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Do you remember when… Chapter 16 – Part 2
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“Absolutely…”
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With a shower made for two completed, a long slow and passionate shower, a shower of two souls, of two women in love…
Bette sat on the cushioned ledge beside the window, the window that was the full length of the suite, the window that gave the view of the New York skyline against the near midnight sky…
“Do you want a robe to put on?” Tina asked from across the room, as she looked at her naked girlfriend, with her back leaning against wall, her long sleek legs along the ledge that she was sat upon. Picture perfect, naked picture perfect…
“T… we are eighty floors up, who is going to see that we are naked…” Bette smiled, she held her hand out, beckoning Tina closer, silently requesting that she too sit and admire the view from their window.
Tina walked closer, smiling as she watched her girlfriends eyes taking in her own nakedness, would she ever tire from looking at Bette watching her, seeing the reaction in Bette’s eyes always made her heart swell with pride, pride that this beautiful, stunning woman had chosen her, maybe chosen was not the correct turn of phrase, there was no choice, they were just ‘meant to be…’
Tina held her hand out, her fingers meeting those of her partner as she stepped closer, their eyes meeting, as they always did, their communication unsaid.
Bette brought Tina’s hand closer to her lips, gently placing a kiss on the back of Tina’s hand as their eyes continued to be mesmerised with one another.
“Sit with me…”
Tina sat in front of Bette, leaning back against the woman who had filled that emptiness within her all those months ago, the emptiness that she hadn’t felt since that first meeting and knew she never would again.
Tina’s eyes looked out to the view before them as Bette wound her arms around her, pulling her in closer, placing a delicate kiss against the temple of the woman in her arms, her own mind turning to the small box hidden behind her, ready and waiting for the clock to strike midnight.
“This view is amazing isn’t it babe…?”
“Unbelievable…”
“Are you still upset that our flight was cancelled…?”
“Only because I still have my application form for the mile high club to complete…” Tina laughed.
“Soon as we’re in the air babe…”
“You better believe it Porter…; it’s one of my Christmas wishes…”
“One of them?”
“Oh yeah, it’s always best to make more than one…!” Tina laughed.
“Really…”
“Absolutely, as soon as the clock strikes midnight, I will be closing my eyes and making my wishes…”
Bette smiled, “you better check the time babe…”
Tina looked over at the clock on the bedside table, reading the illuminated figures of ’11:59’, “oh my god, I have to close them now…” she giggled, closing her eyes tightly and snuggling back into Bette.
Bette reached behind her, retrieving the small black box, popping open the top to reveal the sparkling diamond, holding it in readiness for when Tina had made her wishes…
“Have you made your wishes T…?”
Bette felt the nodding against her chest, “open your eyes baby…”
Tina slowly opened her eyes, opening them as her midnight Christmas wish, brought her arms around her, whispering her words of love into her ear, before placing the small box into her hand…
“Oh my god…” Tina brought her hand to her mouth, her eyes welling with tears as she took in the diamond ring nestled against the black velvet.
She turned looking into the eyes of her partner, the deep dark eyes also glistening with unshed tears, the quiet words of her partner barely audible, “marry me…”
Tina threw her arms around the neck of her partner, the woman who had just proposed, naked… midnight on Christmas Eve, overlooking New York skyline…
“Bette…”
“Yes baby…”
“You know my wishes…?”
“Yeah…”
“They just came true…”
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Thanks Jo, what a welcome surprise!
WOW….That one just gave me goosebumps!…lol….and what a way bring in the new year!….as always excellent writing…and if possible getting even better!…could even make it a 3 part….lol
LOL..BTW..i meant what a way to bring in the New year for the readers!!!An NC17 from you!…Ahem!..ah ya know what i meant!..lol
Congrats on all your new awards. Glad you wrote a NC-17 to end this year. A girl gots a reputation to uphold. ;-)
Personally I’d prefer the Peabody-paid suite to the airplane bathroom, but then I’ve never flown first class. And first class bathrooms have always been the most closely guarded aspect of air travel, even in these security conscious days, so I guess it will remain something of which a girl can only dream. Come to think of it, that goes for Peabody-paid suites as well. Damn! Oops, I think I just let out one of those silent screams. How loud are they, Jo? Happy New Year, girl.
That was VERY VERY romantic!
HAPPY NEW JO! thanks for this quick update and it was a nice surprise. happy new year
Gotta love the service in 1st class!!!! Have a great New Year.
…Oh lord… have mercy…. That was incredible. What a girl wouldn’t do to have one’s wishes fulfilled by Bette…. Congrats on your awards, Jo – much deserved!!! … and a happy New Year to you.
sweetttttttttttttttttttttttt
Okay that proposal beats mine – you’re such a romantic soul :o)) The flying ‘thing’ was way to short if you ask me, but you didn’t LOL. “God there really was something about the look of this woman when she was highly aroused”…..damn I would like to see that!!!!!
That is a wonderful Christmas eve….Welcome back Jo………..
Thank you Jo for posting…what a way to end the year! You have outdone yourself this year with all your stories. Stories that touched us AND stories that made us laugh. You are an awesome writer and I hope you will continue to bless us in 2007. I can hardly wait.
the new year is looking better and better…thanks for this present
what unique way to propose! it’s always a pleasure read your stories! happy new year girl
A lot of people would love to be LH/TK and have JB/BP give them a gift. Happy New Year to you and yours thanks
I just received my last Christmas gift of 2006 and that was a beautifully writen chapter from my favorite author about my favorite couple. What a wonderful way to propose marriage to the one you love, naked high up in the skyline of New York with nothing but the view and a diamond ring. I am jealous of them. I hope that you have a wonderful New Year.
Doggoneit. I finally finish reading and posting and lord-n-behold you posted a chapter of Hindsight. My second gift of the night.
Perfection. *happy sigh*
Awww, that was just so sweet!
Damn that was so beautiful and amazing, love it!!!!!!!!!!
You are such an awesome writer.
First class bathroom…with Tina doing Bette***THUD** Very, very naughty!!Then in front of the window overlooking the NY skyline, naked with diamonds and B & T….love the way you think and write. PPS.
Happy New Year to us. Thanks Jo! Hope you all have a safe and fun New Year’s
Jo, I don’t know how I missed part one of this, but it’s just allowing me to enjoy a triple dip of your wonderful stories! There it so much heat here, as well as romance! Happy New Year to all!!!!!!!!