth, not moving, her eyes wide as she watched Bette walking toward them, her eyes took in the others, looking at Alice and then turning to see what had grabbed Alice’s attention.
Shane did a double take as she saw Bette, “jesus man…”
Tina looked to Alice, then to Shane, her head slowly turning as she too looked to what had caught their attention, her heart began to pound as her mind recalled another time when their friends reacted in the same manner. Her head slowly turned, and that’s when she too said the first thing to come into her mind, “oh… my… god…”
Bette took her time, slowly walking toward the table, weaving her way through the scattered tables, her eyes instantly locked with Tina’s as soon as her head had turned, she saw the words she had uttered, reading her lips from a distance, she smiled, the perfect reaction from afar.
She watched as Tina’s eyes took in the whole picture, her freshly washed hair, the dark curls shining, the long lean neck, the black leather jacket loosely open to reveal the low cut white tee shirt, the underwear underneath giving the obvious lift from the curves clearly visible at the neck line of her tee shirt, her eyes quickly flitted to Bette’s neck, which Bette noticed, she brought her fingers to the hickey, her eyes narrowing as the smile continued, the silent communication confirming she knew it was there, she watched Tina’s eyes drop, past her chest, lower, to the jeans, her favourite levis…
Tina gulped, her eyes riveted to advancing figure, her mind went fuzzy, all sounds around her muffled, her chest was pounding, her eyes dropped to the pale denim, the buttons fitting perfectly together, knowing what was beneath, she licked her dry lips, seeing the smiling figure getting closer to the table, her eyes went lower, down the long legs, seeing the old beaten tan boots looking so… fucking… sexy…
“Tina…” Shane quietly nudged her…
“Uh…”
“Tina, you need to breathe…” Shane laughed, amazed at the connection between her two friends, a connection like no other she had ever seen.
Tina brought her lips together, swallowing the lump that had appeared in her throat, “fuck… she… looks…”
“Amazing…” Shane finished the sentence as Bette reached the table.
Bette’s eyes had never left Tina’s, she stood in front of her, gazing down at the silent figure of her girlfriend, she bent lower, bringing her mouth to Tina’s ear, she spoke slowly, her words close and warm at Tina’s ear, “I think… I need to have a private word with you… Ms Kennard…”
Tina’s eyes slowly closed as the warm words travelled through her, the erotic shiver travelling down her spine, a smile crossing her face as she took the words in, “oh yeah…”
“I seem to have a mark that has appeared on my neck… I thought you might like to explain where it came from…” Bette replied quietly.
Tina smiled, Alice was right, dead meat… and she was so going to enjoy being… dead meat…
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Oh my damn…that was awesome. Tina is in for a treat. Bring on part 2.
Just the description of Bette walking in dressed to kill…Its enough to make yer head spin!!..lol..Ok Tina may be dead meat…But what a way to go!…Great post!
OMG… my mouth got so dry just reading… dammmmmm girl… post the rest
I want to be Tina for awhile.Need to be on the receiving end of Pay back from Bette. The levi are a Porter trade mark. for anyone to look at, but only Tina to touch. thanks
That description of B was fantastic, I can actually c that right here right now…………..post soon u r the tease not T………..love T’s face.
OMG!!! You are so bad you are Good!!!! Thank you PPS
Two American icons….Levis and Bette Porter’s ass!! Forever memorialized in your tale. I just love this story. Stories don’t have to be smutty to be sexy and titillating. Great imagery and imagination are all that are needed.
Oh those fucking amazing levis. Just add Tina’s black bra and you have a slice of heaven with a B&T sandwich. You amaze and astound me with your writings. I always look forward to your chapters or stories because I know that you will take care of Bette/Jennifer and Tina/Laurel.
Nice!!!! glad to hear JB and I have more in common than our dark brown hair…levis, T-shirt and old Tan boots!!!!Oh now all I need is the JB body!!!! now where did u read or see that interview????
OMG! At a time like this, you can not tease tibetters like this!, I was hoping for you know Alpha bette, to be all alpha over Tina … Damn tis rude to leave a girl hanging like that lol! Post soon!
ahhhhh fuckin tease!!
Great chapter as always. I read that article. One of the pictures is now hanging in my locker at work. I know very high school, but I couldn’ help it. She is like a fine wine – better with age. Thanks foe takin the time ti write.
I just now thought of the scene from “Fast Times at Ridgemont High” when Judge Reinhold was jerking off in the bathroom hile he imagined Phoebe Cates emerging from the pool outside the house. Definitely looking forward to part 2!
Oh my stars above, you do have a way with words and describing a scene. You make it so real, we can just see her walking across that room and looking Tina dead in the eyes and not looking at anyone else with that smirk on her face and Tina being dumbfounded at the sight of her. What a way to go.
Damn Bette so fucking sexy and hot!!!!!!
OMG, there it is!!!! And I’m first!!! Off to read this wonderful tale!!! Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
only you can write a scene as sexy as this — you are the Clam-tastic Jo !! lol
You….
so bad!!!!!!
are….
BTW – they definitely need to talk……right on Kit’s desk!!!!! Come on Pit Bull I know you want to….
It seems that Bette has found a way to have her cake and eat it, too. God bless her. And as Marie Antoinette once said, “Let them eat cake!” And anything else that cums to mind. I just hope they don’t lose their heads about it. Un autre morceau de gateau, s’il vous plait. Not a fan of hickeys myself, so I hope that Bette doesn’t resort to doing violence on Tina’s person in revenge. I’m sure I can leave that safely in your hands, Jo. OK, you’ve convinced me, I’m off to reaquaint myself with my Total Gym.
Such a tease, Jo! LOL… I’ve had this huge grin plastered on my face the whole time I was reading! I can’t believe what you can accomplish with just a goodbye, a run, getting dressed and… walking across the Planet! That has to be the biggest room ever! Or is it that this world’s temporal and spacial dimensions are turned upside down when one Ms Bette Porter in Levi’s walks in… And gosh I could just picture those jeans coming up her legs and ass! I love thee for bringing back the Levi’s! Ahem… Sooooo, about this part 2…..
Oh damn… Tina’s SO dead… we should all be that lucky, though.
That was a lot of fun. Tina was a bad girl so I’m sure something good is in store. I’m really looking forward to the next post.
JoMo I love this and your writing – now go and make my gf happy, she keeps babble about a desk???
lmao……i lovvvvvvve this fic…..amazing woman……just amazing….i could feel the love and lust between these two….that is what great writing is all about……
Oh Hell Yeah! Damn that was S-E-X-Y!!! Bette, Bette, Bette! *shaking my head* Hot damn! You’re one hot and sexy babe!
Hey sweetie – I just had to read it again and the scene with Bette (the very sexy feet/ankle woman) entering The Planet is FUCKING AMAZING…….as a reader you could really feel her walking reaaaaaal slow as a panther only having eyes on her prey!!! You’re the best mate xx
NICE! EXCELLENT! BEAUTIFUL! ah…where’s the rest?! LOL! I of course adore Tina’s reaction to Bette it’s frickin amazing..and Shane is right..they have an amazing connection…but that’s only cuz of how you write them! Keep it up!
i could just see Bette walking, my jaw would be on the floor in a second…i was laughing so hard at everybody’s reaction…bring on the dead meat part
Naughty, but oh so nice!!!!
Bette in those tight ass jeans and a sex scene coming up? What a perfect way to start a new chapter, please continue!
OMG! What a great chapter! But such a tease Jo..